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Whipping Dreams (on top of creams)
Swirlin' two, three
drop'it, three, four
the sweetest taboo
with an unbroken bow
the fiery curls
veiling every sin
journeying to the crown
on
every beat
with aches and screams
pounding, bouncing
on
your cage
rocking, wrecking
streaming with sweat and heat
oh baby, can you feel
the brutal whip
of my energy
over your legs
over your eyes
over your manly desires
beneath my sway
beneath my power
beneath the obsessions
crushing your soul
locking
thrashing
pop, two, three
dance, three, four
sweeping erotica
with sexual shades
strip down
my black hose
with your gaze
struggle, fight
the sequined shorts
gracing my hips
torture to the heat
of the curvy black corset
moulding my mounds
a catalyst
between the skins
salty sweat, dripping
drop
by drop
pooling my navel
down to my knees
leaving you breathless
mouthwatering
pleading with your eyes
oh baby, baby
please....
(let me just have a lick)
the sultry dance
shaking the walls
crumbing your pride
creme' de la creme'
arching on you
like a paintbrush
barely stroking
touching
feeling
tasting
your liquid desire
sitting in your chair
props on my stage
I celebrate you
the only one
with the limelight on
shadowing the world
I'm yours,
oh baby,
baby...
'til the music stops.
drop'it, three, four
the sweetest taboo
with an unbroken bow
the fiery curls
veiling every sin
journeying to the crown
on
every beat
with aches and screams
pounding, bouncing
on
your cage
rocking, wrecking
streaming with sweat and heat
oh baby, can you feel
the brutal whip
of my energy
over your legs
over your eyes
over your manly desires
beneath my sway
beneath my power
beneath the obsessions
crushing your soul
locking
thrashing
pop, two, three
dance, three, four
sweeping erotica
with sexual shades
strip down
my black hose
with your gaze
struggle, fight
the sequined shorts
gracing my hips
torture to the heat
of the curvy black corset
moulding my mounds
a catalyst
between the skins
salty sweat, dripping
drop
by drop
pooling my navel
down to my knees
leaving you breathless
mouthwatering
pleading with your eyes
oh baby, baby
please....
(let me just have a lick)
the sultry dance
shaking the walls
crumbing your pride
creme' de la creme'
arching on you
like a paintbrush
barely stroking
touching
feeling
tasting
your liquid desire
sitting in your chair
props on my stage
I celebrate you
the only one
with the limelight on
shadowing the world
I'm yours,
oh baby,
baby...
'til the music stops.
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Re: Whipping Dreams (on top of creams)
29th Dec 2014 4:07pm
Whew!!! Wow that some kinda DANCE!! Lol damn got my 'heat' way up!! lol... Excellently sensual yummy ink my dear :)
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30th Dec 2014 1:17am
Oh yes, thank you darling!
To get that reaction from you made me smile greatly ; )
To get that reaction from you made me smile greatly ; )
Re: Whipping Dreams (on top of creams)
29th Dec 2014 7:04pm
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30th Dec 2014 1:19am
Re: Whipping Dreams (on top of creams)
29th Dec 2014 8:01pm
Señorita Lena, me encanta su danza travieso.
Trabajo excepcional!
"... catalyst ...... oh baby, baby"
Uh, yeah.
Now, pardon me while I attempt to regain
blood flow within my uppermost organ. ;)
Trabajo excepcional!
"... catalyst ...... oh baby, baby"
Uh, yeah.
Now, pardon me while I attempt to regain
blood flow within my uppermost organ. ;)
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re: Re: Whipping Dreams (on top of creams)
Como te gusta la travesura eh Señor VP?
Me encanta come usas Las palabras.
Thank you so much!
It's always an honor getting your comments and extra honor to have your blood flowing ;)
Me encanta come usas Las palabras.
Thank you so much!
It's always an honor getting your comments and extra honor to have your blood flowing ;)
re: re: Re: Whipping Dreams (on top of creams)
30th Dec 2014 2:22am
Mischief?
Yes, but of course, lovely Lena. :)
You already knew it.
It was a rhetorical question, eh? LOL
Yes, but of course, lovely Lena. :)
You already knew it.
It was a rhetorical question, eh? LOL
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30th Dec 2014 2:48am
Travesuras = naughtiness chulo...
I know what I was asking when asking you...lol
Yes, rhetorical ; )
I know what I was asking when asking you...lol
Yes, rhetorical ; )
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30th Dec 2014 5:34am
Mischief / Naughtiness ... subject to interpretation. :)
I know you know. :D
I know you know. :D
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Re: Whipping Dreams (on top of creams)
Anonymous
29th Dec 2014 10:21pm
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re: Re: Whipping Dreams (on top of creams)
30th Dec 2014 1:31am
Lmfaooooo!!!! Omg!
I just can't with you......I was drinking coconut water and I laughed so hard some of it went thru my nose.....oops!
As always Reks, I appreciate your comments and I'm glad I kept it spicy chulo.
I just can't with you......I was drinking coconut water and I laughed so hard some of it went thru my nose.....oops!
As always Reks, I appreciate your comments and I'm glad I kept it spicy chulo.
Re: Whipping Dreams (on top of creams)
29th Dec 2014 10:31pm
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Ah yes, love the scene and the sounds you just painted for me. I'm swaying again.
An honor as always John, gracias ; )
An honor as always John, gracias ; )
Re: Whipping Dreams (on top of creams)
29th Dec 2014 11:24pm
Slippery when wet
Full metal jacket ink
Hellfire fantasy held me spellbound luscious Lena
Full metal jacket ink
Hellfire fantasy held me spellbound luscious Lena
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re: Re: Whipping Dreams (on top of creams)
30th Dec 2014 1:46am
Señor Poetspeak this is an honor!
I've been told I put a spell on people....but it truly makes my day knowing I held it down for you ; )
thank you for such a great comment
I've been told I put a spell on people....but it truly makes my day knowing I held it down for you ; )
thank you for such a great comment
Re: Whipping Dreams (on top of creams)
Anonymous
30th Dec 2014 00:59am
WOW!! another hot ink from the dancing queen!
Lena, you hot mama.. most people try at being sexy you just ooze with sexiness as naturally as water on the sea,
I love the playful whimsical structure and I love how the words dance as being read, almost like the reader is there watching a private dance..the imagery is quite vivid and the tones of hot lava drizzling on that floor makes every one wish they were a dancer with a special audience ;)
Lena, you hot mama.. most people try at being sexy you just ooze with sexiness as naturally as water on the sea,
I love the playful whimsical structure and I love how the words dance as being read, almost like the reader is there watching a private dance..the imagery is quite vivid and the tones of hot lava drizzling on that floor makes every one wish they were a dancer with a special audience ;)
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re: Re: Whipping Dreams (on top of creams)
Ayi Vee, I love when you stop by.... Thank you for noticing my try at playing with the words to make them dance as well. Never used it before, but figured it was the perfect time to use it.
My latest dance classes made this piece possible as I'm embarking on something exciting and sexy with some friendly competition. The guy in the picture was a guest at one of our classes....so friendly and down to earth ; )
My latest dance classes made this piece possible as I'm embarking on something exciting and sexy with some friendly competition. The guy in the picture was a guest at one of our classes....so friendly and down to earth ; )
Re: Whipping Dreams (on top of creams)
30th Dec 2014 6:34am
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31st Dec 2014 11:58am
thank you xmar!
You made me smile a big smile knowing I got the blood moving....lol
Always a pleasure to see you ; )
You made me smile a big smile knowing I got the blood moving....lol
Always a pleasure to see you ; )
Re: Whipping Dreams (on top of creams)
Anonymous
4th Jan 2015 3:26am
Sexy Lena.......what's up girl.....getting beyond sexy here.....I tird to knock.....but I'm sure glad I snuck in and watched in the corner of your mind......fantastic HOT write.....xo :)
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re: Re: Whipping Dreams (on top of creams)
4th Jan 2015 8:32pm
Lol.....thank you so much Flower! Been trying to right a piece like this for a while. My recent dance classes, thru pain and soreness, made it come to life ; )
Xoxo
Xoxo
Re: Whipping Dreams (on top of creams)
15th Jan 2015 3:10pm
Like I said inspiration is all around us. We just have to open our eyes to see it. Real good ink.
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15th Jan 2015 3:41pm
Thank you and I agree on inspiration.
Some of the stuff is crazy...lol
Some of the stuff is crazy...lol
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Anonymous
15th Jan 2015 4:43pm
Brilliant ink.. sensual and seductive, with a dance beat.. very nice.. thanks for sharing..
Dave
Dave
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15th Jan 2015 7:52pm
Re: Whipping Dreams (on top of creams)
26th Jan 2015 5:51pm
your style enhanced the pace of the poem and made it all the more erotic.
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26th Jan 2015 6:29pm
Re. Whipping Dreams (on top of creams)
9th Sep 2015 10:47pm
"leaving you breathless
mouthwatering
pleading with your eyes"
wow aint that the truth! *whew* your moves are poetry in motion... very hot ink Lena :D
mouthwatering
pleading with your eyes"
wow aint that the truth! *whew* your moves are poetry in motion... very hot ink Lena :D
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11th Sep 2015 11:58pm