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Family Night
Screaming inside
watching outside
touching reality
seeing monsters
closed doors
hiding lies
heavy curtains
dark places
smiling faces
no one knows
bloody lips
twist and shout
not a dance
black and blue
and a drop of red
the color of love.
watching outside
touching reality
seeing monsters
closed doors
hiding lies
heavy curtains
dark places
smiling faces
no one knows
bloody lips
twist and shout
not a dance
black and blue
and a drop of red
the color of love.
Published 12th Oct 2014
| Edited 17th Jun 2017
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Anonymous
12th Oct 2014 5:07pm
Every family has got their own secrets, one never knows what happens behind the curtains..well penned Mr. Hash, i like the precision of your words, great delivery.
12th Oct 2014 11:23pm
12th Oct 2014 5:11pm
A family nightmare.
Hidden hurts
unshouted words
heavy touches
purple blotches ...
Struck a chord with me, impressing write, Hashman.
Hidden hurts
unshouted words
heavy touches
purple blotches ...
Struck a chord with me, impressing write, Hashman.
12th Oct 2014 11:29pm
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13th Oct 2014 5:35am
Has a weight to it without doubt my friend
hopefully not YOUR own weight to carry ...
hopefully not YOUR own weight to carry ...
14th Oct 2014 1:02am
13th Oct 2014 3:18pm
this evokes a very emotional reaction from me mister hash... hits so close to home. well penned.
14th Oct 2014 1:11am
14th Oct 2014 4:55pm
Wow this made me think of so many issues that can be hidden in families that look okay to the world, but inside it's so not it.
Very moving
Very moving
16th Oct 2014 7:43pm
18th Oct 2014 8:07am
I'm right on with you Hashman. Keep a clear head, write it out, and scream it down. Such as this; good write.
19th Oct 2014 2:23pm
Anonymous
21st Oct 2014 11:56am
amazing what lies just behind and beneath....
great scribe, hashman
keep keepin on, my friend :)
great scribe, hashman
keep keepin on, my friend :)
23rd Oct 2014 1:28am
Wow! Sounds like a typical night to me. Enjoyed this drop of reality. Xo :)
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7th Dec 2014 6:35am
Wow. Im so glad you commented on my work; as it provided the opportunity to link to your posts. I'll never look at the colour red the same way again. Awesome!
7th Dec 2014 11:51am
