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The Morning Hum
Sitting at my desk
Under the early morning sun
Surrounded by
The haunting presence
Of your intoxicating memory;
Recently refreshed
Like a thunderstorm
Wrapping it's vivid
Influential majesty
Against a spring meadow,
A watercolor painting
For the senses
Overlaid
Across the gray
Morning haze
Of monotonous
Computer hum.
Under the early morning sun
Surrounded by
The haunting presence
Of your intoxicating memory;
Recently refreshed
Like a thunderstorm
Wrapping it's vivid
Influential majesty
Against a spring meadow,
A watercolor painting
For the senses
Overlaid
Across the gray
Morning haze
Of monotonous
Computer hum.
Published 12th May 2015
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12th May 2015 2:59pm
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12th May 2015 5:40pm
Enjoyed this, Sammy. Being able to transcend that hum is a gift. Having the right inspiration expedites things. An intoxicating memory to kill the drudgery.
12th May 2015 7:01pm
Fantastic imagery. I can almost see the colours(I'm Canadian so I'm spelling it that way!)emanating from your mind. Very much enjoyed.
13th May 2015 00:37am
excellent descriptive poem :-)
L actually feel comforted by the hum from my computer - aint life strange
:-)
L actually feel comforted by the hum from my computer - aint life strange
:-)
13th May 2015 5:04am
