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Cruel Fate
I've been fiending
for my next fix from you
power puncher who always
knocks me flat on my ass
with your honest for real ink
I'm only open with my pussy
cum staining the screen
hoping you would lap it up
though I think my cream
isn't to your liking
too in your face with my sexuality
distasteful to your educated palette
a junkie for the man
who hits straight for the jaw
will kick you in the cunt
does things his way
couldn't give a flying fuck
about his endless groupies
pounding out arrogance
which I lick from his
salty body and verse
I've written endless love poems
about you I'm a dope fiend
for your style and hard hitting nature
brutal at times
bringing me to my knees
feasting from your poetic cock
I'm brought into submission
Mastered by the best
sated by your ink
as I lie awake in bed at night
stroking myself to your savage nature
longing to be the nicotine that stains your fingers
as you bang out another one
the lover you never knew
as you knock a man to the ground
out of life's frustrations
I enjoyed your write
it invigorated me
only sorry I wasn't here
when you laid it all down
my panties would have gotten wet
just seeing your name on the screen
for my next fix from you
power puncher who always
knocks me flat on my ass
with your honest for real ink
I'm only open with my pussy
cum staining the screen
hoping you would lap it up
though I think my cream
isn't to your liking
too in your face with my sexuality
distasteful to your educated palette
a junkie for the man
who hits straight for the jaw
will kick you in the cunt
does things his way
couldn't give a flying fuck
about his endless groupies
pounding out arrogance
which I lick from his
salty body and verse
I've written endless love poems
about you I'm a dope fiend
for your style and hard hitting nature
brutal at times
bringing me to my knees
feasting from your poetic cock
I'm brought into submission
Mastered by the best
sated by your ink
as I lie awake in bed at night
stroking myself to your savage nature
longing to be the nicotine that stains your fingers
as you bang out another one
the lover you never knew
as you knock a man to the ground
out of life's frustrations
I enjoyed your write
it invigorated me
only sorry I wasn't here
when you laid it all down
my panties would have gotten wet
just seeing your name on the screen
Published 21st Jan 2015
| Edited 22nd Jan 2015
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21st Jan 2015 9:05pm
I am not shur who this is about but i am shure he wants to fuck you until your eyes roll back in your head
Great write loved it
Great write loved it
21st Jan 2015 9:25pm
21st Jan 2015 9:10pm
This is a big score
You talking about me ??? I'm so vain, I kinda think this poem is about me ....
Either way.
Creamy Like
You talking about me ??? I'm so vain, I kinda think this poem is about me ....
Either way.
Creamy Like
21st Jan 2015 9:26pm
this poem actually applies to a couple poets whose style I've come to admire yours included :) with love Brenda
21st Jan 2015 9:48pm
21st Jan 2015 9:48pm
21st Jan 2015 10:36pm
Anonymous
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21st Jan 2015 9:40pm
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21st Jan 2015 9:44pm
21st Jan 2015 10:25pm
Wow. It looks like I'm going to have to toughen up to tempt your fate, Lady Crim. I'll do my very best. I can be extremely brutal. Just give me a chance...
21st Jan 2015 11:01pm
Sir Crow I love you just as you are :) thank you for visiting me and making me smile :) with love Crim
21st Jan 2015 11:39pm
And Amor Fati: thats one lucky dog who you've got a candle burning for. A seductive and sultry read as always, but with such tempting elegance.
21st Jan 2015 11:49pm
22nd Jan 2015 6:06am
This is an ego stroking, mind cumming,
brain draining, in your fucking face salute!
Damn, Brenda! Uh, no, make that a loud FUCK!
You know,
C.
brain draining, in your fucking face salute!
Damn, Brenda! Uh, no, make that a loud FUCK!
You know,
C.
22nd Jan 2015 5:10pm
22nd Jan 2015 7:28am
Left my stomach knotted; most certainly direct in language causing imagery. I loved this piece xx
22nd Jan 2015 5:11pm
22nd Jan 2015 8:47am
right, if this doesn't give him wood, he's dead from the waist down. hogtie the man and have your way with him o.O that's my motto
this is fucking amazing to say the very least, beautiful Brenda xo i'm addicted to your ink
this is fucking amazing to say the very least, beautiful Brenda xo i'm addicted to your ink
22nd Jan 2015 5:11pm
Anonymous
22nd Jan 2015 10:28am
Mmmmmm delicious, I know exactly how u feel my Sister. Gorgeous ink about a well deserving Master ;)
22nd Jan 2015 5:12pm
thank you lovely one for such a beautiful comment making me smile wide :) with love Brenda
22nd Jan 2015 5:47pm
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22nd Jan 2015 6:01pm
23rd Jan 2015 5:54am
Wow... How you honor this person...
I'm fucked in the head by what you said
n only wish I had that powerful an effect on
someone as hot as you... Awesomely erotic... :)
I'm fucked in the head by what you said
n only wish I had that powerful an effect on
someone as hot as you... Awesomely erotic... :)
23rd Jan 2015 6:00am
