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backseat driver
long business trip
she is missing him
she calls but no answer
she receives a text
keep your hands on the wheel
she looks around for him
no sign of him anywhere
he says it outloud
keep your hands on the wheel
he leans over the seat
gently kisses her neck
he reaches around
she's already wet
her breathing
heavy like the traffic
removes her shirt
exposing her tits
she doesn't care who passes
or cares who sees
he is in the backseat aiming to please
he slides his fingers in between her thighs
cinching her skirt up to get to the pie
he thrusts his fingers in and out
making her juices spill out
she pulls off the road
she can't take it no more
she bends over the hood
like a good little whore
he fucks her harder than ever before
he pulls her hair
and she begs for more
She shakes and shivers as she cums on his dick
he lifts her up and cums on her tits
if you're tired
I will drive
rest your head on my lap
she is missing him
she calls but no answer
she receives a text
keep your hands on the wheel
she looks around for him
no sign of him anywhere
he says it outloud
keep your hands on the wheel
he leans over the seat
gently kisses her neck
he reaches around
she's already wet
her breathing
heavy like the traffic
removes her shirt
exposing her tits
she doesn't care who passes
or cares who sees
he is in the backseat aiming to please
he slides his fingers in between her thighs
cinching her skirt up to get to the pie
he thrusts his fingers in and out
making her juices spill out
she pulls off the road
she can't take it no more
she bends over the hood
like a good little whore
he fucks her harder than ever before
he pulls her hair
and she begs for more
She shakes and shivers as she cums on his dick
he lifts her up and cums on her tits
if you're tired
I will drive
rest your head on my lap
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Re: backseat driver
Mmmm, yes, more pie, my good little ..... uh, girl. ;)
Passionate images, great story, excellent rhythm.
Natalie, I like your style.
Bravo!
xo,
Chad
Passionate images, great story, excellent rhythm.
Natalie, I like your style.
Bravo!
xo,
Chad
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re: Re: backseat driver
7th Jan 2015 11:08pm
Thank you for the feedback Chad. I appreciate it. Took me a while to get up the courage to write something and post it publicly. I'm glad you liked it.
;)
Natalie
;)
Natalie
Re: backseat driver
5th Jan 2015 5:51am
ahhh... vivid imagery, the scene literally played in my minds eye as I read it. super sexy write!!!
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7th Jan 2015 11:10pm
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6th Jan 2015 11:38am
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7th Jan 2015 11:11pm
Thanks Robb,
Glad you enjoyed it as well. I appreciate you reading and letting me know what you think!
;)
Natalie
Glad you enjoyed it as well. I appreciate you reading and letting me know what you think!
;)
Natalie
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9th Jan 2015 3:22am
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9th Jan 2015 5:38pm
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9th Jan 2015 5:15am
Pretty imaginative & passionate.
The words were practically oozing sex appeal.
Well done
The words were practically oozing sex appeal.
Well done
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re: Re: backseat driver
9th Jan 2015 5:45pm
Thank you for the feedback Ms. Jackson! I truly appreciate your comments!
Natalie
Natalie
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9th Jan 2015 5:46pm
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9th Jan 2015 1:08pm
Mmmmm all that pussy juice makes me thirsty!! lol
Very hott-mess u spilled on the mind lady lol
Very hott-mess u spilled on the mind lady lol
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re: Re: backseat driver
9th Jan 2015 5:49pm
Drink up baby!! Glad you enjoyed it too Poe.
You have helped me come out of my shell.
Thank you!!
You have helped me come out of my shell.
Thank you!!
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Anonymous
9th Jan 2015 5:54pm
Very sexy write.. sounds like an awesome drive.. well written, sweet and messy.. another for the list.. time for a cigarette..
Dave
Dave
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re: Re: backseat driver
9th Jan 2015 7:11pm
Haha! Sometimes I make myself need a cigarette and I don't smoke! ♡
Thanks for the add Dave!
Hope to have some time to please more minds with more ink this weekend!
Thanks for the add Dave!
Hope to have some time to please more minds with more ink this weekend!
Re: backseat driver
11th Jan 2015 7:36pm
Holy Shit, init4thecookie;
this was effing Hotttt.
You've got Me wanting to
take a road trip now...
even around the block. Lol
Great Descriptions.
Pan
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this was effing Hotttt.
You've got Me wanting to
take a road trip now...
even around the block. Lol
Great Descriptions.
Pan
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11th Jan 2015 9:21pm
Thanks for reading Pan. Glad you liked it!!
Meet ya around the block! ; )
Meet ya around the block! ; )
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16th Jan 2015 1:55pm
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16th Jan 2015 9:13pm
Wow. Thanks for the comment Crim! Glad you enjoyed it. Part fiction, part non-fiction. All fantasy! :-)
Natalie
Natalie