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Wicked Unity
My lips were molded for you [I just know..]
palm-held, inhaling.. feeling your growth.
Hot tongue to base, up-licking full vein,
exhaling moistly on my mouth-stains.
Purring low to your wetted thick tip,
fingers fondle charmed sack as I flick.
Absorbing pleasure ~eyes on your face~
a nipped nibble.. lashing as I taste.
Greedy lips.. no pre-love drop wasted.
[this witch craves your twitch- never fakin'!]
Ungently moving silk over steel shaft,
small fisted suckle slow-slow.. then fast.
Open throat "mewing" for your deep push,
strong palms control pace, bringing thigh gush.
Head dipped down to encompass your length,
hips thrust on tongue-ball, tickling up-sink.
Pressure sweet, dark greens urging fierce slide,
fiending to swallow.. reflex aside.
To watch your abandon, feels so right ..
fucking to oblivion.. lips puckered tight.
Unity ..forehead to your tummy,
smooth throat strokes for warm wicked honey.
Firm hands pulling me back just in time,
pout rubbing tip.. ~paint me in dark sighs~
Gawds-damn! ..licking my fingers so bold..
[..to taste you again.. I'd glow, I just know!]
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Re: Re. Wicked Unity
3rd Sep 2015 1:32am
So damn good to see you here, I'm humbled by your iconic presence ;)
ty so much for the support.. I hope you have a sweet nite..
~d
ty so much for the support.. I hope you have a sweet nite..
~d
Re. Wicked Unity
I say got dadamned!!! 😈 Hot f ing head T-- jeeeeezus--- the looking up and batting those lashed peeps 👀at him while you---"Hot tongue 👅to base, up-licking full vein,
exhaling moistly on my mouth-stains.
Purring😹 😻low to your wetted thick tip,
fingers fondle charmed sack as I flick.
Absorbing pleasure ~eyes on your face"Open throat "mewing" for your deep push,GawJ..licking my fingers so bold..
[..to taste you again.. I'd glow, I just know!] "
🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾
Left little kitten tracks all over this 🍰
Just killing me an any one who reads softly, with this "hard" write!
And its doubtful he survived with out serious temp paralysis after----- id say about 5 minutes worth of ass tight muscle shakes and could not move otherwise!
But there still remains your typical, a word rarely associated with you ever in my mind T-- elegant and perfectly finessed words.
Very very nice sweet sister in sighs right now---💋💋💋
🍑🐟
J
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Re: Re. Wicked Unity
3rd Sep 2015 1:43am
Sexy Jen of pen- my smile? endless. you have tickled my yummy spots ladyluvs!
I am feelin the loves in big-hot ways and sendin em back with dark sparkles...
Sweeter still.. then you throw this at me:... ~~> "And its doubtful he survived with out serious
temp paralysis after----- id say about 5 minutes worth of ass tight muscle shakes and could
not move otherwise! "...<~~**thisss makes me wanna kiss your dirty mouth fer the image you put in
my head of perfect aftermath..omfg!
you gotts me a-fukin-purrz. So luvzzz you & your lil kitten tracks on my page!!
~d
I am feelin the loves in big-hot ways and sendin em back with dark sparkles...
Sweeter still.. then you throw this at me:... ~~> "And its doubtful he survived with out serious
temp paralysis after----- id say about 5 minutes worth of ass tight muscle shakes and could
not move otherwise! "...<~~**thisss makes me wanna kiss your dirty mouth fer the image you put in
my head of perfect aftermath..omfg!
you gotts me a-fukin-purrz. So luvzzz you & your lil kitten tracks on my page!!
~d
Re. Wicked Unity
2nd Sep 2015 3:28pm
Lol I second Calamity's enthusiastic
commentary n add Dayyyuummmnnn ME next plz!! lol
commentary n add Dayyyuummmnnn ME next plz!! lol
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Re: Re. Wicked Unity
3rd Sep 2015 1:49am
Good eve naughty mister..I very much adore the visit.. and yeps, we gotsa expect
hawt words from Jen.. ~~> I don't think she can help but be adorable.[ssshh..we won't tell her!]
lmsao*.. hugs & ty m'dear,
~d
hawt words from Jen.. ~~> I don't think she can help but be adorable.[ssshh..we won't tell her!]
lmsao*.. hugs & ty m'dear,
~d
Re. Wicked Unity
2nd Sep 2015 4:02pm
Re: Re. Wicked Unity
3rd Sep 2015 1:53am
Lol.. at the kah-winky-dink of your apropos call on line..bc I did ponder it as title..
My thankin's, dear lady, sweet nite to you!
~d
My thankin's, dear lady, sweet nite to you!
~d
Re. Wicked Unity
2nd Sep 2015 5:51pm
fuck me and hot damn this was a sexy inking lovely d~
these lines left me creaming ;)
"Pressure sweet, dark greens urging fierce slide,
fiending to swallow.. reflex aside.
To watch your abandon, feels so right ..
fucking to oblivion.. lips puckered tight."
mmm delicious brava beautiful :)
with love Crim
these lines left me creaming ;)
"Pressure sweet, dark greens urging fierce slide,
fiending to swallow.. reflex aside.
To watch your abandon, feels so right ..
fucking to oblivion.. lips puckered tight."
mmm delicious brava beautiful :)
with love Crim
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Re: Re. Wicked Unity
3rd Sep 2015 2:07am
Yes, please & thanx you, I say to your first line, lovely Crim de la crème. You brighten and
pulse my page every damn time! wishing you sweet nite hours hunnies ;)
luvz and ruff maulin,
~d
pulse my page every damn time! wishing you sweet nite hours hunnies ;)
luvz and ruff maulin,
~d
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Re: Re. Wicked Unity
3rd Sep 2015 2:34am
Omfg my Sissy...I luvs the percoceted sweet Taryn OFK.. slayer of vein [oohh new dubbs!]
and it rhymes!.. we might get a poem outta that one ;)
You bring my squeaks everly with..~~>"making me wish I had them boy parts" oh ha's!
--That you saw the commitment 'midst all handlin.. makes you purrrfect.
I'm so grateful fer you.. [but you knowitt!] smirks*
evermaulin you bk ruffly wif luvs sister-mine,
~d
and it rhymes!.. we might get a poem outta that one ;)
You bring my squeaks everly with..~~>"making me wish I had them boy parts" oh ha's!
--That you saw the commitment 'midst all handlin.. makes you purrrfect.
I'm so grateful fer you.. [but you knowitt!] smirks*
evermaulin you bk ruffly wif luvs sister-mine,
~d
Re. Wicked Unity
2nd Sep 2015 8:43pm
You're a sorceress of oral pleasures, Darksighs.
"Ungently moving silk over steel shaft,
small fisted suckle slow-slow.. then fast.
Open throat "mewing" for your deep push, "
You bring your words to bear and I can damn near feel it. Wonderful erotica in your own very distinctive language. Loved this!
"Ungently moving silk over steel shaft,
small fisted suckle slow-slow.. then fast.
Open throat "mewing" for your deep push, "
You bring your words to bear and I can damn near feel it. Wonderful erotica in your own very distinctive language. Loved this!
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Re: Re. Wicked Unity
3rd Sep 2015 3:09am
You are making me shiny eyed w/the honor of "sorceress".. and grins to my 'language'.. figured I had
not slayed nearly enough verbs & nouns lately..eg/lol
and? hyphen abuse should be considered its own kink..that is a wicked truth! *smirk-smirk
Sweet thanx dear Crow.. always enjoy your warming thoughts on my playfuls. I guiltily hacked at this
one fer days and forced the 'back away & post.' so your words are reassure..tyty
hugggs misters..
~d
not slayed nearly enough verbs & nouns lately..eg/lol
and? hyphen abuse should be considered its own kink..that is a wicked truth! *smirk-smirk
Sweet thanx dear Crow.. always enjoy your warming thoughts on my playfuls. I guiltily hacked at this
one fer days and forced the 'back away & post.' so your words are reassure..tyty
hugggs misters..
~d
Re. Wicked Unity
2nd Sep 2015 11:14pm
last word, line three *coughcough choke* weak-kneed, but this goes without saying by now, no [?] ltm
*
had to resist the urge to be stretching leisurely like a koshka on a tin roof throughout this, mine devilish sis of smutty spills. all wicked feminine wiles on display here to stunning effect ...
"Ungently moving silk over steel shaft,
small fisted suckle slow-slow.. then fast.
Open throat "mewing" for your deep push,
strong palms control pace, bringing thigh gush."
^^^^
ohh yes, that right there ;) *throaty purrrrs*
... you, of all things wanton & kitten clawed, have outdone yourself. must needs wake daddy, my princess parts are tingling
nuzzles & noseboops
xoxox
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Re: Re. Wicked Unity
3rd Sep 2015 3:25am
*twisted squeaks* my sister-loves! from vein.. yes, I soo knew your next thought would move to
those palms.. is sweet 'flicking' bliss.. Such a kindred smuttie brain darlinK.. I think we have the
perfect lil circle of appreciation with us three. I call us KTT's.. eg.
I am much obliged to your princess parts in tingle.. makes my cuervo smooth & my smoke sweet..
indecent maulins, heavily a'purrzz,
~d
those palms.. is sweet 'flicking' bliss.. Such a kindred smuttie brain darlinK.. I think we have the
perfect lil circle of appreciation with us three. I call us KTT's.. eg.
I am much obliged to your princess parts in tingle.. makes my cuervo smooth & my smoke sweet..
indecent maulins, heavily a'purrzz,
~d
Re. Wicked Unity
3rd Sep 2015 00:59am
A Very erotic piece of poemography you have created here I had to tale a cold shower after I read your work of wicked wonders love it
Thank for shearing
Thank for shearing
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Re: Re. Wicked Unity
3rd Sep 2015 3:33am
I am everly grateful fer the read, Devils of P!...sending you wicked curtsies..
and a'smirk at the cali water rationing. lol. have a stellar nite m'friend!
~d
and a'smirk at the cali water rationing. lol. have a stellar nite m'friend!
~d
Re. Wicked Unity
absolutely too hot for words to express! beginning to end i was sweating bullets hehe :D
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Re: Re. Wicked Unity
3rd Sep 2015 8:50pm
We must keep heart rates up, yes?.. eg
I thank you so much fer the read m'friend.. appreciate you everly!
wishing shine on your hours, mistah Magics ;)
~d
I thank you so much fer the read m'friend.. appreciate you everly!
wishing shine on your hours, mistah Magics ;)
~d
Re. Wicked Unity
3rd Sep 2015 6:30am
Re: Re. Wicked Unity
3rd Sep 2015 8:57pm
Sweet hellz.. the twitch is a beautiful thing. That shud be on billboards..lol.
now I must maul you in hugs Sirz o D.. is an awesome smile your presence brings!
tippin my witchy-fit coffee to your saxx darlin ;)
~d
now I must maul you in hugs Sirz o D.. is an awesome smile your presence brings!
tippin my witchy-fit coffee to your saxx darlin ;)
~d
Re. Wicked Unity
3rd Sep 2015 2:34pm
DarkSIGHS okay, I just want to get screwed after reading this, the passion is heightened with each line,
And the climax couldn't be described in better words
Ungently moving silk over steel shaft,
small fisted suckle slow-slow.. then fast.
Open throat "mewing" for your deep push,
strong palms control pace, bringing thigh gush.
Head dipped down to encompass your length,
hips thrust on tongue-ball, tickling up-sink.
Pressure sweet, dark greens urging fierce slide,
fiending to swallow.. reflex aside.
To watch your abandon, feels so right ..
fucking to oblivion.. lips puckered tight.
God is this for real? I wonder if this ecstasy is better written or experienced, either way,
you prove your self again as a flawless artist, your diction just splendid.
And the climax couldn't be described in better words
Ungently moving silk over steel shaft,
small fisted suckle slow-slow.. then fast.
Open throat "mewing" for your deep push,
strong palms control pace, bringing thigh gush.
Head dipped down to encompass your length,
hips thrust on tongue-ball, tickling up-sink.
Pressure sweet, dark greens urging fierce slide,
fiending to swallow.. reflex aside.
To watch your abandon, feels so right ..
fucking to oblivion.. lips puckered tight.
God is this for real? I wonder if this ecstasy is better written or experienced, either way,
you prove your self again as a flawless artist, your diction just splendid.
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Re: Re. Wicked Unity
3rd Sep 2015 9:09pm
Omg..I second the damn urge!
you have me in gasping fits.. of grin and awwes, as you've taken the time here.
tyty sweet lady..
I sat on this one a bit so I'm vera happy was well received. I'd have to say, the written
& physical as one wud be my gd perfect bliss.. eg
adorin your support, Victoria.. hughugs
~d
you have me in gasping fits.. of grin and awwes, as you've taken the time here.
tyty sweet lady..
I sat on this one a bit so I'm vera happy was well received. I'd have to say, the written
& physical as one wud be my gd perfect bliss.. eg
adorin your support, Victoria.. hughugs
~d
Re. Wicked Unity
Anonymous
3rd Sep 2015 7:38pm
Oh my, this is what I have been missing and why I had to return. I'm in a full sweat!
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Re: Re. Wicked Unity
3rd Sep 2015 9:15pm
...you've got me squeakin happy to see you back Jerry! oh yays..
*dabbin that brow fer u dear ;)
ty fer the visit, you must *Know you gotts major cali luvs..
~T
*dabbin that brow fer u dear ;)
ty fer the visit, you must *Know you gotts major cali luvs..
~T
Re. Wicked Unity
4th Sep 2015 6:54pm
Re: Re. Wicked Unity
7th Sep 2015 10:35pm
Sweet luvs to you darlin.. I can do nothin but smile seein you here! ty ;)
ruff *mwahs
~d
ruff *mwahs
~d
Re. Wicked Unity
5th Sep 2015 11:16pm
"forehead to your tummy, "
This. This made me cum to your attention. But all of this was hot! I am not sure how much I can comment without showing you my reaction.
This. This made me cum to your attention. But all of this was hot! I am not sure how much I can comment without showing you my reaction.
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Re: Re. Wicked Unity
7th Sep 2015 10:45pm
Oh dark *giggles, wicked misters.. you pegged one of my starting/fav lines..
worked-it all around this and one other.. will not peep 'bout the other line neither.. lol.
witchly curtsies to your attention & reaction, my muse is a'smile deeply, ty.
~d
worked-it all around this and one other.. will not peep 'bout the other line neither.. lol.
witchly curtsies to your attention & reaction, my muse is a'smile deeply, ty.
~d
Re. Wicked Unity
7th May 2021 11:28am