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shadow cry
It's tough to be afraid of being loved
yet not want to be alone
though, sometimes the zoo is too much to handle
even when the tigers play nice at feeding time
so I instinctively resist sublimation
to crawl back to my bitter undeath
in the derelict corners
of a dark heart
for shadows never lie
unless I tell them it's ok
Inspired during a comment on a dear friends poem...
yet not want to be alone
though, sometimes the zoo is too much to handle
even when the tigers play nice at feeding time
so I instinctively resist sublimation
to crawl back to my bitter undeath
in the derelict corners
of a dark heart
for shadows never lie
unless I tell them it's ok
Inspired during a comment on a dear friends poem...
Published 4th Sep 2015
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4th Sep 2015 11:01pm
the shadows never lie,
but they sure make it
hard to see clearly...
but then again the light
can dazzle -
this whole love thing is
tricky...
but the poem's really good..:)
but they sure make it
hard to see clearly...
but then again the light
can dazzle -
this whole love thing is
tricky...
but the poem's really good..:)
5th Sep 2015 00:01am
Hey, I love that, Paul. The hard to see clearly addition was brilliant... Thanks for the visit...
5th Sep 2015 9:43am
7th Sep 2015 6:29pm
6th Sep 2015 11:21pm
ah bless, "a dear friend", you're a funny fucker ltm
jest aside, it was a steller comment, but you're known for that & by that i mean, i know you for it ya knowt
anyhoooos, its a damn good write, eddie...
"It's tough to be afraid of being loved
yet not want to be alone"
... gods yes, especially when polygamy is illegal, right [?]
jest aside, it was a steller comment, but you're known for that & by that i mean, i know you for it ya knowt
anyhoooos, its a damn good write, eddie...
"It's tough to be afraid of being loved
yet not want to be alone"
... gods yes, especially when polygamy is illegal, right [?]
7th Sep 2015 6:33pm
Well, that's what you are to me. And I knowt you get can cranky when people use your name, or picture especially... hah... Wonder who would do that?
There was a few edits, but it's mostly how came out. You will always be the easiest thing for me to write about it seems...
haha, silly goose...
There was a few edits, but it's mostly how came out. You will always be the easiest thing for me to write about it seems...
haha, silly goose...
28th Mar 2016 3:44am
lost my mind to love once....almost killed me....now what remains is out hunting....
