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Warped Perspective
A small caveat in the bathroom mirror:
"Objects may appear larger, and more distorted,
Than they actually are"
A source of wonder, ridicule and confusion
Throughout the entire day
Molehills turn into vast strongholds
While an itch becomes an agony
And one stroke an ecstasy
His muse complains of "mixed feelings"
"Just calm the fuck down," she advises
Reading his ramblings and spill
"You're being a moron
Hold still and I'll blow you
Back in proportion"
This seems only just, in all fairness
In the face of the approaching enemy
They might be giants
But chances are they'll fall.
"Objects may appear larger, and more distorted,
Than they actually are"
A source of wonder, ridicule and confusion
Throughout the entire day
Molehills turn into vast strongholds
While an itch becomes an agony
And one stroke an ecstasy
His muse complains of "mixed feelings"
"Just calm the fuck down," she advises
Reading his ramblings and spill
"You're being a moron
Hold still and I'll blow you
Back in proportion"
This seems only just, in all fairness
In the face of the approaching enemy
They might be giants
But chances are they'll fall.
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Re. Warped Perspective
feel the anxiety of this write Sir Crow..
which I can relate to..
love the ending yes those giants will topple over and fall..
great inking :)
with love Crim
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4th Sep 2015 1:56am
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3rd Sep 2015 4:59pm
Crow, i get very exited when i see a new piece up by you. Never the same thing twice. Luv that. Love this---'Throughout the entire day
Molehills turn into vast strongholds
While an itch becomes an agony
And one stroke an ecstasy "
And this----"You're being a moron
Hold still and I'll blow you
Back in proportion"
I mean.........take a toke on this ink...gooood shit man...lol
⭐🌙
Jennifer
Molehills turn into vast strongholds
While an itch becomes an agony
And one stroke an ecstasy "
And this----"You're being a moron
Hold still and I'll blow you
Back in proportion"
I mean.........take a toke on this ink...gooood shit man...lol
⭐🌙
Jennifer
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4th Sep 2015 1:58am
Re. Warped Perspective
3rd Sep 2015 5:57pm
valium & a blowjoy... if i had gentleman bits, i'd never leave the house
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i felt my heart begin to hammer against its cage while reading this, your anxiety is palpable even if inexplicable to anyone on the outside
a damn fine write, crowfly
xoxox
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i felt my heart begin to hammer against its cage while reading this, your anxiety is palpable even if inexplicable to anyone on the outside
a damn fine write, crowfly
xoxox
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Re: Re. Warped Perspective
4th Sep 2015 2:02am
Didn't mean to startle you. "There's nothing to fear, etc." I say it like a mantra. Sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn't. I say "crimson and clover" over and over to take my mind off it completely. Thanks Katja!
Re. Warped Perspective
3rd Sep 2015 6:55pm
It is funny how the past can seem "larger and more distorted" than it actually is. Most of us are using mirrors handed down to us from others which have been warped and tarnished over years of abuse. This was a great thought provoking piece, Crow.
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4th Sep 2015 2:07am
Even the present isn't perfect. The distortion could run in the family, but there's any number of factors. Once you recognize the source it's easier to defeat (I hope). The mirror here could have come from a carnival funhouse.
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Anonymous
3rd Sep 2015 8:03pm
I like this, and your take on your subject. It is fun to go after the absurd every so often, isn't it?

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4th Sep 2015 2:09am
Re. Warped Perspective
3rd Sep 2015 10:03pm
"Molehills turn into vast strongholds
While an itch becomes an agony
And one stroke an ecstasy"
~this is a feeling I know well.. that one lil tease/"stroke" of *eureka that we wait for, heart ready
to listen and ink it. Your works throughout are right-on targeted examples of fickle muse/fickle woman.
luv that double interp..
"You're being a moron
Hold still and I'll blow you
Back in proportion"
~you *hadta know I'd have giggle here.. is your perfect forte to bring them..ty I do believe you have
a moody high-maintenance muse--that possibly hangs out in those stubborn crevices where cunty muses go.
been begging mine for luvins to little avail. feel the Deep, past the banter here darlins..hughugs*
Sensing heavy frustrations as well as the angsty down times. the mirror warning at beginning makes me
smile, tho- to know that you foresee these down times a bit.[ a positive]
The mirror does warp & I'm not a fan of, soo.. I demand you luv on your reflection more, worthy one! ;)
aaand I've now gotta 'meatloaf' song in my head on way out.
you pen *this feeling in coveted Crow-speak..& is always enjoyed.
~d
While an itch becomes an agony
And one stroke an ecstasy"
~this is a feeling I know well.. that one lil tease/"stroke" of *eureka that we wait for, heart ready
to listen and ink it. Your works throughout are right-on targeted examples of fickle muse/fickle woman.
luv that double interp..
"You're being a moron
Hold still and I'll blow you
Back in proportion"
~you *hadta know I'd have giggle here.. is your perfect forte to bring them..ty I do believe you have
a moody high-maintenance muse--that possibly hangs out in those stubborn crevices where cunty muses go.
been begging mine for luvins to little avail. feel the Deep, past the banter here darlins..hughugs*
Sensing heavy frustrations as well as the angsty down times. the mirror warning at beginning makes me
smile, tho- to know that you foresee these down times a bit.[ a positive]
The mirror does warp & I'm not a fan of, soo.. I demand you luv on your reflection more, worthy one! ;)
aaand I've now gotta 'meatloaf' song in my head on way out.
you pen *this feeling in coveted Crow-speak..& is always enjoyed.
~d
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4th Sep 2015 2:17am
But no muse is bad news. Need at least one in my corner or I go to pieces.
Thanks for the encouragement regarding my mirror! I'll keep it in mind whenever I pause and reflect. And thank you for your detailed, fun comment Darksighs. This makes my night!
Thanks for the encouragement regarding my mirror! I'll keep it in mind whenever I pause and reflect. And thank you for your detailed, fun comment Darksighs. This makes my night!
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Anonymous
3rd Sep 2015 10:49pm
Sir Crow, I honestly enjoyed this piece. . .particularly the inward perspective. . .Warped?. . .Hmm. . .Common, perhaps. . .But Brilliant this piece is. . .Enjoyed. . .xoxo, Devlin:)

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4th Sep 2015 2:20am
Re. Warped Perspective
4th Sep 2015 00:55am
It's all a matter of perspective they say... but when that perspective is warped, well then who the hell is responsible for the actions we take? Indeed, some things in our minds seem to be blown way out of proportion once reality sets in and we come to find what we may have feared may not have needed to be feared at all, or maybe even should have been embraced... a blessing. All a matter of perspective. :)
Michael
Michael
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Re: Re. Warped Perspective
4th Sep 2015 2:26am
I agree. The biggest fear is that of the unknown, at least for me. Having as many of the facts as possible, "shedding light on the subject," helps enormously. Then, yes, what was dreaded might be embraced. Might turn out to be rewarding. Thanks Michael!
Re. Warped Perspective
4th Sep 2015 1:01am
I like a lot of your poem and the way you is brilliant and this poem is well written but Man reading this piece gave me a is my anxiety
Thanks for shearing
Thanks for shearing
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Re: Re. Warped Perspective
4th Sep 2015 2:28am
One problem with fear is that it can be contagious, so don't take me too seriously. Thanks DevilsPoet!
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4th Sep 2015 3:48am
Re. Warped Perspective
4th Sep 2015 3:59am
Hi Crow.....you always amaze me with every write......I think at times I look into a mirror of deception......xo :)
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Re. Warped Perspective
4th Sep 2015 5:28am
AHHhhh...Crowfly,...this piece presents such a vivid picture of a ( slightly ) distorted introspection...though subtly 'disguised' throughout by the poet's (your?) wavering, perception of the uncertain.
It's soo very true--indeed--how our fear of what we cannot completely understand, or control, causes us to view our existence as though we were gazing into one of those crazy 'fun-house' mirrors...( your comparison.....sooo spot on!)
You have such an intriguing, awesome ability in expressing intense emotional moments!
....And as for your 'giants'.....welll...when i read this, i couldn't help but think of you as a sort of modern Don Quixote....facing your own personal obstacles.... (attacking your own 'windmills' ...your own 'giants'.....) Of course, regarding those 'giants' ....wellllll.......don't be afraid to attack them straight on! ( 'cause after all, "the bigger they are, the harder they fall! ")
Sioch`ain leat, mo Chara! xo
It's soo very true--indeed--how our fear of what we cannot completely understand, or control, causes us to view our existence as though we were gazing into one of those crazy 'fun-house' mirrors...( your comparison.....sooo spot on!)
You have such an intriguing, awesome ability in expressing intense emotional moments!
....And as for your 'giants'.....welll...when i read this, i couldn't help but think of you as a sort of modern Don Quixote....facing your own personal obstacles.... (attacking your own 'windmills' ...your own 'giants'.....) Of course, regarding those 'giants' ....wellllll.......don't be afraid to attack them straight on! ( 'cause after all, "the bigger they are, the harder they fall! ")
Sioch`ain leat, mo Chara! xo
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