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The Cup
Sometimes I dream of sinking
Deep beneath the sea
Morning finds me thinking
Of thus setting myself free
I gaze into the mirror
And watch my face succumb to age
I try to brush away my fear
And scrape off the growth of rage
I go out to face the day
And cringe beneath the sun
I've got to find some way
To combat this urge to run
Then I make my appearance
Try to find some way to share
But will they grant me clearance
If my words won't lead them anywhere?
It turns out that I'm wrong
To think that I'm adrift
They tell me that I'm strong
They say I've got a gift
There's something here to cherish
Someone offering a hand
He won't let me perish
Or crawl through that scorching sand
So I no longer dream of sinking
Deep beneath the sea
Drowning turns to drinking
From the cup God offers me.
Deep beneath the sea
Morning finds me thinking
Of thus setting myself free
I gaze into the mirror
And watch my face succumb to age
I try to brush away my fear
And scrape off the growth of rage
I go out to face the day
And cringe beneath the sun
I've got to find some way
To combat this urge to run
Then I make my appearance
Try to find some way to share
But will they grant me clearance
If my words won't lead them anywhere?
It turns out that I'm wrong
To think that I'm adrift
They tell me that I'm strong
They say I've got a gift
There's something here to cherish
Someone offering a hand
He won't let me perish
Or crawl through that scorching sand
So I no longer dream of sinking
Deep beneath the sea
Drowning turns to drinking
From the cup God offers me.
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Re: The Cup
27th Nov 2014 3:50pm
With deep reflection, and I like that it ends on a positive note... Great poem.
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27th Nov 2014 4:16pm
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Anonymous
27th Nov 2014 6:52pm
Excellent write, can totally relate..except the last line.
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27th Nov 2014 8:47pm
Thanks, Muse. The last line's optional, of course. It's not something I ordinarily talk about. I'm glad you can relate to the rest of it. Sort of. I hope you didn't experience this state of mind. Waking up feeling like taking a dive is not exactly desirable.
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Anonymous
28th Nov 2014 9:53am
Almost every day sweetheart..
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Writing helps, as you probably well know. There's faith to be had in the written word, saith the crowfly. It's therapeutic sometimes. I wake up in a state of fear almost every morning. It fades as the day progresses. I just try to keep moving. And writing.
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Anonymous
29th Nov 2014 10:59am
Yes I totally understand u..when I can't handle stuff I put pen on paper and it just flows outta me..then I read back and I'm like Whoa..did I just write that shit..then It makes sense and u can try and deal with my feelings. Poetry is my lifeline hunni.
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27th Nov 2014 9:59pm
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29th Nov 2014 1:24am
I think many can relate to you in this case. I have thought of it so many times too but never had the courage. So I just write it away. Good read Crowfly.
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29th Nov 2014 1:36am
Thanks, Grace. I'm not a particularly brave person. But faith counteracts fear, at least for me. Doesn't always work. But when it does, wow! Writing things out is beneficial as well, of course. In fact it's helping right now...
Re: The Cup
29th Nov 2014 6:03pm
Stay in the mix. Long as you got a voice, you got to serve it. That's first choice, first service. Somehow everything that lived was given advantage... But damn, you got the angle on language.
That's a hard road to bear. So keep making it look easy crowfly. Those who do it because they fucking neeeed to, rep it for all of us.
That's a hard road to bear. So keep making it look easy crowfly. Those who do it because they fucking neeeed to, rep it for all of us.
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Re: The Cup
29th Nov 2014 8:09pm
I'm glad it looks easy. Sometimes it actually is, when there's inspiration and this kind of encouragement. Comments like yours help keep me going. Thank you, Loki.