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Our Dance
Take my hand
Join me please
Here in the dark
Dance with me Sir
A slow and steady sway
Our hips moving sensously
In perfect time together
Feeling each beat in our souls
Wrap me in those strong arms
Pull me in tighter
As your hands wander
We melt into one another
Our passion burns
Needs increasing rapidly
Lay me down softly
Make love to me all night
Join me please
Here in the dark
Dance with me Sir
A slow and steady sway
Our hips moving sensously
In perfect time together
Feeling each beat in our souls
Wrap me in those strong arms
Pull me in tighter
As your hands wander
We melt into one another
Our passion burns
Needs increasing rapidly
Lay me down softly
Make love to me all night
Published 19th Nov 2014
| Edited 20th Nov 2014
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19th Nov 2014 1:18pm
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19th Nov 2014 3:45pm
Sweet write Ms. Belle!!
Pleasure too read sweets!!
You set a Wonderful scene!!
Sir Lancelott
I got 2 new pieces
Pleasure too read sweets!!
You set a Wonderful scene!!
Sir Lancelott
I got 2 new pieces
20th Nov 2014 2:59pm
19th Nov 2014 3:52pm
Oh yes! Such a sensual dance leading to intense love making. Hot write.
20th Nov 2014 3:01pm
Nothing like setting the perfect atmosphere for a perfect night together
So happy u enjoyed it Fantasy
So happy u enjoyed it Fantasy
19th Nov 2014 4:18pm
If we dancing butt naked just jump up on it and wrap your legs around my waist.
20th Nov 2014 3:03pm
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20th Nov 2014 3:04pm
20th Nov 2014 3:07pm
So very true Mr Feddeler
Too many men dont get that such a simple thing can b so wonderful. Glad to see u do darlin
Thanx for the read
Too many men dont get that such a simple thing can b so wonderful. Glad to see u do darlin
Thanx for the read
20th Nov 2014 2:31am
20th Nov 2014 3:12pm
21st Nov 2014 1:55am
The passion burns, but you say "lay me down softly." Such a blend of intensity and tenderness is hard to find. "Our Dance" smolders. May I have the next?
23rd Nov 2014 00:18am
With the right man tenderness is extremely stimulating
So happy u enjoyed my dance darlin
So happy u enjoyed my dance darlin
21st Nov 2014 3:00pm
Into the night
Drifting and fading
Laid to rest
With passion
Of hands
Of carnal gripping
Drifting and fading
Laid to rest
With passion
Of hands
Of carnal gripping
23rd Nov 2014 00:21am
Dripping pearls
Gripping of flesh
Passion n tenderness
Touching the soul of another
Thanx for the read my dear As
Gripping of flesh
Passion n tenderness
Touching the soul of another
Thanx for the read my dear As
22nd Nov 2014 5:08am
Very nice, erotic, sensual poem you've written there, Belle! I'm quite fond of writing these types of poems myself... if you like you can check out my poem "Naughty Mistress" which is filled with all kinds of erotic elements though I've added a semi-mystical level to it that plays nicely with the sensual aspects. I must say, though, you do have a gift for sensual writing! I admire a girl who can work such magic with words. ;)
23rd Nov 2014 00:22am
Oh ty so very much darlin
Ill b sure n check it very soon
Thanx for giving me a read
Ill b sure n check it very soon
Thanx for giving me a read
23rd Nov 2014 3:33pm
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19th Jul 2017 6:15am
Belle, you set such a romantic sensual tone with your words. I hadn't read this one before. Brava!
