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Redemption
She's both an angel and goddess
Reclining on my bed
I remain a man she needs to bless
But hide an agenda for some head
She sits up and sings
Then much to my surprise
She strokes me with her wings
And then her tongue applies
It's a miracle she blows
But forgives my sordid past
Her face lights up and glows
As I cum loose with a blast
She swallows my secret sins
Gently bestows a kiss
My redemption thus begins
And guarantees eternal bliss.
Reclining on my bed
I remain a man she needs to bless
But hide an agenda for some head
She sits up and sings
Then much to my surprise
She strokes me with her wings
And then her tongue applies
It's a miracle she blows
But forgives my sordid past
Her face lights up and glows
As I cum loose with a blast
She swallows my secret sins
Gently bestows a kiss
My redemption thus begins
And guarantees eternal bliss.
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Re: Redemption
25th Mar 2015 4:45pm
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Re: Redemption
25th Mar 2015 4:57pm
That's my kind of redemption, Crow. This is a very visual write. Great work.
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25th Mar 2015 6:47pm
Thanks Virginia. I think imagery and visualization helps. Interior ruminations can get to be a bore otherwise.
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25th Mar 2015 7:39pm
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25th Mar 2015 8:48pm
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Anonymous
26th Mar 2015 00:18am
redemption, eh? i can dig it.
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26th Mar 2015 2:06pm
Re: Redemption
26th Mar 2015 5:26am
"She swallows my secret sins"
^^^
love that line, crowfly[!] not that the rest isn't absolutely spectacular....
... a great read to wake up to
^^^
love that line, crowfly[!] not that the rest isn't absolutely spectacular....
... a great read to wake up to
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31st Mar 2015 8:32pm
Lovely art works !
True nature and adsorbed reflection of the thoughts with a vital reaction.
mcjay
True nature and adsorbed reflection of the thoughts with a vital reaction.
mcjay
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