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A bit of Lace {written by my new pet, slowgasm, and voiced by me at his behest}
What brings you here
into my lair
fondling my lace
and standing there?
I imagine I should be
the one quite surprised
the better look, though,
priceless shock
is in your eyes
I see your fear
at being caught
sneaking in my room
with sexy thoughts
Your slender, small
almost hairless physique
A nubile form
so delicate and meek
Your image was captured
on my phone
the whole time you
thought you were alone
I'm going to sit here
and watch you dress
in my pretty things
you chose to caress
Please do not rush
or make a scene
I want more images;
you'll be my queen
Now try that makeup
I want to turn you out
no, do not cry
and, please, do pout
In pink, you're so pretty
just look and see
you are so feminine
don't you agree?
So many things
I want to do to you
most of all is
to subdue
Sit next to me
here on the floor
my little pet
I already adore
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25th Jun 2015 10:16pm
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re: Re: A bit of Lace {written by my new pet, slowgasm, and voiced
26th Jun 2015 00:36am
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Anonymous
26th Jun 2015 1:44am
Very fun, and my collaborator has a beautiful voice don't you think?
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Re: A bit of Lace {written by my new pet, slowgasm, and voiced by m
25th Jun 2015 10:17pm
Love it...especially this...
Great ink!!
Sit next to me
here on the floor
my little pet
I already adore
Great ink!!
Sit next to me
here on the floor
my little pet
I already adore
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re: Re: A bit of Lace {written by my new pet, slowgasm, and voiced
Anonymous
26th Jun 2015 1:45am
Yes , that line spoken by her is quite inviting..
Thank you for the kind remarks.
Thank you for the kind remarks.
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re: Re: A bit of Lace {written by my new pet, slowgasm, and voiced
26th Jun 2015 2:02am
Indeed, Mastersgdgurl, luv ~ :-*
Tis extremely tantalizing poetry! ;-* My darling pet has quite a way with words...
Tis extremely tantalizing poetry! ;-* My darling pet has quite a way with words...
Re: A bit of Lace {written by my new pet, slowgasm, and voiced by m
25th Jun 2015 10:37pm
Sounds like you have a new charge
Will he obey to get to your liquid velvet flesh ?
Time will tell how far his spine will bend for your fem pretty lace and pleasure ...
Boom Boom
Will he obey to get to your liquid velvet flesh ?
Time will tell how far his spine will bend for your fem pretty lace and pleasure ...
Boom Boom
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re: Re: A bit of Lace {written by my new pet, slowgasm, and voiced
Anonymous
26th Jun 2015 1:47am
Hmmm maybe a part two etc. should be in order?
Miss Savaja is very intoxicating...
Thank you for your comments
Miss Savaja is very intoxicating...
Thank you for your comments
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re: Re: A bit of Lace {written by my new pet, slowgasm, and voiced
26th Jun 2015 1:56am
Re: A bit of Lace {written by my new pet, slowgasm, and voiced by m
Sweet Goddz of hawt worx, this is soo yum,
poet of SlowO!!
*stunned here, you two, & I'm rarely speechless!
luv the thrill & wit you spread thick on
fantasy lines muches.
Savaja, Queen of Vocal Eros...
I am in puddle..and under sed dripped spell..
purz ur way m'doll! content was
glorified all the more by ur presence
here, great teaming read.
and the begs of pardon on tardiness, *lmsao,
funny, but I read earlier 'n' had to wait
fer the childrens to vacate to hear this one
aloud before comment.
greatly done on all accounts.
try'ta be good you two's ;)
~d
poet of SlowO!!
*stunned here, you two, & I'm rarely speechless!
luv the thrill & wit you spread thick on
fantasy lines muches.
Savaja, Queen of Vocal Eros...
I am in puddle..and under sed dripped spell..
purz ur way m'doll! content was
glorified all the more by ur presence
here, great teaming read.
and the begs of pardon on tardiness, *lmsao,
funny, but I read earlier 'n' had to wait
fer the childrens to vacate to hear this one
aloud before comment.
greatly done on all accounts.
try'ta be good you two's ;)
~d
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re: Re: A bit of Lace {written by my new pet, slowgasm, and voiced
26th Jun 2015 6:06am
Thank you ever so very much, darksighs, luv! :-*
We are ever so delighted, aren't we, slowgasm, pet, that you are stunned and puddled with pleasure. ;-*
(And, I wholly understand needing to vacate the premises of the wee ones prior to the listening; if you only knew what I have to go through to vocalize in peace! ;-p Suffice it to say: late nights are my lovers...)
And, ahhh, yes, as for being good? What was it Mae West (I believe) said?
"When I'm good, I'm very good, but when I'm bad, I'm better." ;-*
We are ever so delighted, aren't we, slowgasm, pet, that you are stunned and puddled with pleasure. ;-*
(And, I wholly understand needing to vacate the premises of the wee ones prior to the listening; if you only knew what I have to go through to vocalize in peace! ;-p Suffice it to say: late nights are my lovers...)
And, ahhh, yes, as for being good? What was it Mae West (I believe) said?
"When I'm good, I'm very good, but when I'm bad, I'm better." ;-*
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Anonymous
26th Jun 2015 4:24pm
Yes Lady Savaja is right, we are very pleased when someone takes the time to stop by and enjoy these works of erotica. I can only imagine you therein a glistening puddle:)
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A Bit of Lace
Anonymous
26th Jun 2015 6:09am
Miss Savaja, Mr. SlowGasm. . .Congrats on such an excellent erotic piece. . .Enjoyed, (orgasmically). . .xoxo, Devlin;)
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re: A Bit of Lace
26th Jun 2015 6:21am
Ahhh, DevlinDLC, luv ~ :-*
Thank you very, very much for that visual... ;-*
If you could just place that right there...Mmm...on my tongue...
Thank you very, very much for that visual... ;-*
If you could just place that right there...Mmm...on my tongue...
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Anonymous
26th Jun 2015 4:26pm
Ma Lady has said it all mmmmmmm
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Re: A bit of Lace {written by my new pet, slowgasm, and voiced by m
Anonymous
26th Jun 2015 1:52pm
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re: Re: A bit of Lace {written by my new pet, slowgasm, and voiced
26th Jun 2015 4:01pm
Ahhh, REKS24, luv ~ :-*
Thank you very much. Apparently not to my surprise. I suspect, however, that with you, luv, I'll not be in charge... ;-*
Thank you very much. Apparently not to my surprise. I suspect, however, that with you, luv, I'll not be in charge... ;-*
Re: A bit of Lace {written by my new pet, slowgasm, and voiced by m
26th Jun 2015 2:17pm
lawd has mercy, darlings! you spill unexpected warmth across my winter[y] horizons this afternoon with this liquid erotic of yours...
brava to you both xo
brava to you both xo
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re: Re: A bit of Lace {written by my new pet, slowgasm, and voiced
26th Jun 2015 4:04pm
Ahhh, Snowcrystal, luv ~ :-*
Glad are we to provide you with warmth. ;-*
Thank you ever so, luv.
Glad are we to provide you with warmth. ;-*
Thank you ever so, luv.
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Anonymous
26th Jun 2015 6:24pm
Warm and tingly I hope!
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Re: A bit of Lace
26th Jun 2015 4:22pm
A beautifully read bedtime story Slowgasm and Savaja. Gets funnier as it goes along, but it makes me a bit jealous. At this point I have to settle for a hamster.
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re: Re: A bit of Lace
26th Jun 2015 4:48pm
Ahhh, crowfly, luv ~ :-*
Thank you very, very much.
Hmmm... amusement, eh? What is life and eroticism without a bit of that, luv? ;-*
A bit jealous, eh? And do you wish a pet or to be one, luv? ;-*
Though hamster does seems to imply having one...
Thank you very, very much.
Hmmm... amusement, eh? What is life and eroticism without a bit of that, luv? ;-*
A bit jealous, eh? And do you wish a pet or to be one, luv? ;-*
Though hamster does seems to imply having one...
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I generally wish a pet of the human female form. I don't actually have a hamster. There's a no pets policy where I live with the exception of whatever ladies I can lure into my nest. A rare occasion these days.
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Ahhh, I see, luv, or mayhap I do. Hmmm... Mayhap I don't. You've left that open-ended enough that curiosity is now beplaguing me, you know... ;-p
Re: A bit of Lace {written by my new pet, slowgasm, and voiced by m
Anonymous
3rd Jul 2015 9:39pm
Savaja & SG.....Bravo!!!! excellent job by the both of you...beautiful.....sensual...sexy voice and words.....RL for me....luving this...xo :)
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Re: A bit of Lace {written by my new pet, slowgasm, and voiced by m
3rd Jul 2015 11:03pm
Ahhh, flowergirl, luv ~ :-*
Thank you very much from both of us. :-* We are deeply honored you have found it so beautiful and sensual and have enjoyed it so thoroughly. ;-*
Again, thank you, lovely lady who writes of sweet love interspersed effortlessly with the splendor of nature. :-*
Thank you very much from both of us. :-* We are deeply honored you have found it so beautiful and sensual and have enjoyed it so thoroughly. ;-*
Again, thank you, lovely lady who writes of sweet love interspersed effortlessly with the splendor of nature. :-*
re: Re: A bit of Lace {written by my new pet, slowgasm, and voiced
Anonymous
4th Jul 2015 00:41am
So inspired by your kind words you leave and that you enjoyed this wonderfully narrated piece of erotica.
Echoing Lady Savaja, I am glad ye of lovely purple splendors has stopped by for an erotic pick me up!
Echoing Lady Savaja, I am glad ye of lovely purple splendors has stopped by for an erotic pick me up!
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