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The last time I stayed here,
You were right beside me,
Drunk.

You hit on me then.

Written by idolwords

(Lacey Ann)

Published 11th Nov 2014

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Re: 697

11th Nov 2014 4:28pm

A minimalistic drama that leaves the reader behind, wondering what has happened since then. - Well done! :-)

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Re: 697

11th Nov 2014 4:41pm

it is really confusing

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13th Nov 2014 7:46pm

How so?

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Re: 697

11th Nov 2014 5:09pm

actually, I think it says all
it needs to, and damn well, too...

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