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Venus and a Red Moon
There are the bucks and doe and the melee of a March twilight. There's a waxing hare of the moon chasing Venus across the sky, As red as madness, it disappears under the horizon. There is blackness as the stars are still for a moment; they're so shiny. I just keep looking up. It is perfectly gorgeous tonight.
Photo: Mountain Hare,
Rob Cross Photography
www.robcimages.co.uk
Photo: Mountain Hare,
Rob Cross Photography
www.robcimages.co.uk
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Re: Venus and a Red Moon
23rd Mar 2015 4:08am
Sounds gorgeous 😁
Love poetry about the sky and space. Makes me think of the beauty, and beyond.
Love poetry about the sky and space. Makes me think of the beauty, and beyond.
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re: Re: Venus and a Red Moon
I added the photo; it was just so cool in contrast. (: I'm weird :) It was gorgeous tonight; still is. I missed Mars but caught Venus right in time to enjoy it through the late evening. Jupiter will be out too. It's always a little harder to find.
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23rd Mar 2015 6:16am
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23rd Mar 2015 6:45am
Just a nuance of something more than meets the eye I'm working on tonight. I think you're wonderful. Thank you. :)
Re: Venus and a Red Moon
An interesting and beautiful sky you see on a cloudless starry night... jj
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23rd Mar 2015 6:39am
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23rd Mar 2015 6:42pm
You're welcome. And my big fingers and bad eyes don't help me type much, lol. JJ
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Re: Venus and a Red Moon
23rd Mar 2015 9:00am
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24th Mar 2015 6:04am
Re: Venus and a Red Moon
23rd Mar 2015 12:28pm
"red lights,green lights,strawberry wine,a good friend of mine,follows the stars,Venus and Mars are alright tonight" (lovely words and feeling Pishashee)
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re: Re: Venus and a Red Moon
24th Mar 2015 5:55am
It was chilly out tonight. lamb lion lion lamb; I wish March would make up its windy mind so I can enjoy the night more often. Thank you Hashman :)
Re: Venus and a Red Moon
23rd Mar 2015 4:50pm
re: Re: Venus and a Red Moon
24th Mar 2015 5:50am
I was just thinking about magic today. I don't believe it but I know how it works, therefore, if you know how it works, then you can make it happen if you believe in yourself. :) Thank you so much Paul. Your simple charm never hurts.
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24th Mar 2015 00:19am
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24th Mar 2015 5:42am