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welcoming committee
There's always someone close to the train doors
Waiting for my body weight
To not so politely ask
If they wouldn't mind standing aside.
They are always reluctant,
But I am solid.
07:30 is too early
For an insight in to herd mentality
I need long baths
And the chime of a meditation bell.
I am ready for you,
My dearest Monday,
You and all the other fuckers
Who follow.
Waiting for my body weight
To not so politely ask
If they wouldn't mind standing aside.
They are always reluctant,
But I am solid.
07:30 is too early
For an insight in to herd mentality
I need long baths
And the chime of a meditation bell.
I am ready for you,
My dearest Monday,
You and all the other fuckers
Who follow.
Published 27th Apr 2015
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27th Apr 2015 9:09am
28th Apr 2015 1:54pm
2nd May 2015 4:17pm
Ha. Brutally honest about the lust for relaxing mornings. Great write.
7th May 2015 5:24pm
Love your take on blue Mondays, PJ, especially as the piece is worded so elegantly and polite making the "fuckers who follow" line all the more intense.
7th May 2015 5:36pm
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6th Sep 2015 1:37pm
miss your ink
it's a Sunday today I think I will try this to ease my nerves..
"I need long baths
And the chime of a meditation bell."
and forget the rest of the fuckers today..
excellent with love Crim
it's a Sunday today I think I will try this to ease my nerves..
"I need long baths
And the chime of a meditation bell."
and forget the rest of the fuckers today..
excellent with love Crim
