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Master's Cum
spreading my onyx wings
so you can see my luscious tits
bouncing them in your face such a tease
though when you get down to business
it gets real with some rough sex
shackle me up deep throat fuck me
until I turn blue sweet asphyxiation
mmm your cock pumping my throat
making me shut the fuck up
while taking the belt to my ass
red welts the Master's kiss
finger fucking my ass
priming it for your cock
it's a tight fit
so you work my opening
then force your way in
pounding me full force
I buck against you
a wild naughty mount
creaming already
my ass pulsating
you're not finished yet
so you enter my tight wet cunt
fisting me brutally for coming without permission
my pussy leaks crimson
as I moan your name
fucked by a Master
of the highest caliber
you cum all over my face
now bitch go clean yourself up
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 29th Sep 2015
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Re: Re. Master's Cum
29th Sep 2015 7:58pm
Re. Master's Cum
Anonymous
29th Sep 2015 8:29pm
Damn, Brenda.. nice submissive piece.. very hot.. with love..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. Master's Cum
29th Sep 2015 9:17pm
Re. Master's Cum
29th Sep 2015 9:13pm
Re: Re. Master's Cum
29th Sep 2015 9:26pm
pleased you liked Poet thank you but I'm the cunt not the maid lol
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re: Re. Master's Cum
29th Sep 2015 11:07pm
It's all part and parcel of how you are seen in this piece
nothing personal to you of course ....
nothing personal to you of course ....
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Re: Re. Master's Cum
29th Sep 2015 11:09pm
Re: Re. Master's Cum
29th Sep 2015 11:15pm
Thx luv
right back at ya
It's hard to read this piece as a Dominant Man and not want to add an extra dimension of power to it .....
Fine work per your usual standards
right back at ya
It's hard to read this piece as a Dominant Man and not want to add an extra dimension of power to it .....
Fine work per your usual standards
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Re: Re. Master's Cum
30th Sep 2015 9:14pm
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Re: Re. Master's Cum
30th Sep 2015 2:33am
Re. Master's Cum
29th Sep 2015 10:34pm
Oh the fine art of fuckery! Special attention paid to my ass please!
Ribald write my dear. Hot as always.
🌹Jennifer
Ribald write my dear. Hot as always.
🌹Jennifer
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Re: Re. Master's Cum
30th Sep 2015 2:34am
Re. Master's Cum
30th Sep 2015 00:02am
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30th Sep 2015 2:35am
Re. Master's Cum
30th Sep 2015 3:12am
Brutal but still a turn on. I just wish your Master would take it a little easier on you and not wear out his welcome, or your pussy for that matter. Pretty sneaky how you came without permission but you paid the price, although fisting might be more of a reward than punishment, all depending. Really enjoyed this wicked and excellent write Crim!
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Re: Re. Master's Cum
30th Sep 2015 5:43am
thank you Sir Crow I'm a naughty girl who enjoys a good fist fucking ;)
with love Crim
with love Crim
Re. Master's Cum
30th Sep 2015 4:03pm
Re: Re. Master's Cum
30th Sep 2015 8:39pm
thank you Kitty for making me smile apologies on the aching cunt :)
with love Crim
with love Crim
Re. Master's Cum
30th Sep 2015 5:31pm
A skillful pleaser, you are. This ink is delicious, and the imagery is lip quivering sweet. Nice little mind-fuck, blue angel
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30th Sep 2015 8:39pm
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Re: Re. Master's Cum
30th Sep 2015 8:41pm
thank you beautiful one you made my week with your love of this ink :)
I love you..
xoxoxo Brenda
I love you..
xoxoxo Brenda
Re. Master's Cum
30th Sep 2015 10:19pm
That was brutal; I cannot believe how hot it was. got my head pounding with vivid images.
Keith
Keith
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Re: Re. Master's Cum
1st Oct 2015 8:23pm
thank you Keith you put a big smile on my face with your comment :)
with love Brenda
with love Brenda
Re. Master's Cum
2nd Oct 2015 00:34am
Again, excellent work - you already know I have difficulty with the whole dom-sub thing. But it is still easy to see the reall skill and passion in this piece :-)
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2nd Oct 2015 3:32pm
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2nd Oct 2015 11:29pm
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4th Oct 2015 7:43am
Re. Master's Cum
3rd Oct 2015 2:29pm
oh lawd *fanning myself* makes me think of those moments when Sir says "you'll breath when i say you can" ltm
brenda, you always bring out the animal in me & i love you for it
xoxox
brenda, you always bring out the animal in me & i love you for it
xoxox
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Re: Re. Master's Cum
4th Oct 2015 7:45am
thank you beautiful Katja couldn't hope for a better response from you made my day :)
love you lady Brenda
love you lady Brenda
Re. Master's Cum
3rd Oct 2015 4:04pm
Damn. You write some hot shit. I need to go take care of "things"....
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Re: Re. Master's Cum
4th Oct 2015 7:47am
Re. Master's Cum
8th Oct 2015 4:55am
do u know
without a condom
as you suggest
cum cums on your face
throat fuck first
then ass
schhhheeee
then vagina striking
okaye that'l be
but since he is bare
all wrong directions
it should have been
in reverse protection
then
twas oaky
go check in
now for AIDS
ass in then in vagina a spin!
without a condom
as you suggest
cum cums on your face
throat fuck first
then ass
schhhheeee
then vagina striking
okaye that'l be
but since he is bare
all wrong directions
it should have been
in reverse protection
then
twas oaky
go check in
now for AIDS
ass in then in vagina a spin!
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Re: Re. Master's Cum
8th Oct 2015 5:09pm
Re. Master's Cum
Anonymous
20th Oct 2015 2:55pm
A master? And done with a girl so quickly? A lovely write dear but a true skilled Master would have you writing pages not just a few verses.
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Re: Re. Master's Cum
20th Oct 2015 4:57pm
Guess you could say he's not a true Dom nor me a true submissive just some fun in bed ;)
love Crim
love Crim
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2nd Dec 2015 3:59pm
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3rd Dec 2015 7:07pm
u wriggle again and again
and again keeps cmmmming
again and again now cumming again
and again keeps cmmmming
again and again now cumming again
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