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Woke filled by you.
Last night i lay dyin,
Fell asleep to my cryin.
Falling asleep is not something i easily do.
Because as usual dreampt somethin tragic.
I woke sudden, startled in panic.
Woke also to a message, was your voice, and my God it did soothe.
Spoke with it's deep and foreign masculinity,
Your observasions validated 'n turned alive my femininity.
You made woman of me again.
Stimulated, arroused me full clitorally,
And just as imporntantly intellectually 'n litterally..
A mental, sensual mind fuck.
Played your voice back over 'n over.
My fingers explorin under cover.
Sweetness how i wish those fingers were you.
You stretchin my pink wet,
As deep 'n side as you can get.
I'd cry loud again hearin you moan mih name.
Sweet kitten, yes please, cum deep as you could go.
I promise you self, gift you body 'n all a my deep full soul.
Fell asleep to my cryin.
Falling asleep is not something i easily do.
Because as usual dreampt somethin tragic.
I woke sudden, startled in panic.
Woke also to a message, was your voice, and my God it did soothe.
Spoke with it's deep and foreign masculinity,
Your observasions validated 'n turned alive my femininity.
You made woman of me again.
Stimulated, arroused me full clitorally,
And just as imporntantly intellectually 'n litterally..
A mental, sensual mind fuck.
Played your voice back over 'n over.
My fingers explorin under cover.
Sweetness how i wish those fingers were you.
You stretchin my pink wet,
As deep 'n side as you can get.
I'd cry loud again hearin you moan mih name.
Sweet kitten, yes please, cum deep as you could go.
I promise you self, gift you body 'n all a my deep full soul.
Written by
calamitygin
(Jennifer Michael McCurry)
Published 15th Sep 2015
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Re. Woke filled by you.
15th Sep 2015 7:03pm
so beautifully erotic lovely Jennifer..
tender and seductive when someone moves you this way..
love Brenda
tender and seductive when someone moves you this way..
love Brenda
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Thank you my dear lovely soul filled Brenda! Have to catch up on my reading today, exited for more serial killer!!
(lol before i checked twice after readin my comments, saw id put soul gilled filled. With pic of fish smokin cig lmsao)
🚬🐠J
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Anonymous
- Edited 15th Sep 2015 7:09pm
15th Sep 2015 7:08pm
I absolutely loved how you went about constructing this sensuous piece of literary erotic poetry. You gave the poem a mental approach to the afterward physical (if only fingers) release and an ahhh . . .
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15th Sep 2015 8:04pm
Re. Woke filled by you.
15th Sep 2015 8:14pm
You catch the erotic train of thought beautifully. "A mental, sensual mind fuck." You let it flow, and it works. Fine job Jennifer!
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16th Sep 2015 6:04am
Re. Woke filled by you.
15th Sep 2015 10:23pm
I enjoyed the entrance from the dream state into the physical realm. It was moving and real. Eros is speaking directly it seems.
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16th Sep 2015 6:06am
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16th Sep 2015 10:05pm
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16th Sep 2015 10:31pm
Re. Woke filled by you.
17th Sep 2015 3:55am
yesyesyes! admire the way you take the reader on your journey ...from sad crying to crying the big O. * Mental, sensual mindfucks can be delicious and when the lover has a great voice to your hears it becomes miracle a journey.
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17th Sep 2015 9:08am
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Anonymous
17th Sep 2015 8:54am
Wow! Such sensual writing. Somehow you draw the reader under the covers with you Jennifer. Beautifully erotic.
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17th Sep 2015 9:11am
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17th Sep 2015 11:57pm
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18th Sep 2015 2:21pm
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Anonymous
19th Sep 2015 2:56am
Jennifer, beautiful erotic piece.. brilliantly done.. this is art.. into the list it goes.. with love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
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19th Sep 2015 3:25am
Honored doll. Thank you very much. New to your work, but have really enjoyed it!
🚬💋Jennifer
🚬💋Jennifer
Re. Woke filled by you.
19th Sep 2015 8:21am
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19th Sep 2015 9:31am
Re. Woke filled by you.
19th Sep 2015 9:54am
"A mental, sensual mind fuck.
Played your voice back over 'n over.
My fingers explorin under cover.
Sweetness how i wish those fingers were you."
~this one hits so close to heart from all bases creampuff !
The pure shiver & gush power of that voice. grrz + squeak*
..we must be sharing mind space again unknowingly..teehee
Missin your words Jen of my heart.. catchin up the weekend. loves you bad.
~d
Played your voice back over 'n over.
My fingers explorin under cover.
Sweetness how i wish those fingers were you."
~this one hits so close to heart from all bases creampuff !
The pure shiver & gush power of that voice. grrz + squeak*
..we must be sharing mind space again unknowingly..teehee
Missin your words Jen of my heart.. catchin up the weekend. loves you bad.
~d
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19th Sep 2015 1:26pm
Just the right words to see doll. Love your "tee hee"
Love you v much too sweet 💋
Love you v much too sweet 💋
Re. Woke filled by you.
20th Sep 2015 00:46am
You have such away with word it just sends fire thought my vain and makes mind work overtime.
Brilliant ink McCurry
Brilliant ink McCurry
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20th Sep 2015 3:46pm
Re. Woke filled by you.
20th Sep 2015 6:15am
you definitely filled this page full of sexiness in ink... good eye candy to read Jenn :)
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20th Sep 2015 3:48pm
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28th Sep 2015 2:58pm
love the vernacular, really adds a whole 'nother layer to the sensual promiscuity of this one. i'm certainly having fun browsing through your works, jennifer, many a pleasant surprise to be had (:
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Re. Woke filled by you.
28th Sep 2015 3:59pm
Thanks kitten. Thats pretty much my vernacular. Hillbilly grrrrl bread n born. Flattered you are lookin at so many! Love it. Makes me revisit them too which is very nice. So happy you are here.
Read stagheart everyone!
💋Jennifer💋
Read stagheart everyone!
💋Jennifer💋
Re. Woke filled by you.
8th Dec 2015 1:25am
So very sensual!!!
loved your play on words:
"And just as imporntantly intellectually 'n litterally..
A mental, sensual mind fuck. "
Nice rhyme weave with the beginning and ending of the sentences breaking the normal reading experience:
"Woke also to a message, was your voice, and my God it did soothe.
Spoke with it's deep and foreign masculinity,
Your observasions validated 'n turned alive my femininity. "
Very nice, jen
loved your play on words:
"And just as imporntantly intellectually 'n litterally..
A mental, sensual mind fuck. "
Nice rhyme weave with the beginning and ending of the sentences breaking the normal reading experience:
"Woke also to a message, was your voice, and my God it did soothe.
Spoke with it's deep and foreign masculinity,
Your observasions validated 'n turned alive my femininity. "
Very nice, jen
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Re. Woke filled by you.
27th Dec 2015 11:43pm
( responds in a deep masculine voice).....smooth as the last nail from the Marlboro Mans pack...
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