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Gutter Slut
As I drink my whiskey
looking to the skies
for some relief
the clouds hold nothing but puss
putrid rain falls on my diseased mind
taking me down dark roads internally
if you're looking for something pretty from this girl
you won't get it
I want to be ugly
gutter slut with beastly men sweating
on me as they fuck me
love is a lie so I toss it in the trash
I'm cunt of a bitch
loves hard living
the dirty side of life
taking a drag off a cigarette
I look at my smoke stained walls
yellowing streaks look like a work of art
my ass is something to behold
after a good pounding
a black hole staring back at you
feeling sleazy I spread the page with my cum
as I ink out my rage
you would think a stiff drink would mellow this lady
no not today
I think after I get done here
I'm going to practice my hatchet throwing
pretend I'm cracking a skull open
imagine the blood pouring out
as I smear my nude body with the gore
mmm then will come the cleansing rain
the heavens bleeding down crimson
bathed in blood my whiskey dreams come true
looking to the skies
for some relief
the clouds hold nothing but puss
putrid rain falls on my diseased mind
taking me down dark roads internally
if you're looking for something pretty from this girl
you won't get it
I want to be ugly
gutter slut with beastly men sweating
on me as they fuck me
love is a lie so I toss it in the trash
I'm cunt of a bitch
loves hard living
the dirty side of life
taking a drag off a cigarette
I look at my smoke stained walls
yellowing streaks look like a work of art
my ass is something to behold
after a good pounding
a black hole staring back at you
feeling sleazy I spread the page with my cum
as I ink out my rage
you would think a stiff drink would mellow this lady
no not today
I think after I get done here
I'm going to practice my hatchet throwing
pretend I'm cracking a skull open
imagine the blood pouring out
as I smear my nude body with the gore
mmm then will come the cleansing rain
the heavens bleeding down crimson
bathed in blood my whiskey dreams come true
Published 19th Jul 2015
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19th Jul 2015 11:56pm
omfg! Crim u do magic with your ink!!!
Wholy fuck!!
the clouds hold nothing but puss < Fucking A!
taking a drag off a cigarette
I look at my smoke stained walls
yellowing streaks look like a work of art << I so feel you !!!!
in the list my dear
Crim u are in my top 5 writers I love most!
Just what a body slam!!
with love always
Zazzles xoxoxox
Wholy fuck!!
the clouds hold nothing but puss < Fucking A!
taking a drag off a cigarette
I look at my smoke stained walls
yellowing streaks look like a work of art << I so feel you !!!!
in the list my dear
Crim u are in my top 5 writers I love most!
Just what a body slam!!
with love always
Zazzles xoxoxox
20th Jul 2015 00:15am
19th Jul 2015 11:59pm
Damn, Brenda.. You still got it.. Great to read your work again.. Nice ink... Much respect!!
Dave
Dave
20th Jul 2015 00:16am
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20th Jul 2015 00:57am
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20th Jul 2015 3:31am
beautiful Taryn you made me smile wide with the love you've shown me and this write thank you with love Brenda
20th Jul 2015 2:18am
"mmm then will come the cleansing rain
the heavens bleeding down crimson
bathed in blood my whiskey dreams come true "
This is a fantastic ending Wow i love it
the heavens bleeding down crimson
bathed in blood my whiskey dreams come true "
This is a fantastic ending Wow i love it
20th Jul 2015 3:33am
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20th Jul 2015 4:13am
I've been in those gutters, got washed away w/the rain. my best company was whores.
high-art brooding poetry, Crim...
high-art brooding poetry, Crim...
20th Jul 2015 4:38am
I've honestly enjoyed most of the men who took pleasure in my services.. thank you John with love Crim
20th Jul 2015 2:40pm
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20th Jul 2015 8:58pm
Brilliant and shameless! Better a gutter slut than royalty as far as I'm concerned. And bathing in blood! Kind of reminds me of Countess Balthory, although she insisted on virgins and had a title to preserve. "I smear my nude body with the gore." Wow! Let me know if you need a pint or two.
21st Jul 2015 8:14pm
thank you Sir Crow for the great comment and making me giggle :) with love Crim
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22nd Jul 2015 00:12am
22nd Jul 2015 1:17am
when I see the excellence of what you write it makes me so jealous (lol)
when I grow up I want to be you :-)
when I grow up I want to be you :-)
22nd Jul 2015 3:39pm
David your comment touched my heart deeply though you are a very gifted writer in you own right thank you with love Crim
17th Aug 2015 11:29pm
Hmmm the Darker side of Prince...Princess of darkness. cunt, fuck, blood guts, dicks sluts dogs logs, licks, clits, pussy chow bang bang bow wow.
19th Aug 2015 4:48pm
17th Aug 2015 11:40pm
Dear Crimsin! Wow! All that darkness waiting to explode! The energy of your poem is a little dangerous. Damn good job!
19th Aug 2015 4:48pm
