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Just Outside of Reno
Following a sequence of red arrows
Spray painted on desert rocks
Guidance for a lost cowboy
Driving his Mustang from L.A.
A right turn through a chain link gate
And pull into a gravel parking lot
Then buzzed through the front door
The languid ladies line up
Dressed in the latest lingerie
Offering the most tantalizing choice
But he settles on Coco
A dark-skinned beauty with midnight hair
Who takes him gently by the hand
And leads him to a boudoir with a lava lamp
There takes his cock and cleanses it
And finally talks price
A mere fifty for a "half-and-half"
Agreed. (All he can afford)
So the prelude of a partial blow
And then her deft climb on top
There she rides him slowly 'til he comes
Smiling sweetly down
Coco next hands him her business card
Noting his peace and satisfaction
Then her adios and parting whisper
"Remember me..."
Spray painted on desert rocks
Guidance for a lost cowboy
Driving his Mustang from L.A.
A right turn through a chain link gate
And pull into a gravel parking lot
Then buzzed through the front door
The languid ladies line up
Dressed in the latest lingerie
Offering the most tantalizing choice
But he settles on Coco
A dark-skinned beauty with midnight hair
Who takes him gently by the hand
And leads him to a boudoir with a lava lamp
There takes his cock and cleanses it
And finally talks price
A mere fifty for a "half-and-half"
Agreed. (All he can afford)
So the prelude of a partial blow
And then her deft climb on top
There she rides him slowly 'til he comes
Smiling sweetly down
Coco next hands him her business card
Noting his peace and satisfaction
Then her adios and parting whisper
"Remember me..."
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Re. Just Outside of Reno
24th Aug 2015 6:35pm
mmm loves this sultry atmosphere write..
so seductive is you ink Sir Crow..
with love Crim
so seductive is you ink Sir Crow..
with love Crim
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Re: Re. Just Outside of Reno
24th Aug 2015 7:36pm
"Summertime, and the living is easy..." Every time I hear the word "sultry" I think of that song. Could be Reno, could be anywhere. Thanks Crim!
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Re: Re. Just Outside of Reno
24th Aug 2015 7:38pm
I honestly didn't want to leave. Think I fell for Coco a bit. Oh well.... Thanks Taryn!
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Anonymous
24th Aug 2015 11:03pm
Suddenly I had flashbacks of the Mustang Ranch's documentary. . .and I was a teenager back then. . .Ouch!. . .Excellent ink, Sir Fly. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
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Re: Re. Just Outside of Reno
25th Aug 2015 1:39am
Thanks Devlin. This is actually Mustang Bridge Ranch. Never made it to the original, the legendary establishment in that doc. Hear they closed it down, sad to say.
Re. Just Outside of Reno
25th Aug 2015 2:20am
This went down easy after a very tiring day. Your words hold a soothing edge in almost all I've read of yours. It's always about choice. Once in awhile, a man makes the right one. :)
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Re: Re. Just Outside of Reno
25th Aug 2015 8:24pm
Thank you Michael! I kind of obsess about flow, and often rhyme and meter. Sometimes too often. I'm glad it reads well.
Re. Just Outside of Reno
25th Aug 2015 3:43pm
What a fine transaction, sweet Crow! *cha-ching aaand a business card.. I loved this!
heard all the wild stories from the men-folk in my family back when the original Ranch was still ..um.. bumpin/grindin' ?! ;)
"Guidance for a lost cowboy" ... this one was hiiighly amusing [re" the red arrows].. you came close to makin' this an
awww of solace line, the wit of your pen has great affects on m'morning coffee..
...and?.. don't think I have not noticed how you excel at story-telling! The details, characters & great mood-sets..yep.
your ability to lay-out precise stories, keeps me coming back for the next adventure.
be well sweetie!
~d
heard all the wild stories from the men-folk in my family back when the original Ranch was still ..um.. bumpin/grindin' ?! ;)
"Guidance for a lost cowboy" ... this one was hiiighly amusing [re" the red arrows].. you came close to makin' this an
awww of solace line, the wit of your pen has great affects on m'morning coffee..
...and?.. don't think I have not noticed how you excel at story-telling! The details, characters & great mood-sets..yep.
your ability to lay-out precise stories, keeps me coming back for the next adventure.
be well sweetie!
~d
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Re: Re. Just Outside of Reno
25th Aug 2015 8:33pm
This was my one time going to a "house of ill repute." Actually paid just twenty rather than fifty dollars, back in the '70s. Prices have gone up due to inflation (or erection). I try to tell some kind of tale, and love to hear one. Thank you Darksighs!
Re. Just Outside of Reno
25th Aug 2015 11:08pm
I heard about this place. Never been...but they have written about it. Even a musical written for it. Always wondered what it would be like....now I have an idea....
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Re: Re. Just Outside of Reno
26th Aug 2015 00:52am
This is actually about a lesser "house" called Mustang Bridge Ranch, not the legendary Mustang Ranch. They included the "Bridge" in their name, but were obviously trying to capitalize on the success of the original. I wasn't paying much attention at the time. I just wanted to get laid. Thanks DPW!
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Anonymous
28th Aug 2015 3:07am
Oh Crow what a seductive write......intriguing lines all the way thru......super enjoyed this......you're awesome......xo :)
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30th Aug 2015 00:47am