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'Sparkle'
*inspired by the singer Jewel*
Within his
presence
he's spied
A Diamond,
her essence
turned tough
formerly a 'gem'
in the rough
yet refurbished,
anew
he knew
it'd shine...
feels like
a new
Jewel
to mind...
Within his
presence
he's spied
A Diamond,
her essence
turned tough
formerly a 'gem'
in the rough
yet refurbished,
anew
he knew
it'd shine...
feels like
a new
Jewel
to mind...
Published 23rd Sep 2014
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23rd Sep 2014 6:01pm
23rd Sep 2014 6:52pm
I like that you like it! lol
Thank u my sweet one, I'm grateful as always :)
Thank u my sweet one, I'm grateful as always :)
23rd Sep 2014 6:12pm
It takes clear eyes to look at someone and only see the best in them...Beautiful Scribe Sir @-
23rd Sep 2014 6:55pm
It's a good thing had I someone else's eyes
to do that with then becuz I can't see worth spit! lol
jk... Anyways, appreciate n thank u my dear friend :)
to do that with then becuz I can't see worth spit! lol
jk... Anyways, appreciate n thank u my dear friend :)
23rd Sep 2014 6:20pm
23rd Sep 2014 6:56pm
23rd Sep 2014 9:42pm
It is so precious to 'sparkle' in the eyes of a beloved person. Means you radiate because of his love. That's so beautiful, Poe!
24th Sep 2014 12:27pm
Aaawww THAT was like a lil poem! I liked it, n definitely
liked that you liked this... :) truly honored n grateful my dear :)
liked that you liked this... :) truly honored n grateful my dear :)
24th Sep 2014 5:45am
You never cease to amaze. To love, to breathe, to bring life to this diamond in the raw.
24th Sep 2014 12:29pm
C'mere n let me get big ole hug! Thank you so much my
sweet friend, I'm humbled n forever grateful for your support! :)
sweet friend, I'm humbled n forever grateful for your support! :)
24th Sep 2014 5:48am
You romantic you ! What is it about the wrong stuff being so right A diamond in the rough I hear that Po)))))
Hugs
Broomie
Hugs
Broomie
24th Sep 2014 12:50pm
Aaaawww Broomie! I am so happy you felt this piece
n yea, what is it indeed? lol thank you, truly appreciate
you my sweetness :)
n yea, what is it indeed? lol thank you, truly appreciate
you my sweetness :)
Anonymous
26th Sep 2014 1:59pm
clever work, a love poem that shows real depth without being cliche and corny with a side of mush is refreshing. shine on :)
26th Sep 2014 2:45pm
Ah my beauty by now you must know
I hate being cliche' lol
I'm happy you liked my outside the norm.
twist on this inking! :) thank u muchly
my sweetie :)
I hate being cliche' lol
I'm happy you liked my outside the norm.
twist on this inking! :) thank u muchly
my sweetie :)
29th Sep 2014 7:23pm
29th Sep 2014 9:32pm
