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Little Girl
The darkness that consumes
contorts and twists
has entered me
raping my soul
festering wounds
corpses walking around
my emotional graveyard
refusing to be laid to rest
with putrid whispers
they defile my thoughts
I do the dance macabre
with a deceiving smile
I wear my lies well
spiraling down
in the cool depths
where the welts don't sting anymore
self deception a balm
I'm not losing my sanity
the symphony of voices I hear
just ghosts of the past
gaining entry again
to a little girl
who locked her door
not knowing the devil
had a key
contorts and twists
has entered me
raping my soul
festering wounds
corpses walking around
my emotional graveyard
refusing to be laid to rest
with putrid whispers
they defile my thoughts
I do the dance macabre
with a deceiving smile
I wear my lies well
spiraling down
in the cool depths
where the welts don't sting anymore
self deception a balm
I'm not losing my sanity
the symphony of voices I hear
just ghosts of the past
gaining entry again
to a little girl
who locked her door
not knowing the devil
had a key
Published 24th Nov 2014
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24th Nov 2014 6:52am
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24th Nov 2014 2:10pm
24th Nov 2014 4:23pm
24th Nov 2014 3:23pm
"I do the dance macabre.
with a deceiving smile..."
That clearly says it all for me...
Powerful, dark.,,raw...wow
with a deceiving smile..."
That clearly says it all for me...
Powerful, dark.,,raw...wow
24th Nov 2014 4:23pm
24th Nov 2014 5:38pm
25th Nov 2014 1:16am
24th Nov 2014 5:55pm
"I do the dance macabre / with a deceiving smile / I wear my lies well." Really intriguing, sinister and sly. I love macabre imagery when it's so elegantly presented. Thank you, Crim.
25th Nov 2014 1:17am
24th Nov 2014 7:49pm
you always give me chills when you make yourself so vulnerable on the page, Brenda xo beautiful ink, lovely lady
25th Nov 2014 1:18am
25th Nov 2014 12:05pm
the little girl of innocence submits to those ghosts of past...well visualized darkness n feels how one is all but helpless to these conquers. Btfl pen, tq fr the read Crim:)
25th Nov 2014 4:12pm
26th Nov 2014 2:28am
The devil comes calling and he brings darkness, pain and despair. I really enjoyed this dark write Crim.
27th Nov 2014 00:07am
28th Nov 2014 11:49pm
Outstanding work shared here, Brenda.
The devil we know is often better
than the devil we don't ....
Keep writing and sharing,
Chad
The devil we know is often better
than the devil we don't ....
Keep writing and sharing,
Chad
29th Nov 2014 4:14pm
29th Nov 2014 00:48am
I agree with John! Wow, I really love this one. It is a journey worth savoring. Bows to you, Crim!
29th Nov 2014 4:15pm
thank you beautiful Angel for such a gracious comment and add with love Crim :)
Anonymous
30th Nov 2014 4:53am
Oh ya Crim......you're back writing with the fire in your soul.....excellent write....xo :)
30th Nov 2014 5:38pm
Anonymous
2nd Dec 2014 9:30pm
much respect.. excellent write..
Dave
Dave
2nd Dec 2014 10:10pm
