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Supine
Right now
I'm bitchy
out of sorts
full of retorts and remorse
don't you want
want me
hoarse
Supine before you
hair in your hands
body eager to please
or just tease
tease you
tease me
crave
Rave out of control
Dripping lust
Please oh please ohhhhh Thrust!!!
No! Don't stop, slow down, no! You
must
Quench
Drench
I'm wrenched thoroughly ajar
Just
You must
muss
me up
down
all around
Inside
and out
Ahhh, luv,
DO shout
I promise
I'll scream
and
cream
You know
you're a dream
Soooo
I'm sorry
for the earlier sulk
the extended pout
Except
we both know
(don't we?)
that
You rather fancy
my sassy mouth
my wee bouts of vitriol
and
You've just the thing
to handle such mischief in me
Therefore
no matter
what
comes out of my mouth (whimpers, pleas, I do so like to tease)
You'll have me
Precisely
as You please...
Published 23rd Sep 2015
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23rd Sep 2015 1:48pm
Nice rhythm and smooth lines! Enjoyed it! Way to use your sassy mouth!! Lol! 💕Sissy
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Anonymous
23rd Sep 2015 5:04pm
Savaja,
love how you always keep us on our toes ;-)
enjoyed!
tornado
love how you always keep us on our toes ;-)
enjoyed!
tornado
23rd Sep 2015 9:20pm
Love the rhythm and the clever word play!
I once saw something on tv that superficial-scientifically demonstrated the reasons why sex is the best cure for bitchiness. The only part I actually remember was that there is some sort of enzyme in semen that actually triggers happy chemicals of some sort. (It was a long time ago and I don't honestly remember it clearly, but reading this flickered the glimmer of the memory to mind)
I once saw something on tv that superficial-scientifically demonstrated the reasons why sex is the best cure for bitchiness. The only part I actually remember was that there is some sort of enzyme in semen that actually triggers happy chemicals of some sort. (It was a long time ago and I don't honestly remember it clearly, but reading this flickered the glimmer of the memory to mind)
savaja, oracle mine, you've outdone yourself here, i'm quite trembly as i try make some semblance of an articulate comment. you must needs forgive my rambling, but i tend to lose my faculties when... when... well you know ;)
"Supine before you
hair in your hands
body eager to please
or just tease
tease you
tease me
crave
Rave out of control
Dripping lust
Please oh please ohhhhh Thrust!!!"
^^^^^
tease, yes indeed, but you're damn well versed in the arts
*
i'm going to beg for a reading here, the rhythm just pounds at my pulse points & i simply must have your smooth-as-honey voice doing this justice
(please, thank you, i'll flash you if necessary & probably even if it's not)
xoxox
edit:
ohhhhh my lordi! thank you so much for reading this, oracle mine. i do so adore being stroked by your velvet voice
made my day
*kisses to ya, lovely lady*
"Supine before you
hair in your hands
body eager to please
or just tease
tease you
tease me
crave
Rave out of control
Dripping lust
Please oh please ohhhhh Thrust!!!"
^^^^^
tease, yes indeed, but you're damn well versed in the arts
*
i'm going to beg for a reading here, the rhythm just pounds at my pulse points & i simply must have your smooth-as-honey voice doing this justice
(please, thank you, i'll flash you if necessary & probably even if it's not)
xoxox
edit:
ohhhhh my lordi! thank you so much for reading this, oracle mine. i do so adore being stroked by your velvet voice
made my day
*kisses to ya, lovely lady*
Anonymous
24th Sep 2015 5:15am
*beautiful*
24th Sep 2015 12:57pm
sex/desire......
a battlefield of hidden agendas......
a heart-failed, defeated,
left'a'lone
to do one's duty to
die
a battlefield of hidden agendas......
a heart-failed, defeated,
left'a'lone
to do one's duty to
die
24th Sep 2015 5:03pm
awesome flow of words Savaja... and like the structure too... it's a pleasure to read this wonderful gem :)
16th Oct 2015 10:21pm
Anonymous
17th Oct 2015 4:21am
The ebb and flow of power before during and after, it is funny how we want it and the relinquish...
sexy and teasing
sexy and teasing
18th Oct 2015 3:34am
It was like watching a lion tamer and her lion in a cage. Good suspense and taunts.Spoken words as haunting as ever. And the photo montage added a 3rd dimension.
