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Empathic
swimming in this poetic lake
we feel each other's lust, love, passion
when the waters are stirred this way
we are on a sensual plane
one that takes us there sexually
meditating on this creamy type ink
I drink it in as if it were honey
sliding down to my womanly places
delicately playing out notes of wanton desire
when darker thoughts are played out
I let my wicked imaginations loose
at this time my hell hounds are unleashed
howling at the moon with the blood lust
I feel curling my lips in a feral way
anger affects me the deepest
red swirls the waters with rage
like a dagger to the heart
feeling the pain that inspired this hate
hugging myself close to my chest
thoughts going black
my eyes roll back in my head
my soul swimming in these deep waters
tasting the fruit born here
in love with the poets
that move me with their naked hearts
lusting, watching, feeling
we feel each other's lust, love, passion
when the waters are stirred this way
we are on a sensual plane
one that takes us there sexually
meditating on this creamy type ink
I drink it in as if it were honey
sliding down to my womanly places
delicately playing out notes of wanton desire
when darker thoughts are played out
I let my wicked imaginations loose
at this time my hell hounds are unleashed
howling at the moon with the blood lust
I feel curling my lips in a feral way
anger affects me the deepest
red swirls the waters with rage
like a dagger to the heart
feeling the pain that inspired this hate
hugging myself close to my chest
thoughts going black
my eyes roll back in my head
my soul swimming in these deep waters
tasting the fruit born here
in love with the poets
that move me with their naked hearts
lusting, watching, feeling
Published 29th Dec 2014
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Anonymous
29th Dec 2014 8:39pm
yep. over and over again.
good write, crimsin. much love.
good write, crimsin. much love.
29th Dec 2014 8:45pm
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29th Dec 2014 10:21pm
This is a wonderful tribute to the poets here, and it reflects beautifully on you, the sultry sharer. I just wish it wasn't anger that affected you the deepest. But there it is. It just goes to show how much you care. Thank you, Lady Crim.
29th Dec 2014 10:32pm
thank you Sir Crow you put a smile on my face with your beautiful comment :) with love Crim
Anonymous
29th Dec 2014 10:33pm
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30th Dec 2014 00:08am
You know my crimson diamond, I love the way you express yourself, it is so unique in style but oh so familiar in heart.
Great piece awesome insight...
Luv
Zazzles xoxo
Great piece awesome insight...
Luv
Zazzles xoxo
30th Dec 2014 00:13am
Anonymous
30th Dec 2014 00:41am
Brenda, i love how you chose to highlight some of those lines like they were headings it really gives some emphasis on the succeeding stanzas.
It feels like a tide the way the thoughts flow back and forth with seductive undertones, in some areas with overtones, making a perfect harmony. Loved it needless to say, well done girl, well done!
It feels like a tide the way the thoughts flow back and forth with seductive undertones, in some areas with overtones, making a perfect harmony. Loved it needless to say, well done girl, well done!
30th Dec 2014 1:00am
30th Dec 2014 00:43am
well defined, Crim. waters raging w/passion & poetry. great place for a nude swim...
30th Dec 2014 1:01am
30th Dec 2014 1:16am
sometimes the back stroke is better than the crawl :-)
excellent Ink as always :-)
Have a Happy New Year :-)
30th Dec 2014 1:49am
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30th Dec 2014 1:17am
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Anonymous
30th Dec 2014 2:03am
Crim,
Your thoughts feed the heart and free the soul! Great visuals!!!
tornado
Your thoughts feed the heart and free the soul! Great visuals!!!
tornado
30th Dec 2014 3:06am
30th Dec 2014 2:15am
Ahh, yes an unveiling, amatory write, Brenda.
A masterful word assembly.
Anger, love and pain
Makin' it rain :)
Sendin' the love,
Chad
A masterful word assembly.
Anger, love and pain
Makin' it rain :)
Sendin' the love,
Chad
30th Dec 2014 3:07am
thank you Chad for the understanding and love you sent my way.. returning the poetic love Brenda :)
30th Dec 2014 6:21am
Reading you is like being with a fuck buddy and almost saying that you love them because the sex is that good.
Ah fuck it. I love the poet you are :)
Ah fuck it. I love the poet you are :)
30th Dec 2014 9:58am
thank you Kitty for the poetic love.. I love the poetess in you as well with love Crim :)
30th Dec 2014 7:24am
Oh Crim, so much sensual beauty to offer, but over (under?) shadowed by molten fury, that the deep waters you describe seem not to be able to quench or cool.
May the object/tool/medium/lover/repairkit to move that on one-day soon lands squarely at your feet.
Shipping gobs of benevolent warmth your way - Frank
May the object/tool/medium/lover/repairkit to move that on one-day soon lands squarely at your feet.
Shipping gobs of benevolent warmth your way - Frank
30th Dec 2014 10:00am
thank you Frank for the understanding comment and love you've shown me :) with love Crim
30th Dec 2014 8:38am
so many poets swimming in ink... some sapiosexual is bound to get wet ;)
this is lovely tribute to how poetry affects us all, Brenda xo much enjoyed
this is lovely tribute to how poetry affects us all, Brenda xo much enjoyed
30th Dec 2014 10:01am
thank you beautiful one for the sexy comment making me smile this morning love Brenda :)
Anonymous
30th Dec 2014 11:11am
This is gorgeous! I totally get that too, I love with the poets and the beautiful, sensual and sexual words they write..and so may of us all insync.. Like a swarm of bees. Love this beautiful lady and love u x
31st Dec 2014 00:35am
30th Dec 2014 4:45pm
Absorbing the swirling emotions in this sea of poetic hearts is simply extraordinary! Blessed be - blue angel
31st Dec 2014 00:36am
31st Dec 2014 5:58pm
Beautifully done. Full of vigor, and passion. A whirlwind of imagery, and desire.
Arrow
Arrow
31st Dec 2014 8:11pm
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1st Jan 2015 9:30pm
A fine piece expressing the mixed emotions of a poets world and how they touch you so.
Beautiful Crim :) x
Beautiful Crim :) x
1st Jan 2015 10:50pm
Anonymous
2nd Jan 2015 10:07pm
this is a lovely tribute, passion filled and beautiful. You are an empath for sure, always have been one to really feel the works o here when truly heartspilled. Talented write!
Wishing you peace and love, Crim
hugs, Miki
Wishing you peace and love, Crim
hugs, Miki
2nd Jan 2015 10:13pm
