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Dominate Me
release the demon in me
let me ride once again
on your pounding poetic cock
leaving cum stains on parchment
hoping you taste my scent
with your razor sharp tongue
the one that cuts at my cunt
devilish one who delivers the pain
that I crave brazenly
you are my darkest desire incarnate
hard hitter who makes my knees shake
like a prepubescent girl
missing the mind fuck
given when you enter the room
laying it down making me wet
whip me in verses
pissing down my throat
whiskey thoughts
making me submit to your will
chained to your dominant presence
I'm left trembling pussy spread
waiting for you to tear into me
with a Master's wrath
leaving me a broken whore
your toy to be played with
then tucked in a box
until the fire in your cock is ignited again
let me ride once again
on your pounding poetic cock
leaving cum stains on parchment
hoping you taste my scent
with your razor sharp tongue
the one that cuts at my cunt
devilish one who delivers the pain
that I crave brazenly
you are my darkest desire incarnate
hard hitter who makes my knees shake
like a prepubescent girl
missing the mind fuck
given when you enter the room
laying it down making me wet
whip me in verses
pissing down my throat
whiskey thoughts
making me submit to your will
chained to your dominant presence
I'm left trembling pussy spread
waiting for you to tear into me
with a Master's wrath
leaving me a broken whore
your toy to be played with
then tucked in a box
until the fire in your cock is ignited again
Published 29th Nov 2014
| Edited 7th Sep 2015
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29th Nov 2014 5:22pm
Fearless lines, strikingly delivered. "Leaving cum stains on parchment" is one of the lines that stands out for me, an example of how you can apply a pornographic detail to a quality poem and get away with it. You have my respect, Crim.
29th Nov 2014 5:58pm
thank you a kind comment that made me smile this morning Crowfly with respect Crim
29th Nov 2014 5:38pm
Mmm, brenda. This is how to start a Saturday morning!
Hot, moving, honest, erotic, fantastic!
There is always One. ;)
Chad
Hot, moving, honest, erotic, fantastic!
There is always One. ;)
Chad
29th Nov 2014 5:59pm
yes there is always one that inspires such feelings thank you Chad I love your visits with love Brenda:)
29th Nov 2014 5:41pm
oh i've gotta echo Sir VP... 'cept it's evening & i may need a cold shower or a hitachi wand.
erotic, gritty & always compelling... no one does it quite like you, lovely one xo
erotic, gritty & always compelling... no one does it quite like you, lovely one xo
29th Nov 2014 6:01pm
beautiful one you're a Goddess in all writes you lay down I humbly bow to you and thank you for making my week with the add.. with love Brenda
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30th Nov 2014 5:38pm
you gave me a wicked grin with your comment Sir Hades thank you with love Crim :)
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29th Nov 2014 9:06pm
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30th Nov 2014 5:40pm
Anonymous
30th Nov 2014 4:50am
Holy Purple Crim!!! You on a HOT roll here.....won't take long to ignite him......or you.....enjoyed much...xo :)
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30th Nov 2014 12:07pm
Nothing whips through your defenses like a low talking stare and an unfumbling wantoness cascading its hands down and around the backside of your needs...
30th Nov 2014 5:42pm
30th Nov 2014 4:45pm
Your submissive hunger is tantalizing. There is nothing like a razor sharp tongue to put you on your knees. Sexy poetic porn! Love it, Crim!
30th Nov 2014 5:42pm
Anonymous
1st Dec 2014 3:46am
Crim,
No one puts it all out there like you! All I can say is spur it and ride it! :-)
tornado
No one puts it all out there like you! All I can say is spur it and ride it! :-)
tornado
1st Dec 2014 8:24pm
1st Dec 2014 5:19pm
Steamy hot n a tempting evocative read, agrees to tornado's words above.ignition is 'the' word here;) tq fr the read, Crim.
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Anonymous
2nd Dec 2014 9:27pm
Speechless, this is brilliant work.. thanks for sharing..
Dave
Dave
2nd Dec 2014 10:09pm
Anonymous
6th Dec 2014 8:16pm
Darkly delicious. Loving your style girl! 😜
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18th Dec 2014 10:52pm
Then you'll never be put away, because my fire stays constantly ignited. Real good ink I truly enjoyed.
19th Dec 2014 5:55pm
