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a white butterfly
like a drunk monkey
sailing through the clover,
a white butterfly was dancing
across the road, a thought
went floating over,
and then it disappeared into a willow.
sailing through the clover,
a white butterfly was dancing
across the road, a thought
went floating over,
and then it disappeared into a willow.
Published 20th Jun 2015
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20th Jun 2015 1:23am
funnily enough, the willow touches,
since it has been a day for weeping
for a friend, who some mistake for
a jibbering monkey, but who has been a roughly
treated butterfly...
too cryptic, perhaps, but all I mean is that
your thought arrived most aptly..:)
since it has been a day for weeping
for a friend, who some mistake for
a jibbering monkey, but who has been a roughly
treated butterfly...
too cryptic, perhaps, but all I mean is that
your thought arrived most aptly..:)
20th Jun 2015 2:07am
"like a drunk monkey"
I never would have thought of that and it fits so well as a description for a butterfly flying.
This reads very gently and deep at the same time.
I never would have thought of that and it fits so well as a description for a butterfly flying.
This reads very gently and deep at the same time.
Wow, Pishashee, luv! :-*
You pack a punch today especially. I'm too awed and exhausted for more than this: marvelous! :-*
You pack a punch today especially. I'm too awed and exhausted for more than this: marvelous! :-*
20th Jun 2015 4:11am
Beautiful beauty in such wise brevity, P. Wonderful observation of nature and self.
20th Jun 2015 6:27am
All butterflies are drunk. I love your observations. Thank you Pisha.
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21st Jun 2015 5:12am
U are a genius and absolute pleasure to read from Pish!
The imagery in this is so vivid I saw and everything, this is fantastic !!!
loves you
Zazzles xoxoxox
The imagery in this is so vivid I saw and everything, this is fantastic !!!
loves you
Zazzles xoxoxox
28th Mar 2016 10:08pm
"like a drunk monkey
sailing through the clover,
a white butterfly was dancing".....describes my thought processes perfectly....loved this...you are a gift to letters everywhere....putting them in the proper order so that they may shine-SS
sailing through the clover,
a white butterfly was dancing".....describes my thought processes perfectly....loved this...you are a gift to letters everywhere....putting them in the proper order so that they may shine-SS
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