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'Poet's Song'
*Originally wrote this a while back...
Decided to share it with you all here :)*
And now once again
thoughts seep in,
I think not of why
or how it begins
I just know that I
need to release this
freed, from my mind
I arrange all the pieces...
I realize that so many times
spent in front of this pc,
is becoming a bit too much
for my small family...
Yet even knowing,
I can’t stop...it’s so ingrained
though, with a little
more effort I might,
before I go insane
At this point from my heart
I’d like to say,
Thanks to my younger brothers
who continue inspire me everyday....
Of course, I’m not forgetting
the rest of my family’
just wanted to focus
on the ones who poetically
ride and die with me...
Now, what I keep learning
each and everytime I've read
alot of comments from poets
who don’t like rhyme...
Well, for me just to put it out there
and make it real clear,
I choose to write like this
because to me it’s like
music to my ears
Now that’s not saying
I don’t appreciate other forms,
It’s just that for me it’s helps
when I think outside the norm.
For those who know me
I hunger for knowledge
so please feed me more,
and for the ones who don’t…
hey, is it okay with you
if I go, and explore?
Laugh... yes I do as much as I can,
I feel it’s important don’t you man?
Some… if they follow me
on the regular know, I try
to keep it fresh not bland.
and I’m starting to accept
now when people say I’m gifted,
yet, I really get my joy
when I help another to get lifted...
I truly like it when they shine!
I realize, and I’m not blind,
others may look at me and laugh,
and criticize about why I’m so kind
Well.. I'm a lot more comfortable now
with my alotted role in this life…
and thanks to an ever increasing
knowledge of self, I’m feeling quite nice...
Decided to share it with you all here :)*
And now once again
thoughts seep in,
I think not of why
or how it begins
I just know that I
need to release this
freed, from my mind
I arrange all the pieces...
I realize that so many times
spent in front of this pc,
is becoming a bit too much
for my small family...
Yet even knowing,
I can’t stop...it’s so ingrained
though, with a little
more effort I might,
before I go insane
At this point from my heart
I’d like to say,
Thanks to my younger brothers
who continue inspire me everyday....
Of course, I’m not forgetting
the rest of my family’
just wanted to focus
on the ones who poetically
ride and die with me...
Now, what I keep learning
each and everytime I've read
alot of comments from poets
who don’t like rhyme...
Well, for me just to put it out there
and make it real clear,
I choose to write like this
because to me it’s like
music to my ears
Now that’s not saying
I don’t appreciate other forms,
It’s just that for me it’s helps
when I think outside the norm.
For those who know me
I hunger for knowledge
so please feed me more,
and for the ones who don’t…
hey, is it okay with you
if I go, and explore?
Laugh... yes I do as much as I can,
I feel it’s important don’t you man?
Some… if they follow me
on the regular know, I try
to keep it fresh not bland.
and I’m starting to accept
now when people say I’m gifted,
yet, I really get my joy
when I help another to get lifted...
I truly like it when they shine!
I realize, and I’m not blind,
others may look at me and laugh,
and criticize about why I’m so kind
Well.. I'm a lot more comfortable now
with my alotted role in this life…
and thanks to an ever increasing
knowledge of self, I’m feeling quite nice...
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Re: 'Poet's Song'
28th Nov 2014 5:41am
Poetik...you will always be a poet no matter what genre of poetry you write. :)
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28th Nov 2014 12:34pm
Aaawwww thank you my sweet one!
My first smile today n I truly appreciate it
n you always! :)
My first smile today n I truly appreciate it
n you always! :)
Re: 'Poet's Song'
28th Nov 2014 6:46am
This is a great example of poetic expression. Raw, emotional, and to the point. I liked it, keep up the good work.
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re: Re: 'Poet's Song'
28th Nov 2014 12:35pm
Hey thank you kindly dude, I'm deeply grateful
for time n thoughts n will return the favor soon :)
for time n thoughts n will return the favor soon :)
Re: 'Poet's Song'
28th Nov 2014 7:30am
Reminded me a title of one poem: 'The nightingale cannot stop singing' :) You`re true poet, thanks for sharing this piece.
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re: Re: 'Poet's Song'
28th Nov 2014 12:42pm
Thank you my dear, you're too wonderful
n I feel so lucky... :) appreciate you much
n I feel so lucky... :) appreciate you much
Re: 'Poet's Song'
28th Nov 2014 8:03am
Your poetic heart & mind aligns with your moniker, there's no doubt about that when reading this flow.
A great write !
A great write !
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re: Re: 'Poet's Song'
28th Nov 2014 12:46pm
Wow... I'm humbled n feel truly honored my sweet friend!
Thank you soooooo much for your lovely
praise n support :)
Thank you soooooo much for your lovely
praise n support :)
Re: 'Poet's Song'
28th Nov 2014 10:39am
i gotta say, i'm not too fond of rhyme me'self... but it's part of your style [&] works so damn well with the pace of your poetry.
fuck the nay sayers and pen on, poet! i always dig your flow ^.^
fuck the nay sayers and pen on, poet! i always dig your flow ^.^
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re: Re: 'Poet's Song'
28th Nov 2014 12:49pm
Aaaawwww mami mi amore!
Gosh yea... You know I'm like doin cartwheels n backflips
now right? ;) lol thank you truly for super
sweet support!!! :)
Gosh yea... You know I'm like doin cartwheels n backflips
now right? ;) lol thank you truly for super
sweet support!!! :)
Re: 'Poet's Song'
28th Nov 2014 7:44pm
PM...what I've learnt in my very short time of writing is that you must write to whatever style calls you...
Piss off what others say...if it makes your heart sing ...then let it soar...
I love all the different ways you write....
You are still and always will be my inspiration.... :)
Piss off what others say...if it makes your heart sing ...then let it soar...
I love all the different ways you write....
You are still and always will be my inspiration.... :)
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re: Re: 'Poet's Song'
29th Nov 2014 12:42pm
I agree n needless to say, I've long since
gave a fuck what the naysayers said lol
I know nothing else than to write however it strikes
me... N aaaaaawwwww I'm flattered to hear
I inspire you! Double thanks for that n your continued support
my dear :)
gave a fuck what the naysayers said lol
I know nothing else than to write however it strikes
me... N aaaaaawwwww I'm flattered to hear
I inspire you! Double thanks for that n your continued support
my dear :)
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29th Nov 2014 12:43pm
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29th Nov 2014 3:55pm
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29th Nov 2014 7:37pm
Re: 'Poet's Song'
29th Nov 2014 10:11pm
"and I’m starting to accept
now when people say I’m gifted,
yet, I really get my joy
when I help another to get lifted... "
You always get me lifted, dear Poe.
Thanks for sharing this great piece
with us.
now when people say I’m gifted,
yet, I really get my joy
when I help another to get lifted... "
You always get me lifted, dear Poe.
Thanks for sharing this great piece
with us.
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re: Re: 'Poet's Song'
30th Nov 2014 12:39pm
Aaaaawwww u sweet woman! Thank you
so much n for always having my back Chi!
Appreciate you much :)
so much n for always having my back Chi!
Appreciate you much :)
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30th Nov 2014 1:19am
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30th Nov 2014 12:46pm
I shall try my sweetest one... Thank you
I'm happy you liked n as always appreciate
you greatly! :)
I'm happy you liked n as always appreciate
you greatly! :)
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30th Nov 2014 2:36am
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30th Nov 2014 12:50pm
Aaaawwww c'mere n let hug you!
Mmmmmmmmaahh! too sweet you are my dear!
thank u so much :)
Mmmmmmmmaahh! too sweet you are my dear!
thank u so much :)
Re: 'Poet's Song'
1st Dec 2014 9:33am
Not an organized rhyme scheme fan... but I like the rebellious, 'you're not going to stop me' attitude about it. A poet is a being of unconvention. We speak and we don't give a shit who whines or objects. We'll go so far as "Howl"...
Good job, you captured that.
Good job, you captured that.
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re: Re: 'Poet's Song'
1st Dec 2014 2:43pm
Aaaawwww my dear, sure miss hearing from you!
Happy to see you visiting on once more, n yea
I love to rhyme, but I'm not stuck doing only
that style, just happens to come natural to me :)
Appreciate u n thank u much my sweetheart :)
Happy to see you visiting on once more, n yea
I love to rhyme, but I'm not stuck doing only
that style, just happens to come natural to me :)
Appreciate u n thank u much my sweetheart :)