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Her hair was up in a ponytail
Her favorite dress tied with a bow.
She wanted to look her best
It would be her first show
Her nerves turning her insides out
This is something she must do
Her kids need food and some school shoes
She sips some congnac
Easing her nerves
She looks out to the audience
She wants to hurl
Men and women smelling of booze and cigars
There all over each other
Oh my god
Why did life take me to such a place
A strip club with men and women
Lusting over a pretty face
Throwing dollars sometimes more
Just to see my goodies? Damn I feel like a whore
I just want to feed my kids
Why must I go through such lengths
This bow and dress must come off
I'll throw on a trench coat and nothing else
Why waist a pretty dress on such tasteless
Men and women just looking for a fix
I'll just close my eyes do what I must
Feed my kids and forget about this dump
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12th Apr 2011 5:29pm
I am sorry, it feels like I have a compulsive disorder against cute grammatical mistakes lol
1.I'll just clothe(s) my eyes do what I must
2.She sips some cognac
Mellifluous rhythm in a simple sad verse, which I admire in this.
1.I'll just clothe(s) my eyes do what I must
2.She sips some cognac
Mellifluous rhythm in a simple sad verse, which I admire in this.
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Your new you don't know yet I'm dyslexic so my grammor will never be 100% but people love to point that out and that's ok I know my truth lol.. Thanx for the read if you want to fix my miss spellings be my guest
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12th Apr 2011 5:44pm
I am sorry, its just that they nag at the back of my mind when I try to enjoy a work of art just like the dyslexia..Sorry once again. Your fine piece should not be crowded with lesser significant observations.
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12th Apr 2011 5:50pm
I know I'm just to lazy to go on my computer and do it the right way.. I'm on a phone so I tend to miss spell more when I post from my phone..
No harm nor foul
Ps I caught the dyslexia miss spell before you posted that lol
No harm nor foul
Ps I caught the dyslexia miss spell before you posted that lol
DYSLEXIA IS
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12th Apr 2011 5:45pm
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12th Apr 2011 8:33pm
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12th Apr 2011 8:40pm
:)
12th Apr 2011 5:49pm
Amazing poem GG..I loved it..such a beautifully touching poem..peace Crim :)
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A great......
....piece on life's exploitation. The disgrace of the task yet the determination to persevere. Your madonna persona comes through in this work.
Another great write Gg. You are becoming quite consistant.
Another great write Gg. You are becoming quite consistant.
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12th Apr 2011 6:06pm
doc
12th Apr 2011 6:55pm
uhm doc this wasnt under erotic so i read it,dont hate me! it was really good but a question emerged in my mind. your smart so i think you know what it is........^.^
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12th Apr 2011 8:41pm
XD Nice.
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13th Apr 2011 5:42am
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re: XD Nice.
13th Apr 2011 5:46am
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13th Apr 2011 6:05am
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13th Apr 2011 6:15am
Haha I think I would pay to see you in a dress let's do it I get half the cut :) Ty again