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Don't Know Much...
Don't
know
much
Yet,
I feel
so much
more...
Can't
recite
any of the
'poetic greats'
though,
I share
pains they bore...
don't
know
of any facts
without
a pinch
of fiction...
yet I'm ever
made aware
of the human
condition...
don't
know how
the heart
flutters
from
a simple
smile
but if for me?
to receive
it's warmth
I'll travel
the extra mile...
Don't
know much
about
so many things
yet, I do know
that each
moment
I breathe
I hope...
for whatever
comforts
true joy
brings...
know
much
Yet,
I feel
so much
more...
Can't
recite
any of the
'poetic greats'
though,
I share
pains they bore...
don't
know
of any facts
without
a pinch
of fiction...
yet I'm ever
made aware
of the human
condition...
don't
know how
the heart
flutters
from
a simple
smile
but if for me?
to receive
it's warmth
I'll travel
the extra mile...
Don't
know much
about
so many things
yet, I do know
that each
moment
I breathe
I hope...
for whatever
comforts
true joy
brings...
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Re: Don't Know Much...
17th Oct 2014 1:26am
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17th Oct 2014 2:15am
Re: Don't Know Much...
17th Oct 2014 1:10pm
PM darlin this left me feelin so peaceful
Ty....i needed a smile this mornin
It left me feelin like i had just been given a hug.
Ty....i needed a smile this mornin
It left me feelin like i had just been given a hug.
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re: Re: Don't Know Much...
17th Oct 2014 1:34pm
Mmmmm n ur comment felt like a hug back! Thank u sweetheart, truly appreciate your support always :)
Re: Don't Know Much...
17th Oct 2014 1:23pm
enjoyed the humbleness is this piece..Absolutley love the smile stazas..
"don't
know how
the heart
flutters
from
a simple
smile
but if for me?
to receive
it's warmth
I'll travel
the extra mile... "
"don't
know how
the heart
flutters
from
a simple
smile
but if for me?
to receive
it's warmth
I'll travel
the extra mile... "
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re: Re: Don't Know Much...
17th Oct 2014 1:35pm
Thank u my dear, yea I guess I was in a mellow state of mind
at that moment lol... Appreciate you :)
at that moment lol... Appreciate you :)
Re: Don't Know Much...
17th Oct 2014 1:29pm
Poe, idk whatcha been smoking lately Papi but whatever's influencing this incredible vibe you're on... i need me some that. steller ink
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re: Re: Don't Know Much...
17th Oct 2014 1:43pm
Lmao smoking?? lol shit I wish! nah my beauty
Nothing but God's hand guiding mine (I believe)
I'm just the vessel, but I truly truly am humbled
n deeply appreciate you mami... :)
Nothing but God's hand guiding mine (I believe)
I'm just the vessel, but I truly truly am humbled
n deeply appreciate you mami... :)
Re: Don't Know Much...
17th Oct 2014 1:33pm
You know a lot brother
You know passion, love and the human spirit
Translation: you're a dude !!
Rock on son
You know passion, love and the human spirit
Translation: you're a dude !!
Rock on son
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re: Re: Don't Know Much...
17th Oct 2014 1:48pm
Aaaawwwww bro. Damn, stop that u made somethin
'git in eye' lol... Seriously, I'm most honored
by your thoughtful comment n happy to have
your support always! Peace n poetic love to u bro. :)
'git in eye' lol... Seriously, I'm most honored
by your thoughtful comment n happy to have
your support always! Peace n poetic love to u bro. :)
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17th Oct 2014 1:48pm
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17th Oct 2014 1:49pm
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Re: Don't Know Much...
18th Oct 2014 7:55am
Sometimes, you get it and at times you don't but when you do, its like a mind blowing read, leaving you gasping or just plain slain. Thats how I feel when I read some of the poems here. Yours included. Good read, Poetik.
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18th Oct 2014 12:01pm
Aaaaawwww.... Gosh I'm again flattered!
So so sweet my friend, thank you! Appreciate you greatly
:)
So so sweet my friend, thank you! Appreciate you greatly
:)
re: Re: Don't Know Much...
19th Oct 2014 1:59pm
Thanks bro. mayhap I should zip it huh? lol
truly, appreciate your support always :)
truly, appreciate your support always :)
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Anonymous
21st Oct 2014 4:33am
Sweet Poet.....your soul is ever sharing and beautiful. Luv this. Xo :)
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21st Oct 2014 4:48am
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23rd Oct 2014 7:24am
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23rd Oct 2014 1:47pm
Sweet desire, my friend your constant praise
only helps to inspire me to continue to keep
trying to meet your expectations... :) thank u always! :)
only helps to inspire me to continue to keep
trying to meet your expectations... :) thank u always! :)
re: Re: Don't Know Much...
31st Oct 2014 1:23pm
Wow... This touched me... Thank u so much sweetie!
Truly appreciate your support :)
Truly appreciate your support :)
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5th Nov 2014 1:22am