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Before
See I've been thinking, and I've decided I wanna go back to "before"
Before the bullshit and the heartaches, the disappointment and the bad dates.
Before dice were cast, and words were said.
Before the secrets, lies, and empty promises that filled our heads
Before the sex, the magic, the drama and theatrics.
Before this all became so complicated,
You see I long for a simpler time...
Before the bullshit and the heartaches, the disappointment and the bad dates.
Before dice were cast, and words were said.
Before the secrets, lies, and empty promises that filled our heads
Before the sex, the magic, the drama and theatrics.
Before this all became so complicated,
You see I long for a simpler time...
Published 5th Jun 2015
| Edited 29th Aug 2015
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Before dice were cast, and words were said.
This is a very human and heartfelt write, Apollo. But, we all know we can't go back. What we can know, if we choose, is that this is a lesson to learn so that we don't repeat it in the next relationship. If we do repeat it, we're stuck in a circular pattern that won't break until we break it. As hard and cliche as it is, the deeper the lesson pains us, the greater the joy we'll attain. As long as we learn.
Accept this moment. Accept the pain of it. Too many people want to hide from the hurt; push it down deep and walk over it. Don't. Feel it so it will move through you. Then keep moving forward. You'll be amazed at what comes!
This is a very human and heartfelt write, Apollo. But, we all know we can't go back. What we can know, if we choose, is that this is a lesson to learn so that we don't repeat it in the next relationship. If we do repeat it, we're stuck in a circular pattern that won't break until we break it. As hard and cliche as it is, the deeper the lesson pains us, the greater the joy we'll attain. As long as we learn.
Accept this moment. Accept the pain of it. Too many people want to hide from the hurt; push it down deep and walk over it. Don't. Feel it so it will move through you. Then keep moving forward. You'll be amazed at what comes!
5th Jun 2015 4:56pm
Sage words Ahavati. But it sounds like a rough journey to recovery on the path you just prescribed.
Let me just say that when it's over, you'll have realized that it hurt so good.
6th Jun 2015 7:11am
Amazing piece Apollo. We all usually find ourselves wishing we can undo the done and just start allover, but i guess we only have one chance. Nice write anyway. #Enjoyed
6th Jun 2015 5:24pm
Apollo, I just started reading your work and I have become a fan. The sincerity and straight from the heart emotion writing is so engaging.
Great piece!
Great piece!
