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Indissolvable Shackles
Liquid and handcuffs
in smother
'tween lip's remorse,
trembling..
I grasp
upon tongue..
the tablet
with no key
and swallow
a few more
cascading years
of 'could have been's' ..
To mortal part's pain
I am compliant
in unresolved whispers,
unshed.. welling tears
..and those sweet
could have been's..
Indissolvable shackles
swallowed on downward spiral.
in smother
'tween lip's remorse,
trembling..
I grasp
upon tongue..
the tablet
with no key
and swallow
a few more
cascading years
of 'could have been's' ..
To mortal part's pain
I am compliant
in unresolved whispers,
unshed.. welling tears
..and those sweet
could have been's..
Indissolvable shackles
swallowed on downward spiral.
Published 14th Jul 2015
| Edited 21st Jul 2015
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I melt at your thots..
ssshhh.. no one is posta know bout the free verse tho! (rofl's)
And I do know you've got me, I will love u into forever for it.. makes time so much *more, in all ways ;)
everkissin,
~T
ssshhh.. no one is posta know bout the free verse tho! (rofl's)
And I do know you've got me, I will love u into forever for it.. makes time so much *more, in all ways ;)
everkissin,
~T
14th Jul 2015 4:39am
14th Jul 2015 6:52am
You have my sparkled thanx fer the read, sweet poetess.. always appreciated!
great night to you ;)
~d
great night to you ;)
~d
14th Jul 2015 5:13am
"To mortal parts in pain"
A gorgeous line miss darkness.
And the ending;
"Indissolvable shackles
On a downward spiral"
Sends chills, lovely as always miss. You are a true poetic princess, best wishes dear darkness.
A gorgeous line miss darkness.
And the ending;
"Indissolvable shackles
On a downward spiral"
Sends chills, lovely as always miss. You are a true poetic princess, best wishes dear darkness.
14th Jul 2015 7:03am
Hello's m'dear poet.. always have dark grin for
your stop in!
Sweetest comment misters, ty fer puttin' shinies to
my hours tonight ;)
lovely nites to you../raise hell quiet-like ;)
~d
your stop in!
Sweetest comment misters, ty fer puttin' shinies to
my hours tonight ;)
lovely nites to you../raise hell quiet-like ;)
~d
14th Jul 2015 5:22am
14th Jul 2015 7:06am
Very grateful for your read, sweet lady! ty-ty's!
ever-best of nites to you ;)
~d
ever-best of nites to you ;)
~d
14th Jul 2015 6:43am
Damn! you caught me off guard, Um.. I am
um.... Damn this is on fire!!!
Dark u are so sexy... u little queen...
Love
Zazzles
xoxox
um.... Damn this is on fire!!!
Dark u are so sexy... u little queen...
Love
Zazzles
xoxox
14th Jul 2015 7:13am
Aww Jackie-luvz.. you r too damnably adorable, y'know? (yes u r)
Glad to see we have similar affect on each other,
cuz ur lines have been *smokin' of late..
Luvz seein' more of ur awesome self around here a'gin, missed hell outta ur shiny presence ;)
hugs n sister~mushies,
~d
Glad to see we have similar affect on each other,
cuz ur lines have been *smokin' of late..
Luvz seein' more of ur awesome self around here a'gin, missed hell outta ur shiny presence ;)
hugs n sister~mushies,
~d
14th Jul 2015 9:45am
15th Jul 2015 6:29am
Aww thankies fer the blessings, you are
ever~ cherished in my heart fer the knowing,
sweet sirz o D!
pagan~y hugs on ye ;)
~d
ever~ cherished in my heart fer the knowing,
sweet sirz o D!
pagan~y hugs on ye ;)
~d
14th Jul 2015 11:48am
15th Jul 2015 6:32am
You are SO gd awesome for saying so,
ty's much for readin dear Poets!
sparkles on your night ;)
~d
ty's much for readin dear Poets!
sparkles on your night ;)
~d
Anonymous
15th Jul 2015 3:47am
I so admire your style of writing..you engage the reader from the very first line..just lovely
15th Jul 2015 6:35am
My greatest thx sweet poet, have me in smile,
you do ;)
I appreciate the witness to my lines muchly!
curtsy, ever low,
~d
you do ;)
I appreciate the witness to my lines muchly!
curtsy, ever low,
~d
