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Someday
I've been waking up on the other side
Day by day I learn to take it all in stride
Once upon a time I tried to hold your hand
But you claimed the world could never understand
our love.
But you were
The one
Who got stuck inside my heart
And I was the one
Who couldn't seem to move on.
I thought that someday
I'd finally
Do something with my life
And I'd come back and give you the world.
I thought that someday
I'd finally
Do something with my life
And I'll come back and show you the world.
I'm anxiously awaiting the familiar feel of your arms
As they wrap themselves around me
You took me on a journey through the wonderful world of your charms
And you won my heart so easily
And someday
I'll finally
Do something with my life
And I'll come back and show you the world
And maybe someday
You'll finally
Believe me when I say
That you're the most beautiful thing in my life.
Day by day I learn to take it all in stride
Once upon a time I tried to hold your hand
But you claimed the world could never understand
our love.
But you were
The one
Who got stuck inside my heart
And I was the one
Who couldn't seem to move on.
I thought that someday
I'd finally
Do something with my life
And I'd come back and give you the world.
I thought that someday
I'd finally
Do something with my life
And I'll come back and show you the world.
I'm anxiously awaiting the familiar feel of your arms
As they wrap themselves around me
You took me on a journey through the wonderful world of your charms
And you won my heart so easily
And someday
I'll finally
Do something with my life
And I'll come back and show you the world
And maybe someday
You'll finally
Believe me when I say
That you're the most beautiful thing in my life.
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Re: Someday
2nd Jul 2015 4:30pm
Sammy4444, luv ~ :-*
This is tender, bittersweet, and tinged with echoes of what should have been, mayhap.
Your voice is wonderfully mellow yet evocative of this remembered pain and love. :-*
I hope you find that which you seek, luv.
This is tender, bittersweet, and tinged with echoes of what should have been, mayhap.
Your voice is wonderfully mellow yet evocative of this remembered pain and love. :-*
I hope you find that which you seek, luv.
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re: Re: Someday
8th Jul 2015 1:43am
Thank you Savaja!
Your comments are always so lovely! I am glad you liked this. Thank you for the praise and for listening! :)
Your comments are always so lovely! I am glad you liked this. Thank you for the praise and for listening! :)
Re: Someday
2nd Jul 2015 5:05pm
Beautiful work Sammy. Well written, sung and played. You have a fine voice and do wonders with guitar, and will maybe have a hit on your hands. Someday.
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re: Re: Someday
8th Jul 2015 1:40am
Thank you Crowfly! haha I love your comment. Yeah, maybe someday. Glad you enjoyed this.
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2nd Jul 2015 5:28pm
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8th Jul 2015 1:35am
Thank you so much sweet Virginia! I am so glad you like it. :) That means a lot.
Re: Someday
2nd Jul 2015 5:40pm
I am blown away..this is so intensely beautiful. That voice!
Brilliant Sammy.
Brilliant Sammy.
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re: Re: Someday
8th Jul 2015 1:37am
Thank you so much! I am glad you like it! Thank you for listening to it. Your compliment means a lot. You have good taste in music!
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Anonymous
3rd Jul 2015 00:45am
Sammy I echo the others which have spoken before me. Simply wonderful and you should be very proud with what you have put forth! - Taryn xoxo
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8th Jul 2015 1:34am
Re: Someday
5th Jul 2015 1:21pm
Is that you playing and singing sam? Hearing the person read or sing gives a new perspective on the poems. I find it is more your work at that point because I have less interpretive work to do. The cadence of the poem is no longer something I have to provide. Melancholic and tender is the mood I hear. Nice work!
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re: Re: Someday
8th Jul 2015 1:31am
Yes, that is me playing and singing. Thank you for listening and your comment. I appreciate it!
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7th Jul 2015 10:39pm
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8th Jul 2015 1:30am
Re: Someday
8th Jul 2015 1:38am
This is absolutely amazing. You have an excellent voice. If you were local I could get you some awesome gigs.
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re: Re: Someday
8th Jul 2015 1:52am
Well thank you for the incredible compliment Ahavati! I appreciate it! I am so glad you like this. Maybe we ARE local. haha