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If Gods ruled the world
If Gods ruled the world
No more beaurocracy
Or red-tape stupidity
Falsified democracy
Pointless monarchy
Fat-cat oligarchy
Karma meritocracy?
Merely simplicity
Possibly insanity
Unfettered creativity
Endless possibility
Ruled by tyranny
Of true divinity
Materially existing
Perfectly directing
Endless placating
Freedom inflating
Liberal mating
Minimal hating
End of dictating
Passion sating
Stricture slating
Highest rating
When Gods rule the world.
No more beaurocracy
Or red-tape stupidity
Falsified democracy
Pointless monarchy
Fat-cat oligarchy
Karma meritocracy?
Merely simplicity
Possibly insanity
Unfettered creativity
Endless possibility
Ruled by tyranny
Of true divinity
Materially existing
Perfectly directing
Endless placating
Freedom inflating
Liberal mating
Minimal hating
End of dictating
Passion sating
Stricture slating
Highest rating
When Gods rule the world.
Published 18th Nov 2009
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18th Nov 2009 9:42pm
its a bit of a tongu-twister, but good luck anyway. Give Castro my kindest regards.
25th Dec 2009 7:10am
hahaha good write , yeah I kind of pick this up and say 'fuck' I missed that one its my kind of thing ,and its great to see someone with an attack to word, who isn't afraid to assault them to a G.B.H style of sorting them out .And basically showing a control and love for them so excellently and eloquently . Yeah Right On . hahaha Take care ...........Paul .
25th Dec 2009 7:15am
I forgot like a t**t to say my favoured extract of your fine verse was this part , in particular that is .
Freedom inflating
Liberal mating
Minimal hating
End of dictating
VERY GOOD ! again ! Take care mate ,,, Paul
Freedom inflating
Liberal mating
Minimal hating
End of dictating
VERY GOOD ! again ! Take care mate ,,, Paul
Anonymous
10th Nov 2012 6:39am
Found this by Random Poem. A vintage Viddax. Message still applies three years later and will for the long term. Well done!
10th Nov 2012 11:33pm
And like all Viddax it requires background information. Still poignant but if I was to write it today it would be vastly different.
