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Re: The Nothing
Lmfao!!!! I think this one is even better than my two word poem, don't you?
JJ
JJ
Re: The Nothing
Anonymous
9th Jun 2015 9:30am
well aren't you clever this morning
*gigglesnorts*
i'll just continue reading this prolix, curse you for the length, truly ...
... i loved the third stanza truly deep train of thought happening there. by stanza sixty i was absolutely blown away by your genius :D
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to the reading list with this one [!]
*gigglesnorts*
i'll just continue reading this prolix, curse you for the length, truly ...
... i loved the third stanza truly deep train of thought happening there. by stanza sixty i was absolutely blown away by your genius :D
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to the reading list with this one [!]
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re: Re: The Nothing
9th Jun 2015 6:45pm
HA! Made you look... hehehe, I get in a silly mood and you never know what I will have to say. Stanza 60 was a tough one to write as my old fingers were cramping up, hence the deep pain I expressed so sincerely. I'm so glad you enjoyed the 3rd stanza, as it was actually the first one I wrote and really inspired the rest of the poem. I hope they engrave that stanza on my tombstone as it really sums up my purpose in life... thank you for such an accurate review of my 3rd best poem I ever imagined... :) jj
Re: The Nothing
9th Jun 2015 10:39am
*breeeeathe... (I tell mine self)
Fits of you-know-what (nothing) overtake
me here at ur wizest-arse in all the worlds ;)
O'tay..had smiles too.(fondly-always)
I sooo relate to ur ponder, sweets, can tell
you are stuck in deep thoughts. lmsao
Fillin in ur blanks at this hour is hard on
my heart tho mista man. (need sleeps)
grins & laters
~d
Fits of you-know-what (nothing) overtake
me here at ur wizest-arse in all the worlds ;)
O'tay..had smiles too.(fondly-always)
I sooo relate to ur ponder, sweets, can tell
you are stuck in deep thoughts. lmsao
Fillin in ur blanks at this hour is hard on
my heart tho mista man. (need sleeps)
grins & laters
~d
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re: Re: The Nothing
9th Jun 2015 6:50pm
Aye indeed, a wize ole man I yam. My thoughts so deep one can hardly see them, but profound and true they are expressed... thank you for bringing clarity and enlightenment my dear d... :) jj
re: Re: The Nothing
11th Jun 2015 10:23pm
One thing I tell people is, if ya wanna be my friend, include a sense of humor with your application... thanks for commenting! JJ
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