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the weird birch...
the tree outside my window
often knocks upon the pane...
which is ok, but when it tells
me to turn down the music...
often knocks upon the pane...
which is ok, but when it tells
me to turn down the music...
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Re: the weird birch...
10th Dec 2014 1:47am
weir(e)d
for
sound.....knock'knock...
who's there?
Sonofa Birch,
turn off that noise.
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Re: the weird birch...
10th Dec 2014 7:18am
in this case, i'd like a bit more realism. surely, a tree isn't going to tell anyone in words they can hear to turn down their music...but often times a person has complained of another's loud music...or is this some sort of hallucination? well, personally, i'd probably be less disturbed by the hallucination than by the person below me telling me my footsteps are too loud again...
i love trees...
i love trees...
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Re: the weird birch...
10th Dec 2014 3:38pm
LOL! Now isn't that just like the reincarnated spirit of a Druid...so very annoyed and threatened by anything that 'up-stages' all their
chanting?!?!??
(Personally, though, trees are my kindred spirits...truly adore them..and your very special poetic style!)
chanting?!?!??
(Personally, though, trees are my kindred spirits...truly adore them..and your very special poetic style!)
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Re: the weird birch...
10th Dec 2014 6:45pm
Re. the weird birch...
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