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Too Cold for Hell
Words can't speak
what action has done
time can't fix
the pieces that broke
eyes can't see
the whirlpool of agony
love can't hide
the hate you master
hell can't change
your frozen heart.
what action has done
time can't fix
the pieces that broke
eyes can't see
the whirlpool of agony
love can't hide
the hate you master
hell can't change
your frozen heart.
Published 29th Sep 2014
| Edited 26th Feb 2019
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29th Sep 2014 6:03pm
Maybe thats why they say till hell freezes over. Empathise with the sentiment though. :) good write nonetheless, Hashman.
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Anonymous
29th Sep 2014 8:12pm
powerful..i know the feeling too well. nice write, hash
peace
peace
30th Sep 2014 1:11am
29th Sep 2014 9:40pm
Whoa... I hope this is just a creative spill
bro. Becuz I can imagine how this would hurt!
Still it's very well expressed
bro. Becuz I can imagine how this would hurt!
Still it's very well expressed
30th Sep 2014 1:15am
pain,deep down inside...yea i'm good just listening to some Johnny Cash songs (thanks bro) :)
29th Sep 2014 10:54pm
The place that this is coming from I fear, I know too well. Stay strong Hashman.
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