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the moon danced
stars sang
planets conducted
the asteroid orchestra
trees buzzed
flowers burped
shrubs gossiped
vines and creepers wept
fish fried
birds grilled
antelope barbecued
the human race
ran
Published 16th Jul 2015
| Edited 5th Jul 2018
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16th Jul 2015 2:43pm
well I've nothing to add really,
except that I really like what
you've done here..:)
except that I really like what
you've done here..:)
16th Jul 2015 2:50pm
16th Jul 2015 10:07pm
Enjoyed your asteroid-laden bbq mister!
I do oft wonder when the human race shall needs run..
& which species will want a cookout! greatly evoking write..
be well!
~d
I do oft wonder when the human race shall needs run..
& which species will want a cookout! greatly evoking write..
be well!
~d
17th Jul 2015 2:11pm
Thanks for the awesome visit and wonderful
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Miss Sighs
Mighty nice to see ya again
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Miss Sighs
Mighty nice to see ya again
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5th Jul 2018 5:43pm
"Flowers burped"....hahaha.... I just saw that in my head...and all the rest of it.
Well done...love it!
Well done...love it!
