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It's a 'Hard Luck' Life...
She's so despicable and vile,
a wretched waste of space-
slut so slimey slithering by, a shit pile
that you can't stand to look at it's face
honestly now...how would it be wrong
to cut her misery inducin' ass down?
unquestionablely undeniable urges
beckon to crack her tainted crown
a queen of disgust,
so accustomed to ignorance
it's begs one to wonder when
will she recieve her come-uppence?
"never fear" he speaks
in wistfully wishful whispers
the day is fast approaching
when that bitch...
LIFE...will get hers...!
a wretched waste of space-
slut so slimey slithering by, a shit pile
that you can't stand to look at it's face
honestly now...how would it be wrong
to cut her misery inducin' ass down?
unquestionablely undeniable urges
beckon to crack her tainted crown
a queen of disgust,
so accustomed to ignorance
it's begs one to wonder when
will she recieve her come-uppence?
"never fear" he speaks
in wistfully wishful whispers
the day is fast approaching
when that bitch...
LIFE...will get hers...!
Published 23rd Jan 2015
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23rd Jan 2015 1:19am
Ironic twist at the end.. I was getting mad at this bitch wondering who she was Poe very clever you ;) she will indeed get hers the cunt! great write with love Crim
23rd Jan 2015 5:29am
Aaaawwww so sweet of you to have my back Crim! :)
But yea Life is truly a mofo bitch, n I want some payback! lol
thank u do much sweetie, truly appreciate u...
But yea Life is truly a mofo bitch, n I want some payback! lol
thank u do much sweetie, truly appreciate u...
23rd Jan 2015 6:37pm
Yes it is tough isn't it, life and living. Wish I started on the right foot...:) good read Poetik.
24th Jan 2015 00:07am
From ur mouth to God's ears my sweet one... I know exactly how you feel! Thank you, as always your support means the world to me... :)
24th Jan 2015 1:05am
I thought your heart was broken and I was going to give you a shoulder....hehe....great twist and I hear ya Poe.
24th Jan 2015 3:16am
Heart broken? Ha it's DEAD... No one has even cared to bring it to life... Thank u my dear... Appreciate u :)
Anonymous
24th Jan 2015 4:59am
Yesss just yes!
24th Jan 2015 12:20pm
24th Jan 2015 5:40pm
Ah, was thinking, too,
who tf hurts my Poe.
It's life but still
a no-go!
Here you are, a tender kiss
from Miss
Chi
who tf hurts my Poe.
It's life but still
a no-go!
Here you are, a tender kiss
from Miss
Chi
24th Jan 2015 6:51pm
Aaaawww n that felt sweet n mmmmm really tasty lips! lol
Thank you my dear, appreciate you muchly :)
Thank you my dear, appreciate you muchly :)
25th Jan 2015 00:17am
25th Jan 2015 2:09am
12th Feb 2015 3:29pm
you don't mince words, do ya, Poe [?] life's a twat at the best of times so no point sugar coating it & you really do these hard hitting writes so damn well...
... great reading you again xo
... great reading you again xo
12th Feb 2015 8:59pm
With the things have been lately
I could easily write far more pointedly
for several more pieces, but yea you're right
N I'm with you...thank you sweet beauty, forever
in your debt for your support.
I could easily write far more pointedly
for several more pieces, but yea you're right
N I'm with you...thank you sweet beauty, forever
in your debt for your support.
