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Melt
I melt in bliss
At the first hint
Of that crystal elixir
You emit
I cannot wait
To inhale
The aroma
Of your desire
But more than that
I want to experience
Your precum
Drip
By
Glorious
Luscious
Lubricious
Drip
C
a
s
c
a
d
i
n
g
Deliciously
Oh
So
Delectably
Into
My
Mouth
Onto
My
Lips
I
Yearn
For
Your
Ambrosia
(I confess)
I am voracious for you teasing at my lips
Rapacious for the weight of your manhood on my lithe tongue
Writing this now whets my appetite for you
I am wet with want of you
And
You know
All I need to assuage me
Bring me
Clenching
Moaning
Ragged relief
Is you
In my mouth
Spending your passion
Please
Give me this treat
At the first hint
Of that crystal elixir
You emit
I cannot wait
To inhale
The aroma
Of your desire
But more than that
I want to experience
Your precum
Drip
By
Glorious
Luscious
Lubricious
Drip
C
a
s
c
a
d
i
n
g
Deliciously
Oh
So
Delectably
Into
My
Mouth
Onto
My
Lips
I
Yearn
For
Your
Ambrosia
(I confess)
I am voracious for you teasing at my lips
Rapacious for the weight of your manhood on my lithe tongue
Writing this now whets my appetite for you
I am wet with want of you
And
You know
All I need to assuage me
Bring me
Clenching
Moaning
Ragged relief
Is you
In my mouth
Spending your passion
Please
Give me this treat
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Re: Melt
30th Jun 2015 8:28am
Savaja, I find this rather stimulating :) Oh my delicious!! You describe so well scents...one of my weaknesses...the fragrance of a woman mmmmmmmmm!Brava!
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Re: Melt
Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jun 2015 9:48am
30th Jun 2015 9:47am
The Queen of sensual eroticism stirs once again...hmm, where to begin...I can think of a few places. Unfortunately the idea is nowhere penned in this poem. Sorry for being naughty, my dear Savaja, but it's almost two in the morning here. Free hands...don't know what to do with them?...xoxo, Devlin;)
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Re: Melt
Anonymous
30th Jun 2015 11:16am
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Re: Melt
30th Jun 2015 11:37am
Re: Melt
30th Jun 2015 12:04pm
".....(I confess)
I am voracious for you teasing at my lips
Rapacious for the weight of your manhood on my lithe tongue
Writing this now whets my appetite for you
I am wet with want of you
And
You know
All I need to assuage me
Bring me
Clenching
Moaning
Ragged relief
Is you
In my mouth
Spending your passion
Please
Give me this treat......"
It is so hard typing this with one hand ;) Exquisitely done and so visually written. There would be no denying you this treasure. This has become a favorite. Adding to the list....
I am voracious for you teasing at my lips
Rapacious for the weight of your manhood on my lithe tongue
Writing this now whets my appetite for you
I am wet with want of you
And
You know
All I need to assuage me
Bring me
Clenching
Moaning
Ragged relief
Is you
In my mouth
Spending your passion
Please
Give me this treat......"
It is so hard typing this with one hand ;) Exquisitely done and so visually written. There would be no denying you this treasure. This has become a favorite. Adding to the list....
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Re: Melt
30th Jun 2015 12:40pm
firstly, i'm just thrilled you didn't say "musk" or "musky" lol so help me, if i read another piece of erotica describing a man's scent as musky i'll... i'll... well i dunno bahzacktly what i'll do but it'll be something ltm
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i adore the way you play with structure [spacing] it adds an entirely new dimension to your words.
"cascading" as an example is just gorgeousness, darling oracle... the gentle descent of the letters is reminiscent of a bead of perspiration trailing down curves
visually stunning indeed...
"Bring me
Clenching
Moaning
Ragged relief"
... yup, that about sums up what i'll need to do before returning to my very droll essay assignment lol
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i bow to the sensual mastery of your pen
#transatlantichugs
♥
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i adore the way you play with structure [spacing] it adds an entirely new dimension to your words.
"cascading" as an example is just gorgeousness, darling oracle... the gentle descent of the letters is reminiscent of a bead of perspiration trailing down curves
visually stunning indeed...
"Bring me
Clenching
Moaning
Ragged relief"
... yup, that about sums up what i'll need to do before returning to my very droll essay assignment lol
*
i bow to the sensual mastery of your pen
#transatlantichugs
♥
1
Re: Melt
30th Jun 2015 12:43pm
Re: Melt
Oh baby! Make me write bad checks make me cash'em! LOL!
It is the natural aroma, isn't it? The earthy scent of primal essence SANS unnatural cologne (ugh)!
Okay, enough. This beast is under lock'n key for now. But, I will say that I love to see someone so passionate (pun intended) about their work.
It is the natural aroma, isn't it? The earthy scent of primal essence SANS unnatural cologne (ugh)!
Okay, enough. This beast is under lock'n key for now. But, I will say that I love to see someone so passionate (pun intended) about their work.
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Re: Melt
30th Jun 2015 3:47pm
nasty girl......
passions
elucidated
lucid'itously
libidinously.........(O'what is'ee talkinbout?
crazy olfuck)
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Anonymous
- Edited 25th Sep 2020 3:45am
30th Jun 2015 4:03pm
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Re: Melt
Anonymous
30th Jun 2015 8:51pm
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Re: Melt
30th Jun 2015 9:29pm
I solidify more than melt listening to you read this Savaja. The voice of an incorrigible seductress. The treat is yours!
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Re: Melt
Anonymous
30th Jun 2015 11:19pm
When you talk like this it drives me kkkkrazzy!
and I love being driven there by the likes of you!
and I love being driven there by the likes of you!
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Re: Melt
1st Jul 2015 2:42am
One of the great reading voices of the 21st century. I say this knowing it will be thusly recognized sooner or later,hopefully sooner.
I'd like to hear you do more non-erotic material.
I'd like to hear you do more non-erotic material.
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Re: Melt
2nd Jul 2015 2:05am
Re: Melt
2nd Jul 2015 4:14pm
Had read this and totally melted. Oh goodness, here I am aggain looking for words to coat my tongue with and by mercy I found a few.. Delicious no longer suits you, shall find another words to replace with. My gosh
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Re: Melt
3rd Jul 2015 9:47am
nice to see an ode to the 1st droplet making its excape before the raging river.
yes, provocative...
yes, provocative...
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Re: Melt
3rd Jul 2015 2:43pm
taking text and making it reflect a desired reality is an art form for you!
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Re: Melt
Savaja...your words...they describe exactly how i feel when i....
if he was only here now sitting in front of me where my laptop is now....
thank you...your words are divinely delicious... ;-)
if he was only here now sitting in front of me where my laptop is now....
thank you...your words are divinely delicious... ;-)
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Re: Melt
6th Jul 2015 6:34am
There is much to be said of hunger, little lady.
This delicious word assembly relates it quite well.
C.
This delicious word assembly relates it quite well.
C.
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Re. Melt
11th Sep 2015 3:55am