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Sacred Contracts II: Concepción
I melted in love with the southern hemisphere
sleeping against the chest of an active volcano
fusing my glands sticky against the humid Universe
of an island that I never wanted to leave again.
Objects mirrored above me grew into reflections
closer than my fingers could reach; I watched light
chase the ruddy-capped nightingale, its flight parting
the first cigarette of the lake's smokey morning breath.
A desire for water flows through me and it's cliche
for a reason; it's older than I am and a child plays in it
every day. Love isn't contained, you see; it's rising space,
reaching up to tug the bear rug from under God's feet.
The pain is immeasurably steep and I won't pretend
it's not. Regardless, I light fireworks over my lake
until the stillness is covered with curling ringlets
of color too wondrous to think beyond the sight.
When faced with a deck that will rent your heart despite
the choice; refuse to hold court as the waiting mistress.
Choose the Lovers and the Moon instead; be a feral
animal; mate for survival against the volcano's chest.
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Re. Sacred Contracts II: Isla de Ometepe
Anonymous
21st Aug 2015 7:49am
this is a brilliant read, thanks for that.
the last stanza reads like prophecy. great write!
:)
the last stanza reads like prophecy. great write!
:)

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Re: Re. Sacred Contracts II: Isla de Ometepe
21st Aug 2015 8:01am
Re. Sacred Contracts II: Concepción
21st Aug 2015 1:18pm
Mmm, a beauty.
The first cigarette of the lakes morning breathe 🚬
Great fucking line.
The first cigarette of the lakes morning breathe 🚬
Great fucking line.
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Re: Re. Sacred Contracts II: Concepción
22nd Aug 2015 2:31am
Re. Sacred Contracts II: Concepción
21st Aug 2015 1:44pm
Re: Re. Sacred Contracts II: Concepción
22nd Aug 2015 2:31am
Re. Sacred Contracts II: Concepción
21st Aug 2015 10:24pm
Breathtaking poem. Abounding in a love for Nature her lushness and maybe her pride. I feel you are in a sort of greenhouse captured by you one true love and mesmerized by her. Excellent, Shauna
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Re: Re. Sacred Contracts II: Concepción
22nd Aug 2015 2:36am
If I could marry nature, particularly storms, I would that they'd shake me out of complacency with their thunderous voice, drench the dryness hope can become at times, and paint me dry; a rainbow with many colors in my hair, should I ever fall into a numbing state of fair-weathered normality.
Thank you for your time and words.
Thank you for your time and words.
Re. Sacred Contracts II: Concepción
22nd Aug 2015 3:06am
the melting, the merging w/many aspects of nature is felt; large as love & small as the universe...
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Re: Re. Sacred Contracts II: Concepción
22nd Aug 2015 3:14am
Re. Sacred Contracts II: Concepción
this is pristine ...the nature, love,survival n the struggle.....
U amaze me each tym i read n feel ur words as they flow like that uncontained space n water n love!
a wholesome capsulation , with a driving message as u put that over nothing but the burning volcano's chest in a stern last stanza..
but the penultimate stanza worked more magic for me like a continuum of cuckoo's haunting tones yet loaded with a drawing melody,..a serenity overall:)
"The pain is immeasurably steep and I won't pretend
it's not. Regardless, I light fireworks over my lake
until the stillness is covered with curling ringlets
of color too wondrous to think beyond the sight of it. "
v.well done..keep sharing xx<3
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Re: Re. Sacred Contracts II: Concepción
23rd Aug 2015 3:27pm
U amaze me each tym i read n feel ur words as they flow like that uncontained space n water n love!
Thank you for that, Uma. And your generous time and words. xo
Thank you for that, Uma. And your generous time and words. xo
Re. Sacred Contracts II: Concepción
22nd Aug 2015 8:12am
"When faced with a deck that will rent your heart despite
the choice; refuse to hold court as the waiting mistress.
Choose the Lovers and the Moon instead; be a feral
animal; mate for survival against an active volcano's chest."
~as always, your end unwraps, rewraps, then reveals all in new light.
my heart feels yours & we light fireworks together, my dear one. I applaud and shiny weep through this melding all
at once. hugs to you, the volcano being an awe-empowered metaphor. very much enjoyed your Part I of this survival
tale as well.. adds depths here. *mwahs m'lady A,
~d
the choice; refuse to hold court as the waiting mistress.
Choose the Lovers and the Moon instead; be a feral
animal; mate for survival against an active volcano's chest."
~as always, your end unwraps, rewraps, then reveals all in new light.
my heart feels yours & we light fireworks together, my dear one. I applaud and shiny weep through this melding all
at once. hugs to you, the volcano being an awe-empowered metaphor. very much enjoyed your Part I of this survival
tale as well.. adds depths here. *mwahs m'lady A,
~d
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Re: Re. Sacred Contracts II: Concepción
23rd Aug 2015 3:30pm
my heart feels yours & we light fireworks together, my dear one. I applaud and shiny weep through this melding all at once.
Thank you, darksighing one. You're always more than generous with your time and words. xo
Thank you, darksighing one. You're always more than generous with your time and words. xo
Re. Sacred Contracts II: Concepción
22nd Aug 2015 9:12am
'Objects mirrored above me grew into reflections
closer than my fingers could reach; I watched light
chase the ruddy-capped nightingale, its flight parting
the first cigarette of the lake's smokey morning breath.'
This stanza is captivating. It was easy to enjoy this poem, the line breaks aid the reader rather than being there for effect. There's a pattern under the lines that I thought was clever. Another wonderfully picked picture to inspire. Write on!
closer than my fingers could reach; I watched light
chase the ruddy-capped nightingale, its flight parting
the first cigarette of the lake's smokey morning breath.'
This stanza is captivating. It was easy to enjoy this poem, the line breaks aid the reader rather than being there for effect. There's a pattern under the lines that I thought was clever. Another wonderfully picked picture to inspire. Write on!
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Re: Re. Sacred Contracts II: Concepción
23rd Aug 2015 3:32pm
It was easy to enjoy this poem, the line breaks aid the reader rather than being there for effect. There's a pattern under the lines that I thought was clever.
You must be pattern perceptive. I always enjoy those who pick that up. Thank you for your time and kindness. xo
You must be pattern perceptive. I always enjoy those who pick that up. Thank you for your time and kindness. xo
Re. Sacred Contracts II: Concepción
24th Aug 2015 7:02pm
Certainly have a way with description which can tease an image from the mind.
grand job, lady
grand job, lady
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24th Aug 2015 9:02pm
Re. Sacred Contracts II: Concepción
5th Mar 2017 4:08am
I agree with Lepperochan. Your metaphors are soulful and translate like song. Sweet to the mind.
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