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Touch
I undulate
Writhe
You're touching me
Just right
You pause
Fingers
Hovering in the air
I whisper
Whimper
Please touch me
Again
You grin
That smile
Creeping 'cross your face
The one
(you know)
That sends
Shivers racing apace
Your fingertips
Descend
Caressing the air
Above
My
Yearning skin
Teasing, tantalizing me
With
Almost
Touch
This
Delicious
Agony
Has me arching up and up
Begging
Pleading
A honeyed mess
You groan
Inhale
Then
Lick me up...
Published 17th Jun 2015
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17th Jun 2015 8:36am
22nd Jun 2015 1:00am
Ahhh, Tantric Acolyte, luv ~ :-*
Your gift to me here is an exquisite pearl. :-*
Thank you, luv.
Your gift to me here is an exquisite pearl. :-*
Thank you, luv.
22nd Jun 2015 10:50am
17th Jun 2015 1:11pm
You have an excellent reading voice, Savaja. I love the emotion you pour into it.
22nd Jun 2015 1:05am
Ahhh, Ahavati, luv ~ :-*
Thank you very much, luv. You are an avatar of emotion, especially love, dear heart, and so to have you say this is an honor of the highest order indeed. :-*
Thank you very much, luv. You are an avatar of emotion, especially love, dear heart, and so to have you say this is an honor of the highest order indeed. :-*
17th Jun 2015 2:47pm
A perfect blend of written and spoken words. True artistry reigning over one's mesmerized reception.
22nd Jun 2015 1:11am
Ahhh, candycrier, luv ~ :-*
You are a true connoisseur of the spoken word and I am most highly honored each time you visit and bestow your words upon my page.
You gift me with words I had not heretofore considered with regard to myself and oft-times I know not how to respond appropriately, luv.
I am deeply humbled, incredibly honored, will continuously strive to be better, and thank you immensely for your encouragement from the very beginning of this venture. :-*
You are a true connoisseur of the spoken word and I am most highly honored each time you visit and bestow your words upon my page.
You gift me with words I had not heretofore considered with regard to myself and oft-times I know not how to respond appropriately, luv.
I am deeply humbled, incredibly honored, will continuously strive to be better, and thank you immensely for your encouragement from the very beginning of this venture. :-*
17th Jun 2015 3:06pm
you're an especially sensual writer, Sav -
I bet your very keyboard tingles at the touch..:)
mine just suggests I wipe the bits of toast off
the keys before carrying on..!
I bet your very keyboard tingles at the touch..:)
mine just suggests I wipe the bits of toast off
the keys before carrying on..!
22nd Jun 2015 1:25am
Ahhh, dartford, luv ~ :-*
You make me laugh and laugh, which is a great, great skill! ;-D
Oft-times, delicious sensuality resides in marvelous humor... ;-*
Thank you ever so much, luv, for this delectable compliment which simultaneously caused shivers trembling 'cross my spine and sensitized skin as well as bubbling mirth to erupt from deep within me... ;-*
You make me laugh and laugh, which is a great, great skill! ;-D
Oft-times, delicious sensuality resides in marvelous humor... ;-*
Thank you ever so much, luv, for this delectable compliment which simultaneously caused shivers trembling 'cross my spine and sensitized skin as well as bubbling mirth to erupt from deep within me... ;-*
17th Jun 2015 3:08pm
22nd Jun 2015 2:35am
Ahhh, Rose, luv ~ :-*
Thank you very, very much. The layout of a poem is such an intuitive process - how does it feel... ;-p yes, I feel my way through poems.
Thank you, luv, for your lovely and kind observations. :-*
Thank you very, very much. The layout of a poem is such an intuitive process - how does it feel... ;-p yes, I feel my way through poems.
Thank you, luv, for your lovely and kind observations. :-*
17th Jun 2015 3:48pm
"Tantalizing" is exactly the right word. The structure of this is unique, and your reading is right on. Great job Savaja!
22nd Jun 2015 3:56am
Ahhh, crowfly, luv ~ :-*
Tantalizing, eh? I admit the thought of eliciting such in you, oh he who hungers, creates a corresponding echo in me... ;-*
Your observations regarding structure and aural input are quite welcome, luv, especially with your journalistic sensitivities. :-*
Thank you most abundantly.
Tantalizing, eh? I admit the thought of eliciting such in you, oh he who hungers, creates a corresponding echo in me... ;-*
Your observations regarding structure and aural input are quite welcome, luv, especially with your journalistic sensitivities. :-*
Thank you most abundantly.
17th Jun 2015 4:38pm
22nd Jun 2015 4:02am
Ahhh, Gahddess_Worship, luv ~ :-*
Tis always a delightful day when I can provide you with delicious anticipation and tingles, sweet luv. :-*
Thank you very much, luv.
Tis always a delightful day when I can provide you with delicious anticipation and tingles, sweet luv. :-*
Thank you very much, luv.
Anonymous
17th Jun 2015 7:34pm
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22nd Jun 2015 5:38am
Ahhh, REKS24, luv ~ :-*
I do rather like to tempt you with what I hope are mouth-watering morsels... ;-*
I consider this quite a compliment coming from you who can drop a woman to her knees with the power of your eroticism, causing veritable floods with no more than flicks of your formidable pen.
I do rather like to tempt you with what I hope are mouth-watering morsels... ;-*
I consider this quite a compliment coming from you who can drop a woman to her knees with the power of your eroticism, causing veritable floods with no more than flicks of your formidable pen.
17th Jun 2015 9:07pm
22nd Jun 2015 5:40am
Ahhh, Hashman, luv ~ :-*
I am deeply honored by you, sweet, sweet, luv... :-*
Thank you very, very much.
I am deeply honored by you, sweet, sweet, luv... :-*
Thank you very, very much.
Damn Woman! you is so sexy i might have to fly out to see you and you know, *play together*
I adore sexy woman like you my darling Savaja!!
hola this is so hot!!!
Loves you mi amore!
Love
Jackie xoxoxox
I adore sexy woman like you my darling Savaja!!
hola this is so hot!!!
Loves you mi amore!
Love
Jackie xoxoxox
22nd Jun 2015 5:48am
Ahhh, Jackie, luv ~ :-*
Thank you so very much, indeed. ;-*
Should you fly out here, know this: I can be somewhat, er, demanding. I really hope you're fond of oral attention, luv. ;-* I'm rather fond of giving it...
Je t'aime.
Thank you so very much, indeed. ;-*
Should you fly out here, know this: I can be somewhat, er, demanding. I really hope you're fond of oral attention, luv. ;-* I'm rather fond of giving it...
Je t'aime.
22nd Jun 2015 8:52am
It's a requirement of mine. In fact anyone who doesn't want to participate in oral gets no attention from me
Demanding yeah, same here I'm quite dominating myself as well Savaja 🌹
Jackie
Demanding yeah, same here I'm quite dominating myself as well Savaja 🌹
Jackie
18th Jun 2015 00:17am
Count me amongst the many who is mesmerized n heated up badly! lol def. A fav. N call me crazy but the vid. Seemed to be displaying a very nice pair of SUPER yummy looking titty nipples lol... Mmmmmmm yea...
22nd Jun 2015 5:59am
Ahhh, Erotic Ninja, luv ~ :-*
I am rather distinctly pleased that you are aflame; in fact, just now if I could, I might stoke those flames a bit higher! ;-p
You naughty, naughty, naughty ninja, you! You made me go and peruse, quite carefully, mind you, my own video Just. In. Case. Which tells you rather more than you should know regarding my state of dishabille whilst making it! Naughty, naughty ninja!
I am shaking my head at you and glaring a bit too with raised eyebrows. Hmpf!
Suffice to say, NO nipples (or other body parts) are present in this video, thank you very much for those momentary heart palpitations!!! :-p
Twas a tricky thing you did, luv; I have no more to say now... ;-*
I am rather distinctly pleased that you are aflame; in fact, just now if I could, I might stoke those flames a bit higher! ;-p
You naughty, naughty, naughty ninja, you! You made me go and peruse, quite carefully, mind you, my own video Just. In. Case. Which tells you rather more than you should know regarding my state of dishabille whilst making it! Naughty, naughty ninja!
I am shaking my head at you and glaring a bit too with raised eyebrows. Hmpf!
Suffice to say, NO nipples (or other body parts) are present in this video, thank you very much for those momentary heart palpitations!!! :-p
Twas a tricky thing you did, luv; I have no more to say now... ;-*
Anonymous
18th Jun 2015 2:03am
Miss Savaja, I definitely felt the heat. . .Phoenix (where I live) would be so goddamn jealous!. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
26th Jun 2015 00:31am
DevlinDLC, luv ~ :-*
You talking about heat! I cannot even begin to tell you how grateful I am to have THIS effect on you, luv. ;-*
You DO know, don't you, luv: certain, rather delectable parts of me quiver every time you pen an erotic poem, woman?! ;-*
And, Phoenix has no business being jealous of Anyone's heat! 110 degrees in the shade! And don't come at me with this, "But, it's a DRY heat business..." :-p
You talking about heat! I cannot even begin to tell you how grateful I am to have THIS effect on you, luv. ;-*
You DO know, don't you, luv: certain, rather delectable parts of me quiver every time you pen an erotic poem, woman?! ;-*
And, Phoenix has no business being jealous of Anyone's heat! 110 degrees in the shade! And don't come at me with this, "But, it's a DRY heat business..." :-p
18th Jun 2015 3:24am
Wow i listened to the voice version even better!!
Damn!! u really are sensual...
I need a smoke!!!
loves you Savaja!!!
Jackie xoxox
Damn!! u really are sensual...
I need a smoke!!!
loves you Savaja!!!
Jackie xoxox
30th Jun 2015 4:46pm
Thank you ever so much, Zazzles, luv! :-*
I am so very glad you enjoyed my voicing, Empress... ;-*
I am so very glad you enjoyed my voicing, Empress... ;-*
18th Jun 2015 11:49am
I bet you could read me the dictionary and make me wanna... you give great audio... jj
30th Jun 2015 4:53pm
Ahhh, Poetryman, luv ~ :-*
The dictionary, eh? ;-p I am highly flattered, indeed! (Though, I know tis but the veriest hyperbole, luv, still am I charmed abundantly... :-*
Thank you ever so much, luv.
The dictionary, eh? ;-p I am highly flattered, indeed! (Though, I know tis but the veriest hyperbole, luv, still am I charmed abundantly... :-*
Thank you ever so much, luv.
19th Jun 2015 9:02am
30th Jun 2015 4:59pm
Mmm...
JohnFeddeler, luv ~ :-*
Being taunted has never paid off quite so very well, luv...
Indulge at will, Sir. ;-*
JohnFeddeler, luv ~ :-*
Being taunted has never paid off quite so very well, luv...
Indulge at will, Sir. ;-*
"With
Almost Touch"
~that bliss of *barely touches..omgddss!
you nailed it in your sweet flow of eros on purr!
"The one
(you know)
That sends
Shivers racing apace "
~yes, yes, & yes'ma'm..
know it and buuurrn for!
Happy gushes that u hit on all soft details 'tween..(*sooo many things fit here. lol/veg)
will go with *passion, tween ur passions & play.
adored this.. be welz always m'dear!
~d
Almost Touch"
~that bliss of *barely touches..omgddss!
you nailed it in your sweet flow of eros on purr!
"The one
(you know)
That sends
Shivers racing apace "
~yes, yes, & yes'ma'm..
know it and buuurrn for!
Happy gushes that u hit on all soft details 'tween..(*sooo many things fit here. lol/veg)
will go with *passion, tween ur passions & play.
adored this.. be welz always m'dear!
~d
30th Jun 2015 5:09pm
Darksighs, luv ~ :-*
I rather adore you, you know.
This: your sweet flow of eros on purr ~ I want to kiss you for this, luv. ;-*
In fact, I want to, frequently, kiss you 'twixt these writings of yours, have you utter them in my mouth, your savant tongue fluttering sapiosexually 'gainst mine own ensorcelled one...
Merci beaucoup, mon artiste savant. :-*
I rather adore you, you know.
This: your sweet flow of eros on purr ~ I want to kiss you for this, luv. ;-*
In fact, I want to, frequently, kiss you 'twixt these writings of yours, have you utter them in my mouth, your savant tongue fluttering sapiosexually 'gainst mine own ensorcelled one...
Merci beaucoup, mon artiste savant. :-*
20th Jun 2015 1:47am
This playfully teases in a very pleasing way. Sensual, tantalizing, romantic write. Wow!
30th Jun 2015 5:15pm
Sammy4444, luv ~ :-*
I am quite glad you found the playfulness herein and joy as well, luv. :-*
There is so much to celebrate in the sensual world. We forget betimes, mayhap. I do enjoy refreshing my recall. ;-*
Thank you very much, luv.
I am quite glad you found the playfulness herein and joy as well, luv. :-*
There is so much to celebrate in the sensual world. We forget betimes, mayhap. I do enjoy refreshing my recall. ;-*
Thank you very much, luv.
20th Jun 2015 6:20am
Oh goodness, this is so so mouth watering. ..I am officially seduced & taunted here.. right here as there are no words to speak haaa. Can hardly breathe within my swallow
30th Jun 2015 5:21pm
Ahhh, Noire HowlingWhelms, luv ~ :-*
I am most gratified, luv, by your response as it reflects my reactions to your works most-oft. ;-*
You are so utterly delicious, luv. Thank you very much for this vision of you. :-*
I am most gratified, luv, by your response as it reflects my reactions to your works most-oft. ;-*
You are so utterly delicious, luv. Thank you very much for this vision of you. :-*
Anonymous
20th Jun 2015 6:18pm
i could read you for foreplay really, it's just that darn shiver inducing...
"Fingers
Hovering in the air
I whisper
Whimper
Please touch me
Again "
*
"This
Delicious
Agony
Has me arching up and up "
... that last one could be a stand alone poem tbh. the visuals suspended in just those nine words are unbelievably sensual & stimulating ~
as for your reading,i love the husky "fuck-me-right-now" quality of your voice...
... tis lovely indeed, savaja
reminds me a little of the way plath read hers, like the words were just a breath away, natural, waiting to be exhaled
*
thank you for a great read, erotic oracle
xo
~ katja
"Fingers
Hovering in the air
I whisper
Whimper
Please touch me
Again "
*
"This
Delicious
Agony
Has me arching up and up "
... that last one could be a stand alone poem tbh. the visuals suspended in just those nine words are unbelievably sensual & stimulating ~
as for your reading,i love the husky "fuck-me-right-now" quality of your voice...
... tis lovely indeed, savaja
reminds me a little of the way plath read hers, like the words were just a breath away, natural, waiting to be exhaled
*
thank you for a great read, erotic oracle
xo
~ katja
30th Jun 2015 6:48pm
Ahhh, katja, luv ~ :-*
This comment of yours is pure poetry itself:
words just a breath away, natural, waiting to be exhaled
I adore what you say to begin that you could read me for foreplay. The feeling, luv, is mutual. Believe me. ;-*
The fleeting comparison to plath is a munificent honor indeed! Thank you so very much for your generosity, luv. You are exceedingly kind to me. :-*
This comment of yours is pure poetry itself:
words just a breath away, natural, waiting to be exhaled
I adore what you say to begin that you could read me for foreplay. The feeling, luv, is mutual. Believe me. ;-*
The fleeting comparison to plath is a munificent honor indeed! Thank you so very much for your generosity, luv. You are exceedingly kind to me. :-*
21st Jun 2015 1:03am
Your voice is so soothing to listen to. This is so erotic and teasing, and I really love it! I am a fan of ASMR, and your voice--this poem--gave me tingles and chills.
30th Jun 2015 6:52pm
Thank you very, very much, kitkatmadina, luv. :-* I am so very glad I could provide you with such a delightful experience.
I had to research ASMR and found it an intriguing concept. Thank you for introducing it to me as an exploration in this fashion, luv. :-*
I had to research ASMR and found it an intriguing concept. Thank you for introducing it to me as an exploration in this fashion, luv. :-*
21st Jun 2015 1:53pm
standing alone the poem is a classic; matched with a voice it is off any chart. Time to get a towel here!
30th Jun 2015 6:55pm
JAZZMANOR, luv ~ :-*
Thank you very much. A classic AND then off any chart - you gift me immensely, luv. And, with such elixir as tribute... ;-*
My. My.
Thank you very much. A classic AND then off any chart - you gift me immensely, luv. And, with such elixir as tribute... ;-*
My. My.
21st Jun 2015 7:33pm
Yes, there is One who hovers, controls, teases, denies, then pleases. One with large, firm, long fingers to better caress air above, around, and within you.
A most satisfying tribute penned and recited to your One.
C.
A most satisfying tribute penned and recited to your One.
C.
30th Jun 2015 7:03pm
Ahhh, VegasPoet, luv ~ :-*
Mmm...
You leave me incredibly desirous, Sir. ;-*
Wouldst Thou tease me with Thine control?
Mmm...
You leave me incredibly desirous, Sir. ;-*
Wouldst Thou tease me with Thine control?
Anonymous
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22nd Jun 2015 1:36pm
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30th Jun 2015 7:07pm
Ahhh, Taryn, luv ~ :-*
YOU are simply delicious. Squirming no less. Your squirming makes me want to do somewhat to assuage that, luv. ;-*
I'd be lying if I said I were displeased with your response, you who write such agonizingly sensual works! :-*
Thank you ever so much, luv.
YOU are simply delicious. Squirming no less. Your squirming makes me want to do somewhat to assuage that, luv. ;-*
I'd be lying if I said I were displeased with your response, you who write such agonizingly sensual works! :-*
Thank you ever so much, luv.
Anonymous
29th Aug 2016 9:21pm
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