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Your mind
You entice
My mind
Spice vocabulary
With words evocative
Provocative
I lose control
Clench
Drenched
Spasm
Internally scream
All you hear
Is the barest
Trace
Not even a whimper
Barely a sigh
Sloughing past
Parted lips
As you speak
Erudite discourse
Detonating
in my mind
Shrapnel
penetrating
Deep
So
Deep
Steeping me
In you
In elegiac
Elegance
Not melancholy, no
Rather, lyrical
Seductive sound
Reductive
Eductive
I think I might orgasm
Simply from your words
You bring me
Shuddering
I've lost control
My
Train's
Derailed
Utterly undone am I
You must enjoy me thus
For you continue
To do this
Knowing
My weakness
Knowing
How easily I succumb to you
(Like this)
Knowing...
A glance
Across
A
Crowded
Venue
You mouth a word
I read your lips
You watch comprehension
And everything that comes with that
Cross my face
Suffuse my body
You look eminently satisfied
And
Hungry
You know
Precisely
What you've done
When you make your way to me
I'm leaning against a pillar
Unable to stand upright
My legs are weak and trembling
You've done this with your look and word
I manage, but barely, to appear cool, poised, leaning against this pillar nonchalantly as though I'm in control
I'm not
I'm blazing
I've musky nectar slipping betwixt my thighs
I'm disheveled
Bedeviled
By you
You know it too
You grin
That ravening
Straining
The thin veneer
You've donned
Tonight
This
Thing
Between us
Defies logic,
Thought,
And,
Yes,
Even your words,
Ultimately
So...
You say,
We'd better leave
Yes, I say
Now, you say
Mmm, I say
In the end,
Though your mind
Fascinates
Holds sway
Penetrates mine
Elicits cries
Divine
In the end,
There's just this
Two souls
And
Us animals
Mammals
Entwined...
My mind
Spice vocabulary
With words evocative
Provocative
I lose control
Clench
Drenched
Spasm
Internally scream
All you hear
Is the barest
Trace
Not even a whimper
Barely a sigh
Sloughing past
Parted lips
As you speak
Erudite discourse
Detonating
in my mind
Shrapnel
penetrating
Deep
So
Deep
Steeping me
In you
In elegiac
Elegance
Not melancholy, no
Rather, lyrical
Seductive sound
Reductive
Eductive
I think I might orgasm
Simply from your words
You bring me
Shuddering
I've lost control
My
Train's
Derailed
Utterly undone am I
You must enjoy me thus
For you continue
To do this
Knowing
My weakness
Knowing
How easily I succumb to you
(Like this)
Knowing...
A glance
Across
A
Crowded
Venue
You mouth a word
I read your lips
You watch comprehension
And everything that comes with that
Cross my face
Suffuse my body
You look eminently satisfied
And
Hungry
You know
Precisely
What you've done
When you make your way to me
I'm leaning against a pillar
Unable to stand upright
My legs are weak and trembling
You've done this with your look and word
I manage, but barely, to appear cool, poised, leaning against this pillar nonchalantly as though I'm in control
I'm not
I'm blazing
I've musky nectar slipping betwixt my thighs
I'm disheveled
Bedeviled
By you
You know it too
You grin
That ravening
Straining
The thin veneer
You've donned
Tonight
This
Thing
Between us
Defies logic,
Thought,
And,
Yes,
Even your words,
Ultimately
So...
You say,
We'd better leave
Yes, I say
Now, you say
Mmm, I say
In the end,
Though your mind
Fascinates
Holds sway
Penetrates mine
Elicits cries
Divine
In the end,
There's just this
Two souls
And
Us animals
Mammals
Entwined...
Published 4th Jul 2015
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4th Jul 2015 11:26am
"I lose control
Clench
Drenched
Spasm
Internally scream"
~appetite whetting, to be sure..
"I think I might orgasm
Simply from your words
You bring me
Shuddering"
~hear you reading this aloud in my brain, lickable!
"You mouth a word
I read your lips
You watch comprehension
And everything that comes with that
Cross my face
Suffuse my body"
~puurrrfect descript, lovely one! adore this &
know well this sultry game of dawning!
You are still the hottest LadyS of the night..
Savored every drop, my beauty!
mwahs of be well!
~d
Clench
Drenched
Spasm
Internally scream"
~appetite whetting, to be sure..
"I think I might orgasm
Simply from your words
You bring me
Shuddering"
~hear you reading this aloud in my brain, lickable!
"You mouth a word
I read your lips
You watch comprehension
And everything that comes with that
Cross my face
Suffuse my body"
~puurrrfect descript, lovely one! adore this &
know well this sultry game of dawning!
You are still the hottest LadyS of the night..
Savored every drop, my beauty!
mwahs of be well!
~d
Thank you very, very much, darksighs, luv. :-*
I thought about voicing this one; I'm still on the fence about it. :-p I will keep your description in mind, though, luv. ;-* You flatter me unduly (but, tis very sweet to mine ears)
Thank you very much again, my savant artiste. ;-*
I thought about voicing this one; I'm still on the fence about it. :-p I will keep your description in mind, though, luv. ;-* You flatter me unduly (but, tis very sweet to mine ears)
Thank you very much again, my savant artiste. ;-*
4th Jul 2015 6:07pm
'voicing it' would be too much for my f'ailing heart....Ha
so scuse me ifn i don'listen to it
4th Jul 2015 12:18pm
Control
Women need it
It validates their little girl
Complexes
The silent Master
Who speaks few words
Perhaps a whisper or two
Presents dampness
Between your
Wanton thighs
Go gently
Follow him
He's got your back
and
Everything else too ....
Like
Women need it
It validates their little girl
Complexes
The silent Master
Who speaks few words
Perhaps a whisper or two
Presents dampness
Between your
Wanton thighs
Go gently
Follow him
He's got your back
and
Everything else too ....
Like
Hmmm...Granite, luv ~ :-*
There is a part of me that immediately says, mais, bien sūr - but, of course, to your words. ;-*
There is another part of me in direct opposition to that, which states quite another thing... ;-*
And then, there are myriad other facets and layers and intricate interlacings for the human spirit is a splendidly complex thing, ne c'est pas?
Today, I want to be utterly dominated to my core, submit wholly, surrender the essence of who I am.
Tomorrow...next week...next month, I wish to test your limits, see what you can take, take you to your edge and, mayhap, a bit beyond, into euphoria.
I am a switch, after all, and can do it all. ;-p But, more importantly, I am human, and thus full of surprise and contradiction, even to myself betimes, ne c'est pas?
Tis what makes us so very fascinating, intriguing, priceless... ;-*
Thank you, luv, so very much for causing me to ruminate upon this before replying, for providing such immense stimulation, and finally, for being your inimitable Visionary self. :-*
There is a part of me that immediately says, mais, bien sūr - but, of course, to your words. ;-*
There is another part of me in direct opposition to that, which states quite another thing... ;-*
And then, there are myriad other facets and layers and intricate interlacings for the human spirit is a splendidly complex thing, ne c'est pas?
Today, I want to be utterly dominated to my core, submit wholly, surrender the essence of who I am.
Tomorrow...next week...next month, I wish to test your limits, see what you can take, take you to your edge and, mayhap, a bit beyond, into euphoria.
I am a switch, after all, and can do it all. ;-p But, more importantly, I am human, and thus full of surprise and contradiction, even to myself betimes, ne c'est pas?
Tis what makes us so very fascinating, intriguing, priceless... ;-*
Thank you, luv, so very much for causing me to ruminate upon this before replying, for providing such immense stimulation, and finally, for being your inimitable Visionary self. :-*
In the end,
There's just this
Two souls
And
Us animals
Mammals
Entwined...
That's it, the primal nature of us; naked, raw and beautiful.
There's just this
Two souls
And
Us animals
Mammals
Entwined...
That's it, the primal nature of us; naked, raw and beautiful.
4th Jul 2015 6:17pm
Ahavati, luv ~ :-*
Just so. You've said it so well, luv. :-*
Thank you.
The primal nature of us: naked, raw, beautiful...
Perfect distillation, Ahavati, luv (though, I DO have a weakness for those words... ;-p)
Just so. You've said it so well, luv. :-*
Thank you.
The primal nature of us: naked, raw, beautiful...
Perfect distillation, Ahavati, luv (though, I DO have a weakness for those words... ;-p)
4th Jul 2015 3:03pm
phenomenal piece Savaja... i enjoyed the journey of your ink... amazing talent with the pen... thx for sharing this with us
5th Jul 2015 9:02am
Thank you very, very much, MagicVisionz, luv. :-*
I am glad, indeed, you enjoyed the traverse. ;-*
I'm none too certain about amazing, but I thank you nonetheless, luv. And, thank You for coming to read; twas my pleasure to share... :-*
I am glad, indeed, you enjoyed the traverse. ;-*
I'm none too certain about amazing, but I thank you nonetheless, luv. And, thank You for coming to read; twas my pleasure to share... :-*
4th Jul 2015 3:39pm
Savaja...this is so well composed, loving the structure and the material! It is a rare thing to have this chemistry with another. When found, no words can describe it-except yours! Very much enjoyed and understood.
5th Jul 2015 9:14am
Ahhh, looloolookie, luv ~ :-*
Thank you very much indeed. I am glad you found somewhat that pleases you herein, luv. ;-*
You are so very correct; tis a rare thing to find this type of chemistry with another. Betimes, I think, nigh impossible. ;-p
Again, thank you, luv; I DO know precisely what I'd like... ;-*
Thank you very much indeed. I am glad you found somewhat that pleases you herein, luv. ;-*
You are so very correct; tis a rare thing to find this type of chemistry with another. Betimes, I think, nigh impossible. ;-p
Again, thank you, luv; I DO know precisely what I'd like... ;-*
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5th Jul 2015 9:19am
Taryn, luv ~ :-*
I DO hope you were able to manage that, er, taking-care-of-a-thing-or-two situation to your, mmm, satisfaction from earlier in the day... ;-*
You are exceedingly enticing when all aflustered, luv... :-*
I DO hope you were able to manage that, er, taking-care-of-a-thing-or-two situation to your, mmm, satisfaction from earlier in the day... ;-*
You are exceedingly enticing when all aflustered, luv... :-*
Anonymous
4th Jul 2015 5:22pm
Ma Lady this is exquisite and though your voicing it would be lovely I am able to hear your erotic voice behind these words, I am able to picture the scene so clearly in my (naughty) mind. I am watching this play out with every brushstroke of your words. This is a snapshot of your brilliance. Love it and you!
4th Jul 2015 6:05pm
am'azin piece, dear
i wish ye was writin'bout (whatever it is that that remains of) 'me'......
will eye suffuckate in this alonesomeness? ha!!
having a wonder-full-time....wish u were here
my joke is "on 'me' "........
i wish ye was writin'bout (whatever it is that that remains of) 'me'......
will eye suffuckate in this alonesomeness? ha!!
having a wonder-full-time....wish u were here
my joke is "on 'me' "........
Anonymous
4th Jul 2015 9:28pm
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5th Jul 2015 00:34am
Yep, words have their limits. Actions speak louder. Until then I'm enjoying the hell out of your lines Savaja. Penetrating work!
your rapture is elegantly displayed upon that pillar, & leaves us roguishly satisfied...
5th Jul 2015 9:08pm
Slightly too intellectual for the experience described, but your command of language and situation is breathtaking.
6th Jul 2015 7:14am
"Knowing..."
Concise, singular summary.
I never offer a condensed version, and you know this.
One exception, shared here.
C.
Concise, singular summary.
I never offer a condensed version, and you know this.
One exception, shared here.
C.
7th Jul 2015 8:36pm
undone... dear me lord, yes, i believe i am, completely...
"I lose control
Clench
Drenched
Spasm
Internally scream"
... ohh i've missed the thrill of your sensuality, savaja. this is gorgeous darling
"I lose control
Clench
Drenched
Spasm
Internally scream"
... ohh i've missed the thrill of your sensuality, savaja. this is gorgeous darling
9th Jul 2015 4:47pm
YES!.. glory-us that you added another layer
to this with voice..
"So...
You say,
We'd better leave
Yes, I say
Now, you say
Mmm, I say"
~cud simply not miss the comin' bk for..
Smiling, that I did not miss the addition!
Spicy kisses uve made here, my darlin LadyS,
m'smoochies are urs ..*mwah mwah
~d
to this with voice..
"So...
You say,
We'd better leave
Yes, I say
Now, you say
Mmm, I say"
~cud simply not miss the comin' bk for..
Smiling, that I did not miss the addition!
Spicy kisses uve made here, my darlin LadyS,
m'smoochies are urs ..*mwah mwah
~d
Anonymous
9th Jul 2015 4:51pm
Savaja,
Like a fingertip searching, wanting, needing the feel of slippery wetness, you have perfectly delivered this very sensuous message!
tornado
Like a fingertip searching, wanting, needing the feel of slippery wetness, you have perfectly delivered this very sensuous message!
tornado
9th Jul 2015 10:39pm
Sweet Sweet Savaja,
You make me weak, your words and feeling in ink are like a soft lullaby, I always enjoy the inside of your mind's thoughts.. absolutely perfect!!!
A glance
Across
A
Crowded
Venue
You mouth a word
I read your lips
You watch comprehension
And everything that comes with that
Cross my face
Suffuse my body
If only, i just loved this Woman!!!
loves you
Zazzles xoxoxo
You make me weak, your words and feeling in ink are like a soft lullaby, I always enjoy the inside of your mind's thoughts.. absolutely perfect!!!
A glance
Across
A
Crowded
Venue
You mouth a word
I read your lips
You watch comprehension
And everything that comes with that
Cross my face
Suffuse my body
If only, i just loved this Woman!!!
loves you
Zazzles xoxoxo
15th Jul 2015 3:11pm
Beautiful, the pace, the passion. You can feel that grin, the wave of thought becoming feeling and feeling become action. Love it
16th Jul 2015 7:20am
Gorgeous Savaja you leave me in awe of your seductive power, licking the honey that drips from your sensual voice and drowning in the heat that pours from your lips.. mmm delicious with love Brenda
18th Jul 2015 2:47pm
Is it safe to say ''I'm enamored" by you? Ok, good because I can't think very clearly love and this has me swelling inside. Am feeling bursterous.
My gosh I can't take it, but hanging on
for dear life, yes. A squirmish mess, I am.
My gosh I can't take it, but hanging on
for dear life, yes. A squirmish mess, I am.
23rd Aug 2015 1:53pm
Very picturesque Savaja...every sensation felt given a 3D effect..steady marinating in the psyche..the allure...so captivating..very sensuous indeed
8th Nov 2015 1:28am
wow..gulp..ok..swallow...[stage fright] def no curtsy coming up as I am left right there in that scene and: "may I visit inside your mind for awhile?
