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The Situation Re Edit
Let me whisper this to you,
Just so you understand
The situation.
Before you switch on the television
I feel duty bound to inform you..
show for you..
It's lace,
Underneath,
as you can now see,
I have been..
Very
Very
Naughty..
Just so you understand.
Just so you understand
The situation.
Before you switch on the television
I feel duty bound to inform you..
show for you..
It's lace,
Underneath,
as you can now see,
I have been..
Very
Very
Naughty..
Just so you understand.
Published 15th Sep 2014
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15th Sep 2014 6:59am
I'd say some much more aggressive prime-time activity is in order...the remote plummets to the street below in tandem with the lace falling to the floor ;)
15th Sep 2014 8:26am
Yes that's the desired effect id be looking for from him
if I've been naughty id expect his attention
lessons to relearn i guess
if I've been naughty id expect his attention
lessons to relearn i guess
Anonymous
15th Sep 2014 7:40am
Ooo, good stuff. Easily sucked me in.
15th Sep 2014 8:27am
Glad it sucked you in
It was the lace part wasn't it..
that got you sucked in xD
It was the lace part wasn't it..
that got you sucked in xD
Anonymous
15th Sep 2014 3:10pm
Rose,
Looks like your 'situation' trumps the remote for sure! Your visual media being the Hot news of the night. Yes, it was the lace....lOL!!!
tornado
Looks like your 'situation' trumps the remote for sure! Your visual media being the Hot news of the night. Yes, it was the lace....lOL!!!
tornado
15th Sep 2014 4:49pm
Ty Tornado
I was quite my the naughty girl
in that situation
especially naughty given the soccer was about to start
a moment if hesitation from him
till he saw the lace
a momentary lapse
as i explained my naughtiness in quite graphic detail
thankfully he was on hand to administer a suitable
punishment that agreed most desirably for both of us.
I was quite my the naughty girl
in that situation
especially naughty given the soccer was about to start
a moment if hesitation from him
till he saw the lace
a momentary lapse
as i explained my naughtiness in quite graphic detail
thankfully he was on hand to administer a suitable
punishment that agreed most desirably for both of us.
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