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UNHINGED
He shouldn't have spoken to me like that
listing my negatives in every shade of
black and white,
rudely, disrespectfully
trying to destroy my dignity
Shredding the last remaining threads
of love and trust with his insecurities.
He should just let- me- go
I was angry, livid. Feeling my blood boil.
Barely resisting to slap the rudeness
out of him
carelessly flowing out of his mouth,
The mouth, I had kissed thousands
of times becoming a prayer on his tongue.
But, I held on my composure
refusing to go there
a place of humiliation and cold stares.
Putting on my coat, calmly, quietly
unwilling to look; felt nothing but disgust
for a manI barely could recognize.
The crisp air on the sidewalk, whipped
my emotions into a raging storm
running into the cold windy night.
My car, my escape from maddening
pull'n tug, becoming
a prisoner in my own device.
The tears choked my gasping breath
as I reached to my car when I felt
his weight press against me from behind
kissing me passionately, mumbling
"you're such a pain in the ass"
How dare he!
I pushed him off, punching
trying to unchain my soul
feeling his kisses on my hair and skin
turning me around, whispering
"I love you"
Possesing my mouth, biting my lips
holding me tight to his chest.
You know what I need, don't you papi!?!
I screamed into his chest, blood curling
as if someone murdered parts of me.
Pleading, " I can't do this.
It's killing me inside.
This is the end of our destiny.
I must leave, but you need to release me.
Please, I'm begging you, let me go"
He began to cry, re-folding his heart.
"I can't, I don't know how"
grabbing his head with his empty hands,
as if his thoughts were too much to bear.
How could he disrespect and treat
a woman he loves with degradation.
Using the entity of belonging, selectively?
He kept on kissing and didn't let go
tasting so warm and erotic, the hold
he had on my body was overwhelming.
His hand traced the side of my hip
down my thigh as I wrapped
my leg around his hip.
Lifting me on the hood of the car
unbuckled his belt, unzipping.
The probing fingers pushed my panty
aside sliding, stretching my lips open.
The anger and pleasure were intoxicating
pissing the lust out of me with intensity
each slam, delivering his hunger for my
flesh.
He pulled my hair back
intensifying each hit, plummeting
grabbing my ass to make sure he got deep
Our bodies gave away every frustration
to the love raging with anger
pumping with animalistic ravage of a beast
Knowing to well, this could very well be the
last fuck he'll ever receive.
...and just then, I exploded streams of
my lust over his cock and hardened balls
...as he shot up his full hot load in my
aching pussy
...he whispered catching his breath
"I love you so much
and
I hate how I love you so."
Please let me go!
listing my negatives in every shade of
black and white,
rudely, disrespectfully
trying to destroy my dignity
Shredding the last remaining threads
of love and trust with his insecurities.
He should just let- me- go
I was angry, livid. Feeling my blood boil.
Barely resisting to slap the rudeness
out of him
carelessly flowing out of his mouth,
The mouth, I had kissed thousands
of times becoming a prayer on his tongue.
But, I held on my composure
refusing to go there
a place of humiliation and cold stares.
Putting on my coat, calmly, quietly
unwilling to look; felt nothing but disgust
for a manI barely could recognize.
The crisp air on the sidewalk, whipped
my emotions into a raging storm
running into the cold windy night.
My car, my escape from maddening
pull'n tug, becoming
a prisoner in my own device.
The tears choked my gasping breath
as I reached to my car when I felt
his weight press against me from behind
kissing me passionately, mumbling
"you're such a pain in the ass"
How dare he!
I pushed him off, punching
trying to unchain my soul
feeling his kisses on my hair and skin
turning me around, whispering
"I love you"
Possesing my mouth, biting my lips
holding me tight to his chest.
You know what I need, don't you papi!?!
I screamed into his chest, blood curling
as if someone murdered parts of me.
Pleading, " I can't do this.
It's killing me inside.
This is the end of our destiny.
I must leave, but you need to release me.
Please, I'm begging you, let me go"
He began to cry, re-folding his heart.
"I can't, I don't know how"
grabbing his head with his empty hands,
as if his thoughts were too much to bear.
How could he disrespect and treat
a woman he loves with degradation.
Using the entity of belonging, selectively?
He kept on kissing and didn't let go
tasting so warm and erotic, the hold
he had on my body was overwhelming.
His hand traced the side of my hip
down my thigh as I wrapped
my leg around his hip.
Lifting me on the hood of the car
unbuckled his belt, unzipping.
The probing fingers pushed my panty
aside sliding, stretching my lips open.
The anger and pleasure were intoxicating
pissing the lust out of me with intensity
each slam, delivering his hunger for my
flesh.
He pulled my hair back
intensifying each hit, plummeting
grabbing my ass to make sure he got deep
Our bodies gave away every frustration
to the love raging with anger
pumping with animalistic ravage of a beast
Knowing to well, this could very well be the
last fuck he'll ever receive.
...and just then, I exploded streams of
my lust over his cock and hardened balls
...as he shot up his full hot load in my
aching pussy
...he whispered catching his breath
"I love you so much
and
I hate how I love you so."
Please let me go!
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Re: UNHINGED
2nd Jan 2015 11:47am
Anger with lust and a bit of love also a little sad, lol. Covered all emotions beautifully
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2nd Jan 2015 5:28pm
I appreciate the comment and RL add DevilsChild.
I'm glad you felt all the emotions.
Crazy right?
I'm glad you felt all the emotions.
Crazy right?
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2nd Jan 2015 1:23pm
Damn
Savage carnal been there kind of ink
Love stinks, why do we even need it so much ?
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Savage carnal been there kind of ink
Love stinks, why do we even need it so much ?
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2nd Jan 2015 5:47pm
Ah Corazon Poet.....
Love stinks only because some of us who wholeheartedly love and put trust in that person to not hurt us, they end up hurting us the most. True love is unselfish and unconditional love....and that's the primary ingredient in any relationship.
Thanks for commenting ; )
Love stinks only because some of us who wholeheartedly love and put trust in that person to not hurt us, they end up hurting us the most. True love is unselfish and unconditional love....and that's the primary ingredient in any relationship.
Thanks for commenting ; )
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2nd Jan 2015 2:19pm
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2nd Jan 2015 4:38pm
I also keep wondering what street this happened on ?
We nyc brats need perspective
We nyc brats need perspective
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2nd Jan 2015 5:57pm
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Re: UNHINGED
2nd Jan 2015 5:52pm
Wow!
Ms Lena, this is a great in-your-face write filled with
reality, contrasting emotions, intensity and vivid imagery.
Hell-of-a-piece, any way you translate it. :)
Lines filled with real life dichotomy.
Lives evading what once was believed destiny.
I relate to this immensely, very recently living
the 'evading and final sex' themes.
Ms Lena, this is a great in-your-face write filled with
reality, contrasting emotions, intensity and vivid imagery.
Hell-of-a-piece, any way you translate it. :)
Lines filled with real life dichotomy.
Lives evading what once was believed destiny.
I relate to this immensely, very recently living
the 'evading and final sex' themes.
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2nd Jan 2015 6:04pm
Hey VP!
I'm sorry you can relate, but I certainly appreciate your comments.
I feel honored and touched by your words my dear ; )
I've been reading your poems too, you sly dog.
I'm sorry you can relate, but I certainly appreciate your comments.
I feel honored and touched by your words my dear ; )
I've been reading your poems too, you sly dog.
Re: UNHINGED
2nd Jan 2015 6:10pm
Oh my goodness!! Wow ur description of "that pussy" made me hunger sooooooo much lol... Yea I felt the intensity in this!!
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2nd Jan 2015 6:26pm
Did it?
Thanks Poe....I appreciate your comments and always count on you to make me smile ; )
Thanks Poe....I appreciate your comments and always count on you to make me smile ; )
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Anonymous
4th Jan 2015 3:23am
Whoa!!!! What a packed write......anger......truth.....emotions of luv.....lust and hate......luv how you walked us thru them all back and forth......I can relate to this all the way.....enjoyed...xo :)
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4th Jan 2015 8:30pm
It does something wonderful to me to get your approval my love. The emotions in your pieces help me to dig deep into mine ; )
Thank you so much for your constant support mamacita.
Thank you so much for your constant support mamacita.
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10th Jan 2015 7:17am
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10th Jan 2015 7:18pm
In like the words to an Eminem song, "like a tornado meets a volcano".......it's intense.
It's always a pleasure to see you John ; )
It's always a pleasure to see you John ; )
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Anonymous
15th Jan 2015 2:06pm
Brilliant write.. This is so well done.. Thanks so much for sharing..
Dave
Dave
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15th Jan 2015 3:25pm
You made me blush Dave!
Thank you so much for subscribing
It's an honor ; )
Thank you so much for subscribing
It's an honor ; )
Re: UNHINGED
15th Jan 2015 3:09pm
An angry, nasty fuck! Poor car to have witnessed that! But overall real good ink. I like. Come check me out.
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15th Jan 2015 3:31pm
Great to see you CasketSharpe!
Thank you so much
Yeah I can be a bit much ; )
Thank you so much
Yeah I can be a bit much ; )
Re: UNHINGED
26th Jan 2015 5:23pm
Breaking away is hard when it means losing all that sexual chemistry. It could drive anyone unhinged. You're right on top with this one Lena.
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26th Jan 2015 5:57pm
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28th Jan 2015 12:58pm
passionately describes the combustion of passion upon mortal flesh. nicely done
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21st Feb 2015 5:10am
Love, hate, two sides of the same coin. The more we love, more the intensity of our hate. And sex most often is a means of expressing love as much as hate. Your poem is powerful in its intensity and the raw emotions come through strongly.
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21st Feb 2015 5:19am
Thank you mmsiraj!
You are absolutely correct, there was love as much as hate.
You are absolutely correct, there was love as much as hate.
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17th Aug 2015 5:13pm
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17th Aug 2015 5:34pm
Lol.......well thank you for visiting and commenting Spanker ; )
I appreciate The RL add too
I appreciate The RL add too
Re. UNHINGED
26th Aug 2015 7:37pm
wow it's always a pleasure to visit your classic gem... what a fire ink this is :D
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26th Aug 2015 7:56pm
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Tod, I'm incredibly honored by your compliment and understanding.
"Annoying" is a kind word to use.
It was intoxicating and suffocating all at the same time, just painful all around.
"Annoying" is a kind word to use.
It was intoxicating and suffocating all at the same time, just painful all around.
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22nd May 2017 6:00pm
Lena, this is intense and so vivid. The polar opposite emotions serve to escalate the lava flow culminating in an explosion of ecstasy. Brava bella poeta!
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22nd May 2017 8:05pm
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20th Jul 2017 6:18pm
damn this is so intense..full of raw emotion
conflicted sex can be an all consuming wave
very vivid write Lena...yes yessss
conflicted sex can be an all consuming wave
very vivid write Lena...yes yessss
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22nd Jul 2017 8:47pm
Every time I see that you've commented, I get full of joy lol Thank you so much for your visit. Keep them coming papi.