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'Broken'
Broken...
into a mosaic
of pieces
unspoken
the shards
from shattered
heart
groping
with the
substance of
pain
pressing on in vain
only to remain
impaled by the stain
of being
broken...
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Re: 'Broken'
4th Apr 2015 3:13pm
re: Re: 'Broken'
5th Apr 2015 12:13pm
My dear sweet friend I'm so grateful for your
continued support, many thanks to you always :)
continued support, many thanks to you always :)
Re: 'Broken'
Anonymous
4th Apr 2015 5:10pm
This is powerful pikm, sharp and painful.
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re: Re: 'Broken'
4th Apr 2015 11:15pm
Aaaawwww thank u my dear you're
Too sweet.... :) appreciate ur support always
Too sweet.... :) appreciate ur support always
Re: 'Broken'
4th Apr 2015 7:08pm
re: Re: 'Broken'
4th Apr 2015 8:55pm
Thanks a lot, truly appreciate it
N to prove it, u can borrow my jacket lol jk...
N to prove it, u can borrow my jacket lol jk...
Re: 'Broken'
Anonymous
4th Apr 2015 9:40pm
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re: Re: 'Broken'
5th Apr 2015 00:40am
Re: 'Broken'
4th Apr 2015 10:20pm
ahh and even if I am absent you remain as powerful. You attempt pretend to playing it down simple in shape, size and structures, whittling me down
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re: Re: 'Broken'
5th Apr 2015 00:45am
My sweetness! I'm honored to see u here on my page
once again, n I am truly grateful for ur thoughts n time :)
once again, n I am truly grateful for ur thoughts n time :)
re: Re: 'Broken'
5th Apr 2015 00:46am
Re: 'Broken'
5th Apr 2015 8:16am
beautifully done... Yet I enjoy taking such broken beautiful pieces turning them into a masterpiece...which seems that You are more than capable of doing with Your words
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re: Re: 'Broken'
5th Apr 2015 12:19pm
You know it took u awhile to read n comment my work
but I must say once you did, you've said some
wonderfully supportive things n I'm very grateful
for that, appreciate you much my dear :)
but I must say once you did, you've said some
wonderfully supportive things n I'm very grateful
for that, appreciate you much my dear :)
Re: 'Broken'
5th Apr 2015 12:52pm
i've got goosebumps reading this Poe... it's like you've been in my head & swept up my fragmented thoughts
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re: Re: 'Broken'
5th Apr 2015 12:56pm
Aaaawwww my beauty, in ur thoughts, in your arms...
I can't think of a more desirable place to be! lol
Thank u so much my sweetness :)
I can't think of a more desirable place to be! lol
Thank u so much my sweetness :)
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7th Apr 2015 3:08pm
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10th Apr 2015 2:08am
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Re: 'Broken'
Anonymous
16th Apr 2015 2:27pm
I love your style man. I can relate to these words. Awesome ink, you have your own thing going on, I like that.
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re: Re: 'Broken'
16th Apr 2015 2:56pm
Aaaaaweee..,, what a very very sweet thing to say! but at the risk of sounding conceited I DO believe I've a unique voice
mostly becuz I've NEVER been one to follow the norm lol
Truly, appreciate ur thoughts n ur poet subscribing :)
mostly becuz I've NEVER been one to follow the norm lol
Truly, appreciate ur thoughts n ur poet subscribing :)
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Anonymous
16th Apr 2015 8:22pm
Ditto man, gotta be your own person otherwise it ain't true poetry, it's just sweet sounding bullshit that anyone could of spat out. Hence why I like your style :P
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16th Apr 2015 9:57pm