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Morning Muse
A final offer from my muse
To guide me to some grace
Maybe lend her flame to light my fuse
And help me to save face
She says "Hun just let me light your fire
So we can shed some light
One breath and I'll take you higher
And demonstrate an angel's flight."
I just simply can't say no
As she provides me with that lift
She says "Hun we're going with your flow
Just consider this my gift."
To guide me to some grace
Maybe lend her flame to light my fuse
And help me to save face
She says "Hun just let me light your fire
So we can shed some light
One breath and I'll take you higher
And demonstrate an angel's flight."
I just simply can't say no
As she provides me with that lift
She says "Hun we're going with your flow
Just consider this my gift."
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re: Re: Morning Muse
26th Nov 2014 4:32pm
Thanks, PoetSpeak. Maybe a crowfly should be able to wing it on his own, but I usually need some help. I get by with a little help from my friends.
Re: Morning Muse
26th Nov 2014 4:23pm
Simple and sweet!The repetition is creating a nice flow to the read!
love it!
love it!
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26th Nov 2014 4:27pm
Oh dear Crow such a beauty in motion
The way ur pen flows takes us on the joirney
With u n ur muse
The way ur pen flows takes us on the joirney
With u n ur muse
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