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Slow Dance
She speaks of fear
But the fear is shared
So diminishes it hideous strength
Two lovers gaze in contemplation
On the darkness of their lives
They speak of demons
Monsters of their past
An abusive spouse
Brutal friends
Families torn and frayed
All these shadows still waited
Invading their dreams
But the two hold each other
Whispering consolations
Lighting a fire within themselves
Then allowing that flame to pass
Their pain retreats further, defeated
And the celebration begins
A slow dance under midnight's sky.
But the fear is shared
So diminishes it hideous strength
Two lovers gaze in contemplation
On the darkness of their lives
They speak of demons
Monsters of their past
An abusive spouse
Brutal friends
Families torn and frayed
All these shadows still waited
Invading their dreams
But the two hold each other
Whispering consolations
Lighting a fire within themselves
Then allowing that flame to pass
Their pain retreats further, defeated
And the celebration begins
A slow dance under midnight's sky.
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Re: Slow Dance
24th Nov 2014 4:20pm
The final destination... "a slow dance under midnight's sky."
Sublime !
I find truth, beauty and elegance in your words, dear crowfly.
An awesome scribble, that's for sure.
Sublime !
I find truth, beauty and elegance in your words, dear crowfly.
An awesome scribble, that's for sure.
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re: Re: Slow Dance
24th Nov 2014 4:26pm
Thank you, shadow. The dance is slow, but it's one of victory. One step at a time.
Re: Slow Dance
24th Nov 2014 4:28pm
Yes, there's no better, stronger consolation then the one found in love... One more beautiful poem, crowfly.
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24th Nov 2014 4:35pm
Re: Slow Dance
24th Nov 2014 4:40pm
This brought tears to my eyes
This piece is so beautiful n touching
Crow u r a man with a beautiful heart n soul
Through this write u have shared that with all of us
Thank you so much
This piece is so beautiful n touching
Crow u r a man with a beautiful heart n soul
Through this write u have shared that with all of us
Thank you so much
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re: Re: Slow Dance
24th Nov 2014 4:47pm
Beauty is in the eye of this beholder. I just have to keep my focus. Thank you, Belle.
Re: Slow Dance
24th Nov 2014 5:29pm
I love how you eradicate the fear and pain with such beauty.. with respect Crim
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25th Nov 2014 4:17pm
Re: Slow Dance
24th Nov 2014 7:45pm
there cannot be dark shadows without light... it's a small consolation but a little ray of hope, no?
*sigh*
tres belle, cher.
*sigh*
tres belle, cher.
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25th Nov 2014 4:15pm
Re: Slow Dance
24th Nov 2014 10:34pm
splendid emotion in your poem. love heals; slow dancing speeds up the process...
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Re: Slow Dance
27th Nov 2014 3:20pm
Some flowers only bloom in the dark. Thanks for writing this crowfly.
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Re: Slow Dance
11th Dec 2014 9:08pm
A beautiful poem. Incredible emotion.
Thanks for sharing this crowfly. :)
Thanks for sharing this crowfly. :)
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11th Dec 2014 9:11pm