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Five Minute Write
7:52
Music on repeat to drown out everything I'll sit here and I'll go numb
7:53
I'll let the scream of melodies tear though my mind and go numb
7:54
I'll stab my keyboard with each letter till my fingers go numb
7:55
Click. Click. CLICK. I'll finish this soon as I go numb
7:56
My new song throws my rhythm but not the pain to keep me numb
7;57
Five minutes gone I guess now I'm done.
Music on repeat to drown out everything I'll sit here and I'll go numb
7:53
I'll let the scream of melodies tear though my mind and go numb
7:54
I'll stab my keyboard with each letter till my fingers go numb
7:55
Click. Click. CLICK. I'll finish this soon as I go numb
7:56
My new song throws my rhythm but not the pain to keep me numb
7;57
Five minutes gone I guess now I'm done.
Published 16th Jan 2015
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16th Jan 2015 10:16pm
It seems you handle deadlines well, Miranda. But does the pain you describe come as an obstacle? Do you need to go numb to write effectively? Or can pain be a catalyst? At least I got your name right this time.
19th Jan 2015 3:16am
:) and I do appreciate the correction lol to answer your question rhetorical or not... both on class for assingments that insist on being chipper its best not to think of what hurts and other times letting the my pen serve as a knive to bleed out all that i am going though can paint out an art of its own
17th Jan 2015 2:24am
I like the emphasis and repetition of numb. It makes the reader want to get into your head and see what you are running from
