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A Poet's Poet...
A Poet’s poet...
don’t act like
you don’t know it...
when they
see you
do things
within a line
most seem to say
when they find...
those pennings
they made it look
so easy, it's like a crime...
the poet's poet
takes their reader's to a place
in the spaces provided
they can't hide it
those with idle minds
traveling, trying to keep up
with the pace, yet
get lost in space... and time
a maker of writes
like 'jewels' it’s polished
and often it does shine...
but a poet's poet
won’t want to waste your time...
a speaker of words
meant to instill knowledge
unheard-flowing out n'
in form,
free verse, and rhyme
and still more from the quill
'spill feel' within their spoken word
it's fodder if it doesn't matter
but either way,
you're still sure
to get your fill...
don’t act like
you don’t know it...
when they
see you
do things
within a line
most seem to say
when they find...
those pennings
they made it look
so easy, it's like a crime...
the poet's poet
takes their reader's to a place
in the spaces provided
they can't hide it
those with idle minds
traveling, trying to keep up
with the pace, yet
get lost in space... and time
a maker of writes
like 'jewels' it’s polished
and often it does shine...
but a poet's poet
won’t want to waste your time...
a speaker of words
meant to instill knowledge
unheard-flowing out n'
in form,
free verse, and rhyme
and still more from the quill
'spill feel' within their spoken word
it's fodder if it doesn't matter
but either way,
you're still sure
to get your fill...
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Re: A Poet's Poet...
9th Sep 2014 6:09am
But a poet's poet won't want to waste your time...
I like that line. For me, it touched on perfection-or being critical of one's own work.
Nice.
I like that line. For me, it touched on perfection-or being critical of one's own work.
Nice.
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re: Re: A Poet's Poet...
9th Sep 2014 6:23am
Thank u... It's my way of paying homage
to those who pen with their heart n souls...
Appreciate ur thoughts n time :)
to those who pen with their heart n souls...
Appreciate ur thoughts n time :)
Re: A Poet's Poet...
9th Sep 2014 7:39am
It's so easy, it's like a Crime- Fav Line!!
Bro. I felt this piece Man!!
Awesome tribute too those who Ink Well!!
Love the read!
Off the chain write!!
Sir Lancelott
Bro. I felt this piece Man!!
Awesome tribute too those who Ink Well!!
Love the read!
Off the chain write!!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: A Poet's Poet...
9th Sep 2014 11:08am
My man, I'm happy you enjoyed...
You nailed it! It's indeed my tip O Da hat
to those Poets that, get my soul to sing...
So you most def. Are included! Thanks a ton bro.
You nailed it! It's indeed my tip O Da hat
to those Poets that, get my soul to sing...
So you most def. Are included! Thanks a ton bro.
Re: A Poet's Poet...
9th Sep 2014 8:35am
i hope you're including yourself in this homage PM...because you should be...no ifs no buts... :) x
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re: Re: A Poet's Poet...
9th Sep 2014 11:31am
Huh? But but bbutt... What if?... Lmao
Sorry could help myself! lol... Nah
seriously, I'm givin out kudos to
all I admire, just thought THIS way
was simpler than naming names
believing THEY to whom I refer
MUST know it :) I let others decide
whether they think I'm decent, not
myself :) thank you my sweetie
for YOU r included for sure :)
Sorry could help myself! lol... Nah
seriously, I'm givin out kudos to
all I admire, just thought THIS way
was simpler than naming names
believing THEY to whom I refer
MUST know it :) I let others decide
whether they think I'm decent, not
myself :) thank you my sweetie
for YOU r included for sure :)
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9th Sep 2014 1:25pm
you are such a talented talented man....
and i can see by the comments you got that we all believe in you and your talent....
i love your latest artpiece you have as your avatar... :) x
and i can see by the comments you got that we all believe in you and your talent....
i love your latest artpiece you have as your avatar... :) x
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9th Sep 2014 2:34pm
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9th Sep 2014 8:36am
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9th Sep 2014 11:33am
Ha! Funny you'd say that! read above
for rebuttal lol... yet YOU r certainly my dear!
thank u for all ur support always :)
for rebuttal lol... yet YOU r certainly my dear!
thank u for all ur support always :)
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9th Sep 2014 12:31pm
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Re: A Poet's Poet...
9th Sep 2014 9:19am
Erotic ninja, luv :-* ~
I see how you are writing about yourself... ;-p
You DO know I rather adore you and that incredible mind of yours, don't you, you literary genius, you? :-*
Write on, brilliant one...
I see how you are writing about yourself... ;-p
You DO know I rather adore you and that incredible mind of yours, don't you, you literary genius, you? :-*
Write on, brilliant one...
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re: Re: A Poet's Poet...
9th Sep 2014 11:36am
Aaaawwww gosh gill gee wow! lol
Well in reference to this piece' subject
This could've easily have been ALL bout you
lady with the WOW that leaks from ur pen!
lol alas, I have to admit it's inclusive to many
who I admire here :)... Thank u times a million
my sweet n talented one! :)
Well in reference to this piece' subject
This could've easily have been ALL bout you
lady with the WOW that leaks from ur pen!
lol alas, I have to admit it's inclusive to many
who I admire here :)... Thank u times a million
my sweet n talented one! :)
Re: A Poet's Poet...
9th Sep 2014 3:19pm
Po, Me likes this mooocho!!!!
Enjoyed my friend, loving the sentiment too!
Broomie Xoxo
Enjoyed my friend, loving the sentiment too!
Broomie Xoxo
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re: Re: A Poet's Poet...
9th Sep 2014 5:08pm
Well I'm glad u liked, ur most assuredly included! :) thank u my sweet one, appreciate u mucho! lol
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9th Sep 2014 3:40pm
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9th Sep 2014 5:09pm
Thank u my dear, U as well always leave me inspired
so take a bow... :) grateful to u always for ur support :)
so take a bow... :) grateful to u always for ur support :)
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9th Sep 2014 11:23pm
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9th Sep 2014 11:47pm
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10th Sep 2014 00:04am
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10th Sep 2014 00:21am
Aaaawww my sweet n powerful 'Chi' ( chi-get it? lol)
How wonderful you are to me... N yes, I have had ur
poetic essence in mind as well with this... :) thank u
Always n forever my dear :)
How wonderful you are to me... N yes, I have had ur
poetic essence in mind as well with this... :) thank u
Always n forever my dear :)
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10th Sep 2014 00:30am
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10th Sep 2014 3:21am
This is dope, I have said it before.... Your style is so cool. Nothin but flow,
crystal breeze
What you breath
Compressed with style
Spitten diamonds
For us to read
Poetik MC
crystal breeze
What you breath
Compressed with style
Spitten diamonds
For us to read
Poetik MC
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re: Re: A Poet's Poet...
10th Sep 2014 4:25am
A.S. My man, considering how very smooth your flow is
I feel highly honored n deeply indebted by your support...truly, thank you... :)
I feel highly honored n deeply indebted by your support...truly, thank you... :)
Re: A Poet's Poet...
10th Sep 2014 3:31pm
ink so slick, you should be arrested... wanna take my handcuffs for a spin [?]
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oops. did i just say that lol
much enjoyed Poe
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oops. did i just say that lol
much enjoyed Poe
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re: Re: A Poet's Poet...
10th Sep 2014 7:11pm
WOW yup u did!! N swelled my ego to planet size! lol
N hell yea to ur question, to channel
Lil' Wayne's hit...Miss Officer "baby you Da law
n u know I got high..." Especially with such an amazing comment! lol... Mucho Gracias Mami! lol
N hell yea to ur question, to channel
Lil' Wayne's hit...Miss Officer "baby you Da law
n u know I got high..." Especially with such an amazing comment! lol... Mucho Gracias Mami! lol
Re: A Poet's Poet...
10th Sep 2014 11:42pm
You are too precious my friend. You're one of the poets here I admire so very much. Kindness never fails your pen. Talent can't compare with anyone else nor your luving heart. Your avatar pic is amazing. Honored you stop by my page and share a smile with me. Thank you! Xo :)
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re: Re: A Poet's Poet...
11th Sep 2014 3:36am
Aaaawwww Flower, u too damn sweet for words! Muah! :)
thank you my friend, always I'm humbled n grateful
for your support :)
thank you my friend, always I'm humbled n grateful
for your support :)