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The Stranger
Upon a flat Desert
They wander,
The Stranger.
The Sun beats down
yet they feel nothing
The land is hot, the light bright
yet they sense nothing.
A black cloak bedecks them
a sense of emptiness fills them
The Mad God's mantle and mask
lies discarded for the sand to cover them.
They are empty and without purpose.
Yet wit, wonder, love,
hope and humanity
shines somewhere deep in their eyes
if not in their heart.
The world turns around them
but they feel lost and alone.
To people, to passion, to the world
and to themselves they remain
A Stranger.
They wander on.
Do any Wonder?
They wander,
The Stranger.
The Sun beats down
yet they feel nothing
The land is hot, the light bright
yet they sense nothing.
A black cloak bedecks them
a sense of emptiness fills them
The Mad God's mantle and mask
lies discarded for the sand to cover them.
They are empty and without purpose.
Yet wit, wonder, love,
hope and humanity
shines somewhere deep in their eyes
if not in their heart.
The world turns around them
but they feel lost and alone.
To people, to passion, to the world
and to themselves they remain
A Stranger.
They wander on.
Do any Wonder?
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re: Re: The Stranger
16th May 2015 00:31am
Re: The Stranger
16th May 2015 00:18am
Desert, hot sun, black cloak, I think I have the right image in my head (wonderful imagery display by the way)
"They" might be contented with life as it is for them.
I have wondered too.
Thanks for sparking thoughts in my brain viddax!
"They" might be contented with life as it is for them.
I have wondered too.
Thanks for sparking thoughts in my brain viddax!
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re: Re: The Stranger
16th May 2015 00:30am
Even in an empty land there can be a shift in things. 'They' are far from content; they just have to build something in the desert from the ground up. The Wandering Wonderer shuffles on...
re: re: Re: The Stranger
16th May 2015 1:37am
A hard thing to do "building"
Though hard is hard, not impossible.
How can anyone be sure of anyone else's contentment? Lord viddax, confess now if you are blessed with such powers
Though hard is hard, not impossible.
How can anyone be sure of anyone else's contentment? Lord viddax, confess now if you are blessed with such powers
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re: re: re: Re: The Stranger
17th May 2015 00:36am
Confess? And leave my secrets behind? Try to focus too much and I'll turn to glass and reflect back at you.
Contentment is not that difficult to know, its simply an absence of doubt, fear, worry and regret. A castle of contentment needs only a few bricks, I just have to swallow my pompous pride and ask for others to pass me a few bricks first.
Contentment is not that difficult to know, its simply an absence of doubt, fear, worry and regret. A castle of contentment needs only a few bricks, I just have to swallow my pompous pride and ask for others to pass me a few bricks first.
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20th May 2015 11:27am
You turn to glass! As befits a lord ๐
True is your description of contentment. I need a few bricks thrown my way too. If it was easy to hide away from the four you mentioned, I would now have declared myself content.
Man is his own worst enemy, they say. I'll go ask for bricks too maybe one day I'll get enough to build a big impenetrable castle
True is your description of contentment. I need a few bricks thrown my way too. If it was easy to hide away from the four you mentioned, I would now have declared myself content.
Man is his own worst enemy, they say. I'll go ask for bricks too maybe one day I'll get enough to build a big impenetrable castle
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20th May 2015 11:41pm
A "๐", what is this? I cannot find any translation or concrete meaning for it yet.
Four? You are full of riddles and mysteries today, sir.
We all build castles, the hope is that a few will ride out to the aid of others in every age.
Four? You are full of riddles and mysteries today, sir.
We all build castles, the hope is that a few will ride out to the aid of others in every age.
Re: The Stranger
18th May 2015 5:46am
Stranger... interesting read . Its like you stand still. Empty...just be there. You feel yet not a part of it or them. Who ever they are.
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re: Re: The Stranger
19th May 2015 00:03am
The Stranger is even a stranger to themselves; they are a crowd but always alone, and empty. For now.
re: re: Re: The Stranger
20th May 2015 11:33am
More hints on The Stranger's personality and identity. More secrets get left behind
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re: re: re: Re: The Stranger
20th May 2015 11:42pm
I thought the Stranger's identity was not such a secret. Seems I am fated to be a man of mystery; a many faced.... god?
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From first I read your post on a thread, to now... You remain mysterious in a good poetic way to me. This alter ego (I quote you on that) of yours, tickles my fancy
(the symbol is insignificant, forget it)
(the symbol is insignificant, forget it)
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re: re: re: re: re: Re: The Stranger
22nd May 2015 00:42am
I do hate not knowing the truths behind specific moves. The symbol is insignificant now, but you chose it. Nothing was gained by overlooking the small things.
Mysterious, I like that. My alter ego, my super ego aims to tickle the fancies.
From first sight of you there was intrigue and a splash of destiny. And talent of course.
Mysterious, I like that. My alter ego, my super ego aims to tickle the fancies.
From first sight of you there was intrigue and a splash of destiny. And talent of course.
re: re: re: re: re: re: Re: The Stranger
22nd May 2015 11:05am
Trivialities often take center stage when they are meant for standing in the corner. Hate it don't fuel it, insignificant is what insignificant is. Trust me
Mutual things last long. And Talent sleeps in your ink...viddax
Mutual things last long. And Talent sleeps in your ink...viddax
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22nd May 2015 11:07pm
Reminds me of "In war important events result from trivial causes" by Juluis Caesar. Nothing is insignificant as it just takes one final straw to break the horses' back.
While my ink sleeps, Talent rises such as yourself.
While my ink sleeps, Talent rises such as yourself.
Re: The Stranger
22nd May 2015 1:26pm
Reply to "The Stranger"
Another interesting poet.
I do love symbolical poems;
Desert blazing winds and golden calf's.
Yours faithfully twisting words Infernus.
Another interesting poet.
I do love symbolical poems;
Desert blazing winds and golden calf's.
Yours faithfully twisting words Infernus.
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re: Re: The Stranger
22nd May 2015 11:11pm
"Another interesting poet" ...said the anomaly to the mystery. Though where are these golden calfs?
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23rd May 2015 3:27pm
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24th May 2015 00:33am
Nomen est omen: Infernal insight to see ingots of gold where there is but golden gilt edging.
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24th May 2015 1:58pm
Re: The Stranger
11th Jun 2015 6:47am
OK, this has me lingering & clasping on for dear life! You speak to me & many of course, oh that desert where the deserted are left to commune amongst selves. truly unable with others but there.. the feeding is means of survival in such humidity. And no else on the outside dares to stop .speak nor travel their inner wards. Ok ok I am a babble-st. Bowing honey for taking me there on the inside of this. Stimuli you are
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re: Re: The Stranger
11th Jun 2015 11:10pm
I always pictured a sandstorm surrounding the Stranger as they walk ever onwards after this poem finishes. Though it seems that storm has managed to batter you a bit.
Though it is not that no one stops; it is that they do not know of desert and cannot wander there.
Please babble more I implore you.
Though it is not that no one stops; it is that they do not know of desert and cannot wander there.
Please babble more I implore you.