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wait
for the impact of your weight
i wait
till you can't take it
there's no love exchanged
only time taken
just once, then another
until
last time becomes habit
and i wonder
do i see myself in
instead of under
should we face it
this endless craving
to never have to wait again
Published 6th Oct 2015
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6th Oct 2015 10:47am
I like this but may I suggest you have a typo in the first verse? 'you' should it not be your ? nice first write.I have you on my list of poets.
6th Oct 2015 1:51pm
